Case Study Five: The Final Case Study


Welcome to the Final Case Study, Case Study Five!!!

Week of May 9th

May 9, 2011 (Monday)

I’m really sorry. I mean, I really should have started blogging every since Monday of the Week of May 2nd, when we first really started this project, but I have a good excuse: procrastination is human progress, and so I guess it’s okay. Fine, I’m just kidding. I’m really sorry.

Basically, I haven’t done much today at class at all, because right after I finished typing all this, the bell rang. But, I’ll start telling you about my progress, what I’ve done a few days ago, and what I plan to do the few days ahead.

So, this week I plan to accomplish a few things: first, I want to finish all the research procedures necessary. Second of all, I want to have all the necessary procedures for the interviews and the outlines for the documentary & op-ed ready. In fact, I want the infographic to be completed by this week. But first, I have to get the research done, which is what I will be doing.

May 10, 2011 (Tuesday)

Originally planned for today is finishing the Op-Ed, but I have EXTREMELY BAD NEWS FOR YOU. I AM SUPER UNDER PRESSURE. First of all, I don’t have my Op-Ed planned out, nor my research started. I don’t have my ideas generated for my infographic and documentary. There are really three words that can describe my situation. I am doomed.

Really, I probably shouldn’t be typing all this, but I promised to keep a blog post everyday I do something related to my final case study, so here it is. I guess I should first get an outline for how to write an op-ed. So, to prepare myself, I subscribed myself to at least 10 famous American magazines or newspapers’ newsletters, and now my email inbox has around 1087 unread mail. (as of when I was typing this)

So, I searched Google, and got a series of very good and informative websites, including but not limited to:

While listening to other people putting on music, I start to have this feeling of self-pity. It’s hard to explain. I guess it’s because of music.

May 29 (A day before due date)

Okay. Blogging idea was a total fail. Below are the artifacts:

THE DOCUMENTARY

(can’t upload because it’s a series of interviews/videos)

THE INFOGRAPHIC

For my infographic, I decided to not include facts because they are not inspirational; rather,  I decided to get a little more creative and use a video game as a model to explain it. Here. Let me explain my infographic:

Stage one: Start Game

Stage Two:Select a Player

Stage Three: More Information

Afraid that people might not necessarily be able to see the words I’ve written”inside” the brain, I decide to type the things out here:

First, for the red side of the brain:

– Economic growth of East Asian Five Dragons: Hong Kong, Japan, Singapore, Korea, and Taiwan gives education more societal support.

– Highest percentage of GDP on education (S Korea in 2003)

– students walk or take public transportation to school

– Students clean their own schools and mother volunteer as cafeteria staff.

– When problems arise, Asian parents ally with the teacher, placing responsibility on the kid. Asian parents engage students in learning and support their schools. East Asian children have desks in their houses where their parents sit with them during  a scheduled daily homework period.

– Homework is crucial in Eastern Asian schools. Textbooks are, therefore, lightweight. Students can also write or highlight text in the textbooks.

–  Children respond to parents’ personal sacrifice. They understand parents’ expectations, study hard to avoid a guilty conscience or disgrace.

– The teacher is considered as the master. Parent as the motivator and facilitator. And students are the diligent learners.

– According to Eastern Asian education, strong work ethic and devotion to learning is greater than an inherently gifted mind. Good grades come from hard work, effort, diligence, endurance, perseverance, and persistence.

– Cram school culture. After homework, 16 hours a day on school-related work, including school hours.

– For international assessments of mathematics and science, East Asian students tend to outperform American ones.

– They are cheerful, enthusiastic, vigorous, and responsive.

– Teachers are highly respected, never contradicted, and initiate communication. Students speak if necessary.

– Nationalized, uniform curriculum and assessment by a centralized national board of directors in education.

– Competition

Now, for the blue side:

– When students don’t understand something, they are discouraged from interrupting the educator.

– Asian society is tightly organized, collectivistic, hierarchical, and face-conscious. Therefore, it is harder for Asians to act, feel, and think creatively.

– Emphasis on education causes extreme competition, work-play dichotomy, and devaluation of play.

– The family systems and rigid parent-child relationships overemphasize obedience, filial piety, and loyalty.

– Benevolence suppresses emotion, value of humility, silence ethic, comformity, and eccentricity.

– Hierarchical relationships inhibit creativity (unequal relationships, gender role expectations, rigid social structure, and authoritarian student-teacher relationships.

– Group psychology

– Avoid conflicts

– Education as  a means of socialization.

– large class sizes.

– Repetition and memorization.

– Worksheets

– Less discussion with pears, less interaction, teacher-centered environment. It prohibits the opportunity to argue, discuss, and suggest, which foster more complex thought.

– Examination hell

– Goal of schooling is to prepare students to pass exams.

Now, for the right side of the brain:

– Less pressure

– More motivation for students to pursue their own interests

– More leisurely

– Creative and Curious

– an individualistic society

– Loosely organmized, individualized, eglitarian, and has a positive outlook in conlict

– Democratic exchange of opinion

– The Whole Person Concept

– Smaller class sizes

– More discussions with pears and interaction. Students are encouraged to argue, discuss, and suggest to each other.

– Place huge emphasis on critical thinking, logical reasoning, inquiry skills, and creative approaches to problem solving.

– Each teacher is flexible and bends the curriculum to fit the students’ needs.

– Homework is less just repetition and memorization.

Now, for the blue side:

– 30% of the prison population is high school dropouts. US taxpayers spend more money feeding and housing  a prisoner than successfully educating a prospective tax-paying citizen.

– The money is used for maintenance, transportation, lunch, and custodians.

– Score lower on international math and science assessments.

– US educators think Japanese students are under terrible pressure, and commit suicide at alarming rates. However, among school-age Japanese students, suicide is about one half of that of the US and is decreasing.

– Teachers are undervalued in the United States. Because of insufficient funding, educators spend from their own limited salaries for supplies and teaching necessities.

– Current US concern about teacher shortages and quality of the teaching force. Policy makers should look carefully at the lack of incentives.

– Underappreciation and low pay

– Locally controlled education

– In public schools, American teachers say parents are indifferent about discipline and planning for their children’s’ future. When problems arise, American parents tend to question the effectiveness of their school or teachers.

– American parents resist the idea that students should do homework constantly. Many teachers don’t give regular homework assignments.

– Textbooks are big, heavy, and hard cover, which is expensive to transport or make notes in.

Stage Four:Choose a Setting

Stage Five: Classroom

Stage Six: Classroom-Special Abilities

Stage Seven:Courts

Stage Eight:Courts – Special Abilities

Stage Nine: Competition (Individual)

Stage Ten: Competition (Team)

Stage Eleven: Game Over

THE OP-ED ARTICLE:

A Fight for Our Future

By Tracy Kao

If I weren’t as unsatisfied and displeased as I am now, I probably would have done my final Humanities school year project on global issues such as the Global Financial Crisis, the disparity between the rich and the poor in Taiwan, or even just the taxing problems around the world. But no, I was displeased with my life, still am, and I want to make sure I get as many people as I can to know about it, disregarding whether they want to know it or not.

I’m an American Asian, if that makes any sense. I was born in the United States, but after a year or so, I moved back to Taiwan, where I lived for the rest of my life, even til now. Yes, like all the other Asian kids at my school, the Kaohsiung American School, we are always proud to say that we are “A-sian.” In fact, we don’t just claim we’re Asian-all-the-way; we try to live the “Asian” way by going for the best in our class in areas such as English, Mathematics, and Science. That’s why there’s a lot of competition going on. Ever since our school adopted the IB programme, students have been put under even more pressure. The school has also enlisted more teachers, most of them experienced with the IB Diploma’s requirements. It has certainly been an extremely busy year for our school, since it was our first year of implementing the IB diploma to our school system.

But, as we all know, being hasty and being busy will lead to a lot of problems, such as the lack of quality. Our school is facing similar problems. I believe that since we are an American school in an Asian country, we should be getting the “best of both worlds,” a happy medium. I still don’t see this happening, and that is exactly the reason why I chose this topic for my op-ed.

Below is an infographic comparing the TIMSS scores of various countries in 2007 and their progresses from a few years back. Taiwan was among the top three, even ranking first in math in 2007. This is a wonderful achievement, but don’t get your spirits up just yet, people. That’s the score of the local Taiwanese, the ones that win silver medals in Olympiads; not the American Taiwanese that study at international schools. I don’t mean to make it seem like I want everyone in our school to end up ranking first in all the national competitions, since I understand that people have different interests they want to pursue, different career paths they want to take. However, since we are paying so much more for this kind of education compared to the people who study at local schools, also having less learning hours, we should be getting at least twice what students at local schools get.

There are several problems with our system. First is our system. Personally, I felt that the jump from elementary school to middle school was too big. The curriculum was a lot more difficult in middle school, and I don’t think the solution is to make middle school less rigorous. I think that the upper middle school should  be more challenged academically. They are all very bright individuals, and they should be able to handle the things well. Another main problem with curriculum that I have for students of the upper and higher educational divisions is with the textbooks. First of all, I think that textbooks are totally necessary. I don’t like killing trees, but I think that we don’t have to kill even more trees with the luxurious hard covers. In fact, because they are hard-cover, they are hard to carry. Why not, like the local schools, adopt the curriculum where the school provides students with books that they can write notes and diagrams in? Furthermore, for subjects like math and science, just put the homework into the textbook. I think teachers can consider having students read certain sections or chapters as homework, do the questions, and when they arrive at class the next day, the teacher can use the other materials that they want to teach with to teach. That way, the students don’t miss the fundamentals, plus the teachers get to use more creative methods to educate the kids. That’s a great win-win, no?

Because most of the student who are enrolled at this school are expected to reach high grounds in the future, I think people should be prepared for it. Scientist-to-be’s should receive science-concentrated courses, and future musicians should, in turn, get more experience and depth regarding music. Of course, I understand that a liberal art learning is important, especially with such an unpredictable future, but I believe that in today’s world, quality is often looked upon as worth more than quantity.

Besides these suggestions, I believe that our student body can do a lot more as well. As for clubs and other forms of student government, they can involve more people outside our school and help with building our school’s public relations. But before we begin that, we have to build our own student-student relationships. Student government should take into account the various student needs, and the students should pay back as well. They should be committed to whatever they join, and they will have to be passionate about it, too. A system based on merit is the best.

I also believe that a lot of school expenses can be spent on improving facilities if we have students and parents volunteer or (if necessary, forced >:D) to help with the work. That way, we can work as janitors ourselves. First of all, we understand and empathize with those that have to work harder than us. Since most of the students are from wealthy business owners, they will most likely inherit a trade or start a business of their own. In the future, they will have to care for people who work under them, and understanding those people is the best way to build reliable relationships. Furthermore, students learn to be responsible for what they do. They also gain a lot of useful experience that may come in handy some day. However, I guess the most important benefit is being able to cut down budgets. That way, students don’t have to face the increasing tuition each year or even just donate the money to the people who are really in need.

As we can see, there are still a lot of improvements that we can bring to our school, our current educational system. It is still improving, and I can see it headed for a great place. I also see students and alumni going to higher grounds, doing wonderful, admirable things. I want to become like them as well, even beyond what they’ve done. I want to set a record, and I believe a lot of other people want to have their name remembered in their school history as well. Therefore, I propose this plan. Let’s just see whether we can all do it!

ROD EDUCATION RATES Education Rankings by Country

What I Was Gonna Say Originally For My Presentation:

Good afternoon, Ladies and Gentlemen. My name is Tracy Kao, ninth grade student from this school, and today, I’m going to present to you some ideas about changing the way our school functions.

Recently, our school has gone through great renovations: first is the adoption of the IB system. Though I fear it, I must say I admire it. The IB system is challenging, at the same time encouraging and potentially enjoyable. I think it prepares students for further education well. Then, it’s the reconstruction of our building as well as adding others. We will be having a new front gate soon, the cafeteria will be moved to a more convenient and scenic place, and plans for the gym and science labs will soon be laid out. I’m sure after a few more years, Kaohsiung American School will rise to great heights. The students here are also very bright. This year, our seniors have graduated to several top colleges or universities, and each year they continue to make the whole community proud.

These are all the reasons why I want to bring change to our school system. I want opportunities for students. I want them to get the most out of the school and reach their potentials. These are things I care about, things I want you to care about, too. Therefore, I hope you will hear my plans.

First of all, before I begin the important parts of this presentation, I need to say, first, that a lot of ideas and concepts in my presentation are generalized, but to make my points, please bear with me.

So, first off. What is education. How can we define education? Well, when we really want to know about a word’s definition, we dictionary.com it, right? So, I after I did that I got the response displayed here. As we can see, key words are knowledge, reason and judgment, and intellectually for mature life. That seems to suggest that education is empowering a person by allowing them to impact the world by thinking and expressing their ideas. That’s a really nice definition, but a definition for education is very important if we want to lay down a GOOD education. Many of the people I interviewed stressed another important point on the defining a good education. They emphasized the “Whole Person Concept,” the concept of making a student a better person by improving his or her personality. The teaching of moral education is something practical that is important in our life. That’s why I chose this quote by CS Lewis which I really liked to show to you.

I am going to re-introduce a famous, popular debate from a few months ago.

That is the more aggressive “Tiger Mom” approach to educating kids versus the

Less intimidating western educational methods. For my infographic and parts of my interviews, I wanted to learn more about various people’s reactions to it. I’m sure you all know about the debate. It really started to heat up when Amy Chua published her WSJ article “Why Chinese Mothers are Superior.” Other people started to get really angry at her. She had written a book called Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother. Seeing the effectiveness of her quite extreme methods of getting her children a good future, the curious I decided to buy the book and read it.

Even common sense can help us look at the advantages and disadvantages of eastern and western education, so I won’t talk much about this. But, the most important difference between east asian and western education is that East Asian moms tend to push for the child’s maximum potential by competition and forcing the child to work extra hard. However, the direct feedback could hurt a sensitive kid.

As for Western moms, they believe in inspiring and encouraging their children to pursue their own interests. However, with first hand experience myself, when you’re given freedom, sometimes it’s hard getting used to it, thus you need some intimidation to motivate you to work hard.

This is the story I would like to present to you, though all of you who’ve probably read the WSJ article know. This is Amy Chua educating her daughters. First off, her daughters weren’t, at least at first, to do any of the following. She let her eldest daughter, Sophia, learn the piano and her younger daughter, Lulu, learn the violin. She was extremely strict in their practicing. She chose the Suzuki method, which was when the parents “learn with their students” during class by listening to the teacher’s instructions, and during the outside of class practice times, the parents drill the music with the kids based on the notes they took. Lulu brought her violin to practice when they went on “vacations” to other countries, and Sophia would have to practice or perform at the hotels they were staying at. One interesting anecdote provided by Amy Chua during her interviews was that once Lulu didn’t get a really good grade in math, and said she hated math. But then Ms. Chua drilled practice tests and exercises with Lulu. She scored really well on her next class, and her classmates called her a “Math Wiz.” According to Ms. Chua, Lulu started loving math after that. During interviews with Sophia and Lulu, both said that her mother’s harsh methods were actually beneficial to them. As we can see, intimidation, strictness, and the “practice makes perfect” mentality can be a key to success.

But, of course there are some responses to her book that disagree with her. Yong Zhao works at the University of Oregon, he wrote several books regarding education, and in his blog post, he admitted that some of the methods were effective, but others were exaggerated. Several other Chinese parents also showed that they wanted to move away from the stereotype that they educated their kids the harsher way, and looked for more creative methods.

Ayelet Waldman, a photo of which I showed you earlier, wrote a response to Amy Chua’s article in the WSJ. She points out that a lot of what Ms. Chua did was unnecessary, that the most important part was for the child to learn to face challenges themselves, to want to learn themselves.

I want to apply this to our country, our school. We are Kaohsiung American School. An American School located in Taiwan. Taiwan, like a lot of other East Asian cultures, emphasizes education. Just by looking at these charts, which are the TIMSS Trends in International Math and Science studies that take place every four years, we are top two for sure. In Math, we ranked first as well. We can see that Asian cultures flourish in the math and sciences while the United States was near the middle. This is an issue, because the United States has some of the best colleges in the world, and education should be flourishing there. Some people doubt standardized tests more than they probably should. The actual testing is a complicated process with large samples and several field tests. I looked through the schedules for this year’s TIMSS, and it sure was complicated.

I decided to give the questions a try. On the website, there is a game that lets users select sample questions that appeared on the TIMSS or other international standardized assessments. I tried it, and it was really nice. I wanted to put a video up, but there was something wrong with it, so I just put up a snapshot. After you answer the questions, you can see the percentage correct and percentage incorrect by various countries or, for some questions, regions within the United States. I was really interesting, because the Scandinavian and East Asian countries scored the highest percentages, up to around 95%. So that’s just a little something you may be interested in.

Now, for the most important part, presenting the problems and solutions. As we could see from the TIMSS scores itself, there seems to be a lot more emphasis on science and math. Alex Lay calculated the number of hours of certain subjects in his presentation and turns out that while math and science have around 6 or 7, art has 1, PE has 2. The solution isn’t to decrease hours or increase hours. I think we should have these “concentration” that are popular in some American schools and very popular in Taiwan. First of all, what do I mean by concentration? It means subject-based. If you are interested in science, then you can choose to do the science-intensive class where, for example, 5 or 6 of your classes are science and math related, often going more in depth, like the East Asian style. That way they can pursue their own interests by choosing something they want to be professional in. Of course, people often say: what about the others, people who don’t know what they are interested in? Well, liberal arts is an important concept, and being well-rounded has always been a trait greatly admired. If so, students can just take the normal class like the ones we take now. Why do you think students go to cram school so much? It’s probably because they want to learn more faster. Well, it should be a school that’s educating the kids, since the purpose of schools is for education, so why shouldn’t the school be doing that job that a cram school does?

The second issue I want to go into is related to the previous. It’s with cutting down costs. I wrote textbooks. Why is there so much the against textbooks? People say that lectures and textbooks are old fashioned and that videos are the present. However, I believe that we should combine both. Textbooks that can be written on and drawn on should be read and exercise questions done as homework at home. When students go to school, they know the fundamentals. The teacher can then add or review what he or she wants to based on what he or she believes students should learn. It’s just like a win-win situation. Students that don’t understand certain materials can think about it during class and ask questions. My second part is about volunteering. It’s not just from parents. If students learn to be more responsible by earning hours helping our janitors cleaning the buildings, their classrooms, etc., I think it will be beneficial for them in the long run, plus they get the exercise. They’ll understand what real back-breaking work is.

My third issue is giving teachers an incentive to teach. I’m sure that the teachers face a lot of restraints facing teaching students. Being in a foreign country, with limited experience about local supplies is something many of our teachers face………more motivation….BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH….

Let’s not just be an All-American school in Asia. Let’s be Asi-merican.

Reflections

Today was the last day of presentations, and I had the honor of being the last presentation to be done, signifying the end of the Humanities finals. 🙂

There were a few presentations that really stood out for me: first was Daniel Chen’s presentation on sleep. It was really interesting because I not too long ago I read an article talking about many Japanese people who skip eating breakfast because they don’t sleep enough. I really enjoyed his presentation because the message was simple: sleep more because it actually helps you. I find the topic very relevant to my life because this year was the year in which I slept the least compared to all the years before. My record was around one hour of sleep. Maybe I should try the footed pajamas. They might help, but the temperature recently is too hot for that. Maybe redesigning my bed room to that princess bed?…no. I’d probably break that fragile looking thing. The message I got from Daniel is that sleep is being underrated and that it is more important than we think.

The second presentation that I really like was Peter’s really interesting presentation on manga. Called an “otaku” by my parents and a manga fanatic myself, manga was and still is a large part of my life. However, Peter is correct in saying that Taiwanese manga is not as popular and well-known. There are only those few manga that several people read: Bleach, One-Piece, The Black Butler, Fairy Tail, Naruto, and several others.  However, I remember once seeing on the news that another really popular manga was drawn by a Taiwanese and that the author is making a lot of money doing it. Taiwanese culture, like several Japanese, is very “otaku” style and people often spend a lot of times in Internet Cafes playing online games. Those same people are fans of manga and anime. In fact, like the several other Asian countries, we have a TV channel dedicated to anime called Animax (channel 76). Yes, manga and anime is a large part of Japanese and Taiwanese culture. The message I got from Peter is that Taiwanese manga is less popular than it should be and people should feel more free to create and draw manga as they like.

My third presentation that I really like was related to Peter’s. It was Kaho’s on Japanese culture. First off, before I went into the Korean culture frenzy, it was with Japanese culture. Again, I LOVE anime and manga, old and new. I am learning Japanese myself, and have always found Japanese culture to be really interesting because the younger generation and the older generation are so different. The kimono traditional clothing with the formal tea ceremonies of the older generation compared to the Cosplay of the youngsters that you can see everywhere around the cities in Japan — wow. It’s crazy. Furthermore, Japanese culture is influencing people everywhere. People in Taiwan are starting to Cosplay a lot as well. In the Hsin Chueh Chiang shopping area (by Central Park Station), there is a whole street dedicated to that, and whenever you walk by, you can see shops that sell those Japanese clothing, as well as girls in anime or manga characters with huge make up on. Also, I love Japanese food. My whole family loves Japanese food because it’s not greasy or oily. It’s just right. It’s spiced where it needs to be yet bland(in a positive way) where necessary. Kaho’s message in her presentation was that the Japanese lifestyle is key to their unique culture and longevity.

The fourth presentation I really liked was Kelly’s Hawaii presentation. A glutton, I loved the nuts and the pineapple. In fact, in Taiwan it’s the pineapple season, the time of the year where the pineapples don’t scratch your tongue. They are DELICIOUS. Furthermore, during the first semester I’ve done projects related to Hawaiian in another class, so all the information is coming back to me. When I was in fifth grade, a teacher encouraged some of the students to perform Hawaiian dancing in front of the other students. I was one of them, and I was in a pretty conservative Catholic school during that time, the students more conservative than the teachers, and to us during that time, dancing the Hawaiian dance was like performing a Lady Gaga dance. It took a lot of courage, so Hawaii and its culture has special meaning in my life. In Kelly’s presentation, I really loved the learning how to dance to Hawaiian. It was kind of different from the one we danced to, but the steps were similar. The message I received from Kelly’s intriguing presentation is that Hawaii is a very interesting country with unique culture worth learning more about.

Those four were the presentations I saw that stood out to me. I figured that, actually, there can be simpler, easier, more effective ways that I can spread my message. Instead, I blindly looked the other way and did it way too complicatedly, and instead my audience probably didn’t understand a word I said. I probably should have involved the audience more, and think outside of the idea that it is a “presentation.” I should have thought of it as a workshop, an activity to make others feel the same way you do.

Before, I didn’t really know why we had to do so many different activities like these projects, but after seeing Mr. Kinzer’s presentation, especially after that poem he mentioned, I was enlightened. Though because of this year I’ve become more lax, I have also become more open to creative methods. I started to dare to approach another edge. Thanks Mr. Kinzer and Mrs. Kinzer. Though it took me a whole year to realize it, thanks for inspiring me to actually try hard to be creative.

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Case Study 4: Africa in the 19th Century


Case Study Four is Africa in the 19th Century

WEEK I: February 28

Reading:

Student-written essays on 19th Century European Economics

General History of Africa: Volume VI-Chapters 1 – 4 (in class)

Homework:

1)Make at least 1 insightful and creative post on your portfolio demonstrating your understanding and opinions on African development in the 19th century.

2)Post your essay on the past, present, and future of Economics on your Portfolio by midnight, Wednesday, 3/2. (Note: This is filed under Case Study III)

3) Read at least TWO of your classmates Essays and comment using “How to Write an Essay in Humanities” as a guide. Comments are due by Mon, 3/7.(Note: I commented on Jill Wang and Angela Lin’s essays.)

4) Update World Factbook and TOP Secret Editions of Nation Profile by next Wednesday, 3/9.

Hakuna Matata

After learning about the African terrain, and even more so after watching the trailer for “The Last Lions,” I thought about one of the best old Disney classics and everyone’s favorites, The Lion King.

I went to Youtube and, being that I only remember the first movie, I re-watched the sequel. I realized that one can learn a lot about Africa just by watching the movies. First of all, the names of the characters (E.g. Timon and Pumbaa!!!) reflect the language there. If you check out this link, the Wikipedia page listing the characters in Lion King and look around bit, under each character, they will usually tell you the origin of the name (usually of Swahili origin) and it will also tell you the meaning and how that relates to the character of in the movie. For example, in Lion King II, Kovu’s name means ”Scar” in Kiswahili, and in the movie, Kovu is trying to run away from the revenge that Scar, his father, had wanted him to accomplish. It shows that Kovu is ”the Chosen One,” as Kovu’s mother in the movie says, being forced (with honor) to follow his father’s footsteps. However, in the movie, he decides to defy destiny, and actually ended up happily, the next in line after Simba (his father-in-law, protagonist of the first movie) for future king. In fact, the famous phrase from Lion King I from Timon and Pumbaa–”Hakuna Matata” is Swahili for “There are no worries” or something like that. Plus, the animals really reflect the savanna landscape. Even the soundtrack’s music use the local language and use the “call and response” technique with African drums, which really is used in native African music.

So, the Lion King is really just a mixture between Africa and the Western world, adding a little bit of Disney into it. Even today, I think it’s one of the best movies ever. The Lion King 1, 2, 1and 1/2. Click here for online streaming of Lion King 1.

Here are the Youtube links for the soundtrack songs from Lion King that I think that either are my favorites or reflect African music well:

Hakuna Matata

Circle of Life

I Just Can’t Wait to be King

He Lives in You

We are One

Be Prepared

Lion Sleeps Tonight

(Special note about the picture above: On some browsers the image will not be shown. If so, click on the image. It will bring you to the link. Then, it may say ”Access Forbidden.” If so, click your mouse on the URL bar and press ”Enter”, which will refresh the page. Then, the image should show. Then, all you have to do is click the ”Go Back to Previous Page” button on your browser to come back to my portfolio. If it doesn’t work, then just ignore it, even though it really is a very cool picture.)

Week II: March 7

Reading:

The Hadza:What do they know that we have forgotten?

The Africa Map from National Geographic

Homework:

1. Make at least 1 insightful and creative post relating to your nation in our World Simulation.

2. Make at least 1 insightful and creative post on your portfolio demonstrating your understanding and opinions on Afrifcan development in the 19th century.

3. Revise Essay based on peer comments. DUE Monday, 3/14.

On the Global Crisis Report: The Rainbow Garden and Japan

Recent news has been all about the Japanese twin disaster and man-made catastrophes: the 9.0 earthquake, the tsunami that resulted from it, and the super dangerous nuclear power plant explosion and malfunctioning. It really frightens me how similar it was to our global crisis: the earthquake, the tsunami, and the flood. The volcano is just like the nuclear power plant’s cooling system failing, causing fires and explosions.

Because of that, it starts to make me rethink about our global crisis and realize a few things. First of all, our worlds are too fake. Our countries aren’t real. Nothing in the simulation is good enough to be able to represent the actual world. Nothing is realistic enough. There are too many holes to the situation. There are too many factors that can affect everything.

Thinking about Japan makes me wonder whether our countries are really that safe. In fact, is the real world ready for the situation? According to the news, Taiwan isn’t. According to the news, if such a tsunami occurred in Taiwan, possibly caused by earthquake from the Philippine plate, then Tainan, Pingtung, and Kaohsiung will be flooded…another great disaster for the villages that still haven’t fully recovered from 2009 Typhoon Morakot.

What measures can we take? First of all, many people think that the Japanese citizens dealt with the situation really well, even thought the government was slow to respond. They demonstrated high E.Q. Experts attribute this to the preparedness. Citizens know what to do when things like this happen. In fact, the news shows that there was a movie in Japan (anime) about what life would be like from the perspective of a young girl if there were an earthquake in Tokyo. Click here for a youtube trailer. There are also several trailers from the first link, which is the official movie website. You can also navigate around the site to get more information. It is scary how similar the movie was to reality.

As you can see, the Japanese citizens already have knowledge about survival and how to react to catastrophes like that. That’s why I believe education about practical matters like drills and responses. That’s something that I’d like nations, countries, and cities –no matter real or not–to take measures to minimize damages like these.

The Hadza:

The Hadza is a tribe in Tanzania, Eastern Africa.

Although they are aware of the outside world, their lives are very different from the outside world.

How are the Hadza different from us?

The Hadza are a group of African hunter-gatherers living in Northern Tanzania. The author of the National Geographic’s article on the Hadza, Michael Finkel, went to live with around two dozen Hadza people living “in the bush” around a tourist camp. Their chief is Onwas, perhaps over 60.

There are many ways mentioned in the article in which the Hadza are different from us:

– They live in camps.

– They love eating baboons.

-They have scars all over their body with scars from hunts, snake bites, arrows, knives, scorpions, thorns, baobab trees, and leopard attacks.

-They wear sandals and brown shorts.

– They remove their shirts at night to blend in.

– Their native language, Hadzane, is very bipolar, full of clicks and pops.

– Fairly isolated from the rest of the world. Onwas only heard of London, which he knows as somewhere outside of the bush.

-They don’t keep track fo time. (Hadzane does not have words for numbers past three or four)

– They look at the stages of the moon to determine time.

– They regularly sneak up to leopards, and race after giraffes

They are familiar with the landscape, marked by the challenging thornbushes and spiked acacia trees, and lions, leopards, and hyenas prowling here and there.

– Onwas can start a fire by twirling a stick between his palms in less than 30 seconds.

– Onwas can converse with a honeyguide bird to find honey(beehive).

-No crops, no livestock, no permanent shelters. They maintain this kind of lifestyle despite being aware of the domestication going around them.

– One of the primary roots of the human family tree–perhaps more than 100,000 years ago.

– They do not engage in warfare.

– They live in small groups, so are not seriously threatened by infectious outbreaks.

– They do not know famine.

– Stable and varied diet.

– A large amount of leisure time.

– Do not leave a lot of things on the land.

– Free of possessions: Onwas and his camp mates own a cooking pot, a water container, an ax wrapped in a blanket.

– Women pick berries, baobab fruits, and tubers.

– Men collect honey and hunt game.

– They usually hunt individually unless it’s a baboon hunt. Besides snakes, they can eat just about anything: warthogs, bush pigs, hyrax, wildebeest, zebras, buffalo, or birds.

– They boil the sap of the desert rose to smear on their arrowheads as poison.

-Individual autonomy. No wealth, few social obligations.

– Sleep a lot. Dawn and dusk are the best hunting times.

– They hang out, straighten arrow shafts, whittle bows, make bowstrings,  and hammer nails into arrowheads when they have the time.

– No wedding ceremonies. They are serial monogamists, and a couple sleeps at the same fire for a while to show they are married.

– Gender roles are distinct, but there is no social hierarchy between the genders. Women initiate breakup.

– Game and kills brought back to camp are communal. They are shared by the people in their camp.

– Sleep in groups out in the open with campfires. Groups include families, single men, young women, or couples. They build upside-down bird’s nests during the rainy season for shelter. They move camp around once per month.

– Hunt is only for men.

– The Hadza are gentle and by nature not a combative people.

– They can stand briny soil, scarce fresh water suppl, and intolerable bugs.

– Do not get along too well with the other ethnic groups in their area: Datoga, Iraqw, the Isanzu, the Sukuma, and the Iramba.

– Learn Swahili to communicate with other groups.

– They live in the present, and do not worry about the future, nor plan for the future.

– The Hadza do not have ceremonies or rituals when there is a large kill. They do not thingk about afterlife, and there are no priests, shamans, or doctors. They believe that their God, blindingly bright, extremely powerful, and essential for all life, was the sun.

– The Hadza’s most important ritual is the epeme dance, on moonless nights, where women sing and men, wearing feathered headdresses and tie bells around their ankles, stomp their right foot with the rhythm of the chant.

– Hunter that has succeeded to get a large kill does not show off.

– They cook by placing the meat direcly on the fire.

– They eat without restrictions and without concerns, eating just about every part. Anyone can fit in the circle around the fire. Bones are smashed, marrows sucked, and grease rubbed on skin for moisturizer. The Hadza crave for pure fat rather than meat.

– Most Hadza love to smoke. They trade tobacco or cannabis by bartering honey with other groups.

– Every Hadza man owns for things: a bow, some arrows, a knife, and a pipe made from hollow soft stone.

– Smoke session: men smoke pipe, then cough, bursting tears, and rolling on his back.

– Their education is entertainment: griots, story performers. While women sing songs, the men act out campfire stories. Call and response.

– They carve bows are the thick branches of a mutateko tree.

– They bathe in shallow, muddy water holes that have been contaminated by cow manure.

– They like body odor. The men prefer their women not to bathe. The longer the women go between baths, the more attractve they are.

– They love bickering with their spouse, but over matters like hunting and survival.

– They are not sentimental.

– Whenever someone dies, they dig a hole and place the body inside. They toss a few dry twigs on top of the grave. And then, they leave. That’s their funeral.

What do they know that we have forgotten?

It seems like we have forgotten what it is like to not have to be troubled by the complexity of life. Hakuna Matata, a life of no worries. The past in the past. Death is in the past. You only live in the present. The world we live in today is too complicated and worrisome for people who want to achieve things in the world. Ambition causes complexity, worry, and takes a lot of foresight. As people who domesticated became more and more “obsessed” with the material world, they lose sight of the most basics of life of hunter-gatherers like the Hadza. In the article, the author quotes Jared Diamond, the UCLA professor and writer, who said that the adoption of agriculture is basically “the worst mistake in human history.” He is implying that ever since the adoption of agriculture and the Neolithic Revolution, war, disease, deception, and many other evils have come to stick to the crowd. It kind of reflects Rousseau’s view of noble savages, that society had turned people into violent beings. It seems like it’s the feeling of being at peace with nature and the world around us, really touching the ground and interacting with the air around us that we’ve forgotten. To really open up our hearts and all the stress, we have to take risks, having fun, and experience. Only then can we forget all the toxic waste that have accumulated in our hearts and really live in a brighter, more “hippie” world. The author of the article says:

The days I spent with the Hadza altered my perception of the world. They instilled in me something I call the “Hadza effect”–they made me feel calmer, more attuned to the moment, more self-sufficient, a little braver, and in less of a constant rush. I don’t care if this sounds maudlin: My time with the Hadza made me happier. It made me wish there was some way to prolong the reign of the hunter-gatherers, though I know it’s almost certainly too late.

See? The author doesn’t even care if what he said sounds maudlin. This shows that the carefree-ness of the Hadza people has already rooted into his soul. After this paragraph he goes on to say:

It was my body, more than anything, that let me know it was time to leave the bush. I was bitten and bruised and sunburned and stomachachy and exhausted. So, after two weeks, I told everyone in camp I had to go.

As you can see, the author lasted two weeks. However, the Hadza have been living for more than 100,000 years with a similar lifestyle as semi-nomadic hunter-gatherers. Not only do they have strong mental ability, they also have strong physical ability. It is the lifestyle that the Hadza have developed that we have forgotten, and reading the article helps me think about how dull and boring my life is. I have forgotten what the rest of the world have forgotten that the Hadza remember.

Also, look at the picture above. Even though the Hadza are quite isolated, they are not violent, and have no problem interacting with the rest of the world, even if it is kind of awkward or uncomfortable.

Although we have many differences, doesn’t mean that someone who has kept in touch with the rest of the world can’t associate well with those that don’t. Although they are different for sure, they are just people with different perspectives and lifestyles–interesting ones, too.

Week III: March 14

Reading:

David Livingstone – BBC

Henry Stanley – BBC

Homework:

1. Make at least 1 insightful and creative post relating to your nation in our World Simulation.

2. Make at least 1 insightful and creative post oh your portfolio demonstrating your understanding and opinions on African development in the 19th century.

3. Research on Profile Characters: David Livingstone, Henry Stanley, and Shaka.

Our Nation Website is Up!!! 😀

Hello, Territory 21 fans! No matter whether you’re a Torizen, a Rainbow Gardener, or a total stranger, access to the Territory 21 Official Website is privy to all! (Yes, even to enemies >:P)

Although the website is not totally done yet, we have the basic outline out.

On our Home page, we’ll put up pictures, announcements, important files, links, and also a comment box, which will also serve as a suggestions box for fellow Torizens.

On our Factbook Page, we will be putting up our Reports. Our World Factbook Basic Information version 1.0 is already up there, available for download. It is called “cia_world_factbook.docx” Feel free to download it if you want to, and updated versions of reports, announcements, or other public documents will be available online to all that require the statistics! We urge the development of science and mathematics, so we decided that anyone that wanted access to these information is okay! No, this is not like Wikileaks, people. I am Tracy Kao, the DOMESTIC AFFAIRS E. So if I put up stuff on the website, I want you all domestic people to know it! Plus, the Foreign Affairs. E and the State Head are also in charge of this next thing I am going to tell you.

We have started our own Territory 21 Bi-daily Blog! 😀 WOOHOO! Yes, it is a bi-daily blog, so it’ll have a post on Monday, Wednesday, Friday, Sunday, Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday, Monday, Wednesday….okay you get my point. Then it just keeps circling and circling among the three people of the EE12 that are in the T21.A.E.Publications Team: Foreign Affairs E. Tina Wu, State Head Jasmine Lu, and me–Domestic Affairs E. Tracy Kao. We will be posting news, surveys, petitions, proposals, and basically it’ll just be like a bi-weekly newspaper, except it’s by weblogs. So, the website is still in its early stages, but feel free to comment and/or email us through the Home page of our site. Check it out, and remember to rate it! 😉

So, right now we only have three pages: Home, Factbook, and Blog. Eventually, we’ll add more as we feel the need to, and the website will become more interesting. I promise!

Pictures from our Zulu Presentation Flip Chart and Power Point

To give you a little heads-up about our presentation about the Zulu’s perspective living in South Africa, the presentation will follow this basic outline (well, I hope it will end up following this outline):

1. Zulu Dance by the Dance team (Translator’s team will drum)

2. Interview of the Zulu’s lives (Actually, it’s not that true. We instructed the Dance team to pretend to be Zulus, and just make weird noises while the Translators gave the audience the necessary information. Pictures will be shown via Flip Chart ( which is really just a sketchbook) and a PowerPoint.

3. After we know about what Zulu culture/Zulu life is like, we will talk about Shaka and how the Zulu arose. We’ll talk about Shaka’s reign. We’ll mention his empire from the point where he rose in power to his decline, and his assassination. We will talk about his achievements–the good and the bad side to what he has done to the Zulu tradition and African history as a whole.

4. After that, we’ll talk about the Boer war and the Anglo-Zulu War, in relation to the other groups. This will provide the perspective that the audience wants to know about, and maybe while we explain through fake ”ancient drawings” or ”cave art”(Just kidding about the second one…serious about the first one though) the Dance Team will act out some pantomimes of the war and stuff, like how the swords got shorter so they could fight at a short distance, and how the shields were made longer to serve as protection.

Okay. Yes. I’ll admit it. This sounds like one long presentation. In fact, we really only have one day to put it together, since our group members have been so busy with other things. So, bear with us. We will try our best to bring you a good presentation. We will try to keep it concise by showing more pictures than text, but we will to speaking the information and not showing the words, so sorry if the assumed ”Translators” that were supposed to translate what the Zulus said seem to talk  A LOT (like, twice or three times) longer than the Zulu dancers did. Still, hope you’ll enjoy it!

So, I’ll be putting up the photographs from the flip chart and the actual PowerPoint here, so please provide feedback too! 😀

(Note: Flip Chart pictures temporarily unavailable. Power point:

The Zulu kingdom)

Profile Characters

David Livingstone:

D.O.B.: March 19th, 1813 at Blantyre, south of Glasgow. (Scotland)

Livingstone worked at a cotton mill when he was young, and studied medicine and theology when he got older. He then became a missionary doctor. In 1841, he was dispatched to the Kalahari Desert of Southern Africa. he married Mary Moffat, the daughter of a fellow missionary 3 years after that. He lost his left arm when he met a lion in 1843, however that did not stop him from exploring Africa. Livingstone decided that it was his job in Africa to spread Christianity and liberate the people from slavery. 1849 and 1851, he traveled across the Kalahari, and traveled along the Zambezi River for four years from 1852. It was during trip that Livingstone discovered Victoria Falls in 1855. He was the one credited for discovering the falls and by the May of 1856, he became the first European to cross the width of southern Africa into the Indian Ocean.

Because of his discoveries, he became a hero in Britain. In 1857, he published his book “Missionary Travels and Researches in South Africa. ” After one year, he once again traveled to Africa for the next five years to carry out explorations in eastern and central Africa. Unfortunately, his wife died. Soon, the British government, unsatisfied with the results, called him back While Livingstone was talking about Africa to the British public, he also prepared for another expedition into central Africa, which lasted from 1866 till his death. His goal was the search for the source of the Nile. So, he “disappeared” from the public. Eventually, November 10 of 1871, he met Henry Stanley at Lake Tangayika, and died around one year after that due to poor health on May 1, 1873. His body was taken back and buried in Westminster Abbey. He was age years old when he died.

Cartoon by Aaron, Huw

Henry Stanley:

D.O.B.: Under the name of “John Rowlands” January 28, 1841 in Denbigh, Wales.

Henry Stanley was orphaned at an early age. He worked his early years at a workhouse in Wales.He then worked as a sailor on a merchant ship and jumped ship to New Orleans. There, he took the name of a merchant he met, Henry Stanley. He then served both sides of the American Civil War, then pursued career as a journalist. In 1867, he worked for the New York Herald, and two years later, the publisher George Bennett commissioned him to find Livingstone.  There was so much ruckus about the disappearance of Britain’s national hero, and inspired George Bennett to do so. January of 1871, Stanley reached Zanzibar and continued on to Lake Tanganyika where he met David Livingstone at the village of Ujiji with the famous words: “Dr. Livingstone, I presume.” to which Livingstone replied, “You most certainly do.”After Livingstone’s death in 1873, he continued to explore the interiors of Africa, eventually publishing his book Through the Dark Continent. Although the British government was not supportive of his plans to explore the Congo, he was able to get the support of King Leopold II of Belgium. In 1879, he went to Congo to oversee the construction of roads, using forced labor on the natives. Stanley basically helped kick-start the creation of Leopold’s Congo Free State. He died in London May 10, 1904 around 14 years after he returned to Europe, where he gained fame from his expeditions.

(Stanley is known for force labor on the Africans, totally different from what Livingstone intended. In fact, Stanley included this picture in his own book.)

Shaka:

Shaka is a great Zulu leader that led the Zulu empire during a period. His full name is Shaka kaSenzangakhona. He is famous for his achievements: uniting the Nguni people and forming the Zulu empire. He is especially known for the changes he brought to African tribal wars. He brought shorter spears, longer cowhide shields, removing of sandals, extreme training, and merciless behavior. He killed all the members of the opposing tribes, and also developed a buffalo formation.

This is a traditional praise song:

He is Shaka the unshakeable,
Thunderer-while-sitting, son of Menzi
He is the bird that preys on other birds,
The battle-axe that excels over other battle-axes in sharpness,
He is the long-strided pursuer, son of Ndaba,
Who pursued the sun and the moon.
He is the great hubbub like the rocks of Nkandla
Where elephants take shelter
When the heavens frown…

His fellow tribesmen fear him. He is ferocious. His training is extreme. The weak are killed or tortured. Only the strongest men stay, and through his military genius, they are able to take over a lot of territory, becoming the biggest tribal group of their region.

Recent Weeks: April

Posts on Perspectives: Commenting on Classmates’ Presentations.

1. Boer Perspective:

People: Herbert, Angela, Peter, Daniel, Kelly Lin, and Kaho

For the Boer Perspective of the Boer Wars, this group performed a short skit about it. It was certainly interesting, as they had two young people who had different views about past feud between the Boers and the British.

2. Our Zulu Perspective:

People: Tina, Jasmine, Jill, Christie, Anne, and me

For our presentation, we had the members dance a cultural dance, the Zulu traditional marriage dance. It was really interesting. Also, we made a powerpoint presentation, which we presented to the class.

3. The British Perspective:

People: Allen, Ichia (Daniel Liu), Stephen, Ilya, Nathan, and Alex

For their presentation, they used paper puppets as characters to play in a story where a British guy fell in love with a Boer girl (or vice versa?) and plays kind of a Romeo and Juliet plot to the story, just more related to the topic of the Boer Wars.

Hotel Rwanda Posts:

1. Compare and contrast 3 perspectives in the movie.

2. Analyze the sequence of cause and effect that is contained in the timeline.

Both should reflect on issues related to shame, guilt, pride, anger, hope, and hopelessness.

1.


After seeing the movie “Hotel Rwanda,” there are certain perspectives that I would like to explore: the first is Foreign Aid, the second is the Hutus that brought help to the Tutsis, and the third are Hutus that persecuted the Tutsis.

Sources of foreign aid ranges from single persons to whole countries. Single persons include Madame Archer, Mr. Tillens (of Sabena Airlines), Colonel Oliver(of the UN), as well as French troops that came to help them. At one point in the movie, Paul had the refugees call every foreign person they know to wish. Of course, there were people that didn’t care — Colonel Oliver told Paul that the outside world doesn’t care about the people dying in Rwanda. They look at the people in Rwanda like they are inferior to them, and you can see how angry Colonel Oliver was when he heard that the French troops weren’t going to stay to protect the local people after they evacuate foreigners that were living at the hotel. Still, they had something in common: they did something to interfere, no matter who their priority to save was. However, they were also different in that they wanted to help different people, wanted to do different things. They were also different in that they helped to different extents.

The second group of people/perspectives are the Hutus who were willing to help the Tutsi. Unlike foreign aid, they are directly involved in the situation, and are in more danger because they could be killed for being a “traitor.” Paul is such a Hutu. He helps protect his family. At first, during the scene where his neighbor Victor was being attacked, he realized that all he could do was save his family: his wife, his children. But eventually the definition of family went beyond that, and was able to encompass all the refugees at his hotel. But, note that not all Hutus that “helped” the Tutsi actually mean to do so. In a way, the fact that Paul bribed many powerful Hutus meant that those Hutus that offered protection or life in exchange for other products were ‘helping’ those they despised. Such people included Georges Rutaganda, the powerful Hutu business man and the speaker of the Hutu Power Radio, as well as General Augustin Bizimungu, who provided police protection of the hotel and against the Interhamwe when Paul provided him with things to bribe. He even persuaded the General to help him by saying that he was going to be tried for war crimes. Therefore, he was able to get the General’s help, even though the General is very against that. As we can see, all of these people did help out the Tutsis in some way like foreign aid did, but instead, there were some that were intentional, some not. Even within the intentional, some did it as they willed, some quite reluctantly or under certain conditions.

The third category are the Hutus that look at the Tutsis like they are cockroaches. Well, to them, the Tutsis are cockroaches. Some of these Hutus actually helped the Tutsis, as mentioned before,  because they are the higher-positioned officers that can be bribed. That also means that they are the ones in charge, thus they are the ones who persecute and massacre as well. For example, the Interhamwe members, the people who carry the weapons, as well as ordinary citizens that participate in the parades are all Hutus that look down to the Tutsis. Gregoire who betrays Paul is also such a person. The Hutu Power Radio speakers and the people who support the radio station are all such people. Like the people that help the Tutsis, they are directly involved in the incident. However, the difference lies in that they aren’t as willing to help the Tutsis unless that get something in return. To them, it is part of their identity, pride, to be a Hutu and respect that. They even wear uniforms to symbolize their heritage.

2. The Timeline: Cause and Effect

Here is a link to the timeline.

– Pre-colonial Rwanda is a very structured system of of social hierarchies where Tutsi kings ruled the other Hutus and Twas. Because of this social division, it was easier for Belgians to create an internal conflict in Rwanda and gain control.

– After the Treaty of Versailles, Germany handed Rwanda and Urundi to the Belgians, who maintained the same social structure as previously existed in Rwanda. This led to the development of the minority Tutsi favored over the Hutus and given privileges.

– The Belgian preference for Tutsi caused western-style education for the Tutsi as well as higher government positions. This led to the system of ethnic identity cards differentiating Hutus and Tutsis in 1926, which led to deeper social division.

– Starting from 1957, with the formation of PARMEHUTU, Hutu opposition starts to form, which will eventually lead to the Hutu takeover.

– 1959, Hutus rebel against the Belgians and privileged Tutsi, gaining control. As  a result, 150,000 Tutsis flee from Rwanda to Burundi. Eventually, the exiles will form the RPF to go against the Hutu government.

– After the independence, Hutus install Gregoire Kayibanda as the president. Because of the Hutu rise to power, Tutsis flee to Burundi to retain power.

– Exiled Tutsis fire attacks at eh Hutus, which leads to further massacre of the Tutsis. By mid-1960s, half of the Tutsi population is living outside Rwanda. Killings of Tutsis persist for years.

– Further prejudice and mistreatment of Tutsis occurs when General Juvenal Habyarimana seizes power and sets up one-party rule. He also forms his political party, the National Revolutionary Movement for Development (NRMD). As a result, Hutus are given way better jobs and military positions.

– Because of the exile, many Tutsi had fled to Uganda, where they were able to gain a lot of power. Therefore, they formed the Rwandan Patriotic Front (RPF) in Uganda.

– Because of the fall of coffee prices, the economy of Rwanda was badly damaged. As a result, the government relied on outside support. Therefore, under pressure of foreign support, the system of multi-party democracy was adopted.

– A cease fire was signed March 29, 1991 after RPF guerrillas invade Rwanda from Uganda, causing French troops to arrive at Rwanda.

– Due to increase in military threat, the Hutu government started training the Interhamwe (“Those who stand together”), a militia if armed civilians, to kill and persecute any opposition.

– Again, the RPF attacks Rwanda and French troops were sent to assist Rwandan governement. This led to Habyarimana negotiating a treaty about allowing the Tutsis to return and participate in government. To ensure the completion of this peace accord, 2500 UN peacekeepers were dispatched to Rwanda.

– Because of pressure for power-sharing government, Hutu training of militias becomes more intense. The extremist radio station Mille Collines starts verbally attacking Tutsis.

– Because the conditions were intense and extremely anti-Tutsi within Rwanda, scared Rwandan human rights activists escape with their families. They believe that assacres may be coming soon.

– After the president was killed in a plane ride, the Hutus no longer had to consider the peace accord. The next day, they started the massacre of Tutsis in Rwanda. The president was mostly likely assassinated because of his participation in the completion of the peace accord.

Links to other websites with timelines on the Rwandan Genocide:

http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/shows/rwanda/etc/cron.html

http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/pages/frontline/shows/ghosts/

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/africa/3580247.stm

“Eyes on Africa” Presentations:

Reflect on a classmate’s Eyes on Africa presentation. Include your thoughts and how their presentation connects to your own.

With my presentation being one of the last two (that is, tomorrow :P), I am kind of worried. Why? Because all my classmates’ presentations have been awesome. The pressure increased when I saw clues about presentations from other classes: Neil’s delicious-looking rice, Mr. Kinzer’s Facebook status posts, Jennifer’s awesome posters,…and a lot more than that.  Anyways, for this post, I would like to type out my comments on their presentations and what I felt about them.

The first person that I saw present was Nathan Lee. He talked about the Congo Free State and the Democratic Republic of Congo. Inevitably, there was a connection to my presentation because of the high demand of rubber during that time, which caused the exploitation of human resources (labor) in the Congo Leopoldville. He mentioned that after the declaration of independence, there was still a lot of violence going on. That was a point that really stood out to me, because as you see, although people often have this misconception that independence is desirable, people have to understand that sometimes, lack of a strong authoritative government will cause civil war and the collapse of a nation in smaller and smaller segments, continuing to fracture as time goes on. I really like Nathan’s presentation, which was a prezi. Jill’s presentation had to do with the Congo as well, but on slightly different topics and a slightly different time period.

Angela’s presentation is particularly fascinating, too. Her presentation was on Sierra Leone, and she also mentioned the diamond trade that is used to fuel warfare for the RUF rebel front and the national army. It was interesting to see her presentation focus on how Sierra Leone has changed over the years. Also, she mentioned soccer being a popular source of entertainment in Sierra Leone. It was particularly interesting, because then I was just back from the Jakarta GIN Conference, and one of the speakers there was Rob Burrough, International Regional Coordinator for INSPI(RED) SOCCER, creating Barefoot Soccer, and a volunteer for Grassroot Soccer. The organization is one that trains famous coaches of soccer in Africa to teach the local people about HIV and AIDS to try to go against this disease that is killing people across the continent. Even more, one of the students informed us about a star player in an African soccer league was able to stop war in the Ivory Coast for a game by playing soccer. That is really impressive. The World Cup was also in Africa, and I love soccer, so I was really interested in this aspect of Africa. I’m also interested in how soccer came to be such a popular sport in Africa, and why Africans generally are so good at it!

Write a little bit about your own “Eyes on Africa” presentations:

Now, this is difficult.

How should I describe my presentation? I mean…it’s part boring facts, part flip chart, and part simulation. I guess it’s a fact-chart-simulation? Now that’s not exactly right–that sounds like people trying to act like fact charts…that’s random.

I guess I should stop trying to name it 😛

Anyways, I titled my presentation “The Blood of Africa: A Brief Presentation on the History of Exploitation in Africa.”(OK…Maybe it wasn’t that brief…) I actually had the inspiration after watching the movie “Blood Diamond” over the weekend, which starred the awesome actor Leonardo DiCaprio. It reminded me of the horrors of Africa –the child soldiers, the forced miners, the dependence on others in order to live your life…I was really reminded of those horrible things that surround the everyday lives of most African child soldiers. These child soldiers are BRAINWASHED, force to do very bad things since they were a kid. They are forced to inflict violence on others after they have been hurt by others. Life is really tough for them. I understand that they have been through a lot, and will take a lot more time and effort to bring them back to the society that we live in today.

So really, after researching about some of the major “exploitation events” in Africa, I feel really sad about it– betrayed, even, when I learned that Taiwan was a participant of the illegal ivory trade. When I learned that, I was not happy to know at all. It really makes me feel like I can’t do much. And really, I can’t. So, I guess the most that I can do is to promote these ideas…which I attempted to in my presentation.

What was the purpose of this presentation? Well, I think the whole “Eyes on Africa” activity was to understand our classmates a little more–what their opinions on certain things are, what their preferences are, what they do…along with the freedom of discovering what you want to do. Given the materials, you try to work your own way from there– do your own research, learn what you want to learn, learn what you can learn. Instead of learning about Africa and doing nothing about it, you’re supposed to “get inspired” to do something by something in Africa.

What can I improve next time? Well, first of all, I felt like I hadn’t been able to accomplish what I wanted to accomplish. What I wanted to accomplish was to get my audience to remember the terror of the exploitation in African history. However, what I think my audience got out of my presentation was “Wow. That was fun.” There was no motivation attached. In trying to motivate them to promote the “evils” going on in Africa, I unfortunately failed. I guess that’s something I will have to work on in the future if I want to do something like this, but the more I think about it, the more difficult it seems. First of all, I was barely able to capture their attention–giving facts is boring enough. However, the activities can’t be too serious, and have to remain entertaining. Also, the flip chart wasn’t really a success because my art skills are just terrible. This is certainly a dilemma and something I have to work about the next time I make a major presentation like this.

Files for download:

Eyes on Africa Post-Presentation Discussion : Includes basic information about how the simulation went.

19th Century Humanities Eyes on Africa Presentation Simulation: Includes the information in my presentation.

Pictures of my artwork(half-way through)

Finished product:

As you can see, the proportions of the various facial features are pretty distorted…I guess that’s something I can work on? XP

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CASE STUDY THREE:


TRACY’S ULTRA CASE STUDY 3

PART I.

DICTIONARY/KEY TERMS/PROFILES LIST

(Using Mrs. Barney’s method of keeping vocabulary notes: Who, What, When, Where, Why, How, and Historical Significance.)

PROFILES:

1. Napoleon Bonaparte

(15 August 1769 – 5 May 1821)

Napoleon Bonaparte was an Emperor of the French. Napoleon was born to a noble family and received education from a military school. He developed an interest in geography and colonialism. Under the French First Republic, Napoleon Bonaparte’s fame and prominence grew and eventually he was made general of the whole French Army. Napoleon was able to lead many successful military campaigns throughout Europe, and the people supported him until his army started to not do as well. Then, he returned to Paris, and with Emmanuel Joseph Sieyes, implemented a coup de tat on the Directory. The next day, he made himself first consul of France, the military dictator for around the next twenty years. On December 2, 1804, Napoleon crowned himself emperor of France. He was exiled twice. The last time he was exiled, he was at St. Helena. It was also there that he died.

Historical Significance: Napoleon Bonaparte is important for leaving behind many legacies, such as Code Napoelon, his Civil Code, which is today still used as a basis for the law of certain countries and a few states in the United States.

2. Prince Klemens von Metternich

(15 May 1773 – 11 June 1859)

Prince Klemens von Metternich was a German-Austrian famous diplomat. He was the person who brought together the Congress of Vienna. Prince Klemens von Metternich grew up in an aristocratic family. After growing up studying with a private tutor, he studied philosophy at an university in Strasbourg. It was there that he had first hand experience of the French Revolution. Because his father was an Austrian diplomat, he was introduced into the diplomatic circle. Later, they fled to Vienna to escape the French Revolutionary armies. First he served as an envoy and later an ambassador to Saxony, Prussia, and even to France. He spent a lot of time at the Imperial Court of France, acquainted to many influential French leaders of the time. When the war between Austria and France broke up, he was detained in France because other French diplomats were also under detention in Austria. In 1809, Metternich was appointed the minister of foreign affairs after Austria’s humiliating defeat by France.  He realizes that alliance with Russia is the best way to make sure that Austria recovers from the defeat, while at the same time maintaining good relations with Napoleon, even answering Napoleon’s request to marrying Austrian duchess Marie Louise. However, as the war between Prussia and France neared, Metternich worked hard trying to find a balance in Austrian policy that would both Russia and France would by willing to accept. Indeed, a series of secret alliances were made. While forming the secret thirty thousand-men Austrian Auxiliary Corps to aid in Napoleon’s campaign against Russia, Austria also signed contracts with Russia, promising to defy Napoleon’s rule should such a chance to do so occurs. Indeed Napoleon eventually led a campaign against Russia, who had then seemed like a possible future obstacle to gaining control of Europe. While successful at capturing the Russian capital of Moscow, his military march east was paused because of the harsh winter conditions and allies started to withdraw their aids. During this time, Metternich received Russia’s help in trying to oppose Napoleon. Russia stationed troops near Austria, which gave Austria an excuse for not using the Austrian Auxiliary Corps to help Napoleon. Napoleon became more and more suspicious, but Metternich remained “neutral” to the war even till the private meeting between Napoleon and Metternich where Napoleon demanded full commitment from Austria. Metternich claimed that Austria was occupied at the meeting, and took on several of Napoloen’s threats including “We shall meet in Vienna.” The next day, Metternich signs a treaty with Russia and Prussia, promising to supply them with 150,000 men against Napoleon. On 20th October 1813, Metternich is made hereditary prince of the Austrian Empire. In early 1814, Russian, Prussian, and Austrian combined forces were able to topple the Napoleon “regime.” Many sources credit Metternich’s diplomacy for effectively carrying out Napoleon’s eventually overthrow. During the fall of 1814, the Congress of Vienna convened, and major diplomats from various countries met to redraw political borders for the Map of Europe. Even though many countries were allies during the war, during the Congress of Vienna they disagreed over territory. Prince Klemens von Metternich, with his powerful leadership ability, was able to prevent Russia from taking over the whole Poland and also create the German Confederation. He also gave Austria large amount of power and control over the area. Metternich resented the ideas of liberalism, Nationalism, as well as the Revolutionary spirit. He preferred the Enlightenment ideals and natural laws, sticking with religious and social morality. Metternich had in mind his ideal system: a monarchy that shared power with the traditional privileged class. There will be a Congress system where representatives meet to consider suppressing rebellions. He also established a close watch over universities and censorship, believing that the advancement of technology led to the spread of ideas, a danger to them, absolutely discouraging radicalism. This causes Metternich to be depicted as a “an architect of Reaction and of a suppressor of Liberty.”

Historical Significance: Prince Klemens von Metternich is important because of his contributions to the end of the Napoleonic French “Empire.” If not for him, then Europe would still have been in a state of turmoil even if Napoleon’s regime ended. There had to be forces to prevent further civil disorder from the rise of nationalism and liberalism. Furthermore, Metternich created the German Confederation, dissolving Prussia, and leading a step for Germany to evolve into the form it is today.

3. Giuseppe Garibaldi

Together with Mazzini, Giuseppe Garibaldi was responsible for bringing about several revolutionary attempts in Italy for unification. However, his troops failed repeatedly, and he escapes to South and North America. Later, under the name of King Vittorio Emanuele, he led 1200 volunteers against 2000 men and defeated the Bourbons, causing control over Sicily. He continued military campaigns, but also took part in politics, attempting to unify Italy.

Historical Significance: Giuseppe Garibaldi is important for his contributions to the unification of Italy and to supporting Vittorio Emanuele.

4. Karl Marx

Karl Marx was a German philosopher that stood in opposition to capitalism, believing that capitalism will cause tensions leading to its own destruction. He argues that after feudalism is capitalism, and then socialism. After that, a country will undergo change with the rise of the proletariat class. Then, an economy with no class will appear to form pure communism. Karl Marx and Fredrich Engels together wrote The Communist Manifesto. Karl Marx was born a Jewish, but he converted to Lutheranism. In college, Karl Marx was introduced to W. F. Hegel’s idea of the dialectical process. According to this process, every idea has an opposition that will merge with the idea to form a new idea, which will also have opposition. Hegel believes that history is an ongoing dialectical process. Karl Marx applied the dialectical process to economy and society. Marx believes in the dialectic process of class struggle. The opposites fight “a fight that each time ended, either in a revolutionary reconstitution of society at large, or in the common ruin of the tending classes.” (The Communist Manifesto) Marx lived through the Industrial Revolution, where population was separated in two: proletariat, the worker class; and bourgeoisie, the wealthy and powerful capitalists and business owners. Marx believes that conflict will lead to rise of the powerful of the working class, the proletariat class take over, and as the bourgeois class disappears, Communist Utopia will appear. In this system of only one class, everyone will earn according to his abilities and needs. Before the completion of The Communist Manifesto, Karl Marx had also worked on several writings, even writing for a very radical newspaper in Europe. One of them, The Philosophy of Poverty, laid the foundation for The Communist Manifesto which Karl Marx will eventually write with Fredrich Engels.On Karl Marx’s tombstone bears the following two messages: “Workers of All Lands Unite” from the last line of The Communist Manifesto and “The philosophers have only interpreted the world in various ways—the point however is to change it.” from the 11th Thesis on Feuerbach, edited by Fredrich Engels.

Historical Significance: Karl Marx is important for establishing Marxism and also influencing other famous philosophers with his ideas, such as Lenin and Mao Ze Dong. Because of his philosophies, many people place him as the greatest thinker of the millennium.

5. Fredrich Engels

Fredrich Engels was another German philosopher alongside Karl Marx. He was born in what is modern-day Germany, and he was particularly interested in Hegel’s ideas, which dominated German philosophy during that time. When he went to Berlin to attend university, he joined a group of Young Hegelians, writing anonymously about the terrible conditions of the working class. When he moved to Manchester, he met Karl Marx for the first time on his way, and they were not impressed with each other. It was also there that he met a woman he liked, but having deemed it unnatural and unjust, they never got married. Engels studied the harsh conditions of factory life and child labor, the difficult things that the workers had to go through under the capitalists. He collected his findings into his first book, The Condition of the Working Class in England. After living in Manchester, he returned to Germany. On the way there, he once again met Karl Marx in Paris. They became really good friends, and Engels worked on and edited many of Karl Marx’s works during that time. Later, the two move to Brussels where they organized the city German workers. They joined the underground German Communist League, and wrote the pamphlet The Manifesto of the Communist Party, which became known as The Communist Manifesto. They went to Prussia to get away from the French Revolution, but had to leave and escape with a Prussian coup d’ etat.  Later on, both of them lived in Britain, and Engels got jobs to support Marx economically for the next work Das Kapital. When Marx died, Engels spent the rest of the time working on unfinished works and editing past volumes until his own death.

Historical Significance: Fredrich Engels is importance for his contributions to philosophy that lead to modern socialism and communism as well as his collaboration and help with Karl Marx, which allowed works like The Communist Manifesto to be done.

6. Thomas Malthus

Malthus, full name Thomas Robert Malthus, wrote several editions of An Essay on the Principle of Population. He is skeptical of improvement in humanity, believing that poverty will still continue to exist. He saw population increase until distress such as epidemics, famine, and war stopped it. Malthus proposed two possible solutions: “positive checks, which raise the death rate; and preventative ones, which lower the birth rate. The positive checks include hunger, disease and war; the preventative checks, abortion, birth control, prostitution, postponement of marriage and celibacy.” (Wikipedia) Malthus also emphasized moral restraint, even applying it to the lower class. Despite this, Malthus’ take on public assistance to the poor is disapproval. He believes that the poor laws and the poor relief are just making the poor even poorer. “Evil exists in the world not to create despair, but activity.” Malthus believed that poverty was a positive check on population–the poorer the people, the less likely they will raise children, and the richer will have increased birth rates while at the same have less death rates.

Historical Significance: Thomas Malthus is important for his contributions to demographics as well as the ideas that would eventually lead to the evolutionary idea of natural selection and also eugenics. His ideas are becoming more and more important as the world faces overpopulation.

PART II.

MAKING INSIGHTFUL AND CREATIVE POSTS DEMONSTRATING UNDERSTANDING AND OPINONS:

WEEK ONE:

Governments Post #1:

Tracy Kao.                                                                                      January 5, 2011

Humanities Questions:

Based on Bloom’s Taxonomy, write out 5 ~ 10 questions you have regarding government. Put a focus on the government of Great Britain, Taiwan, and the United States of America.

1.      What distinguishes the power of the various branches of the English government—particularly the House of Commons vs the House of Lords and the parliament versus the monarch(Application)

A: Regarding parliament versus the monarch, the monarch basically is just the figurehead. They represent the country, and basically only have power when it comes to foreign relations, appointing prime ministers, and when they sign the government papers. Otherwise, everything else is up to the parliament to decide. Regarding the House of Commons versus the House of Lords, “Unlike the House of Commons, membership of the House of Lords is not attained by election from the population as a whole, but by inheritance, by appointment,” or by status/power in relation to the Church of England. Another difference is that “The number of members is not fixed; as of 1 December 2010 (2010 -12-01) the House of Lords has 741 members (as well as 39 who are on leave of absence or otherwise disqualified from voting), as against the fixed 650-seat membership of the House of Commons.” The two houses of the English system can be compared to the Senate and the House of Representatives of the United States.

(Quotes from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/House_of_Lords)

2.      Summarize how the American government came to be. (Synthesis) Then, compare the different founding fathers—include their achievements. (Evaluation)

A: The nineteenth century was the era of American establishment. In 1783, the first working government for the United States appeared, and in 1789, the constitution was signed. After that, several famous people sought for the best government for the United States, passed various laws and made various amendments to the law. .

George Washington April 30, 1789 – March 4, 1797 1. Judiciary Act 1789
2. Tariff of 1789
3. Whiskey Rebellion
4. Jay’s treaty
John Adams (Federalist) March 4, 1797 – March 4, 1801 1. Alien Act of 1798
2. Sedition Act of 1798
3. Appointed “Midnight Judges”
4. Built up the US Navy
Thomas Jefferson (Democratic Republican) March 4, 1801 – March 4, 1809 1. Removed Adams Alien Act of 1798
2. Removed Adams Sedition Act of 1798
3. Louisiana Purchase
4. Embargo Act of 1807
James Madison (Democratic-Republican) March 4, 1809 – March 4, 1817 1. Macon’s Bill No.2
2. Hartford Convention
3. The Treaty of Ghent
4. War of 1812
James Monroe (Democratic-Republican) March 4, 1817 – March 4, 1825 1. Panic of 1819
2. Missouri Compromise
3. Monroe Doctrine (1823)
4. Adam-Onis Treaty of 1819

3.      List out or draw out the divisions within the Taiwanese government and give a brief description of the responsibilities. (Knowledge)

A: Taiwanese government is based on the Constitution of 1946.

“The president is the head of state; the president is popularly elected for a five-year term and is eligible for a second term. The government is made up of five branches; the office of the president is separate from these branches. The Executive Yuan is similar to a cabinet and is headed by the premier (who is the president of the Executive Yuan); the premier is appointed by Taiwan’s president. The 113 members of the Legislative Yuan are elected (most directly) for three-year terms. The Judicial Yuan is appointed by the president and serves as the highest judicial authority; the Control Yuan is in charge of censorship and such political matters as censure and impeachment; and the Examination Yuan supervises examinations for government positions…”
(From http://www.infoplease.com/ce6/world/A0861419.html#ixzz1AGzTddAe)

The responsibilities are similar to that of the American system.

4.      Explain at least three enlightenment philosophers’ perspectives on government. (Comprehension)How does the modern-day system of the United States incorporate these ideas? (Analysis)

A: Early enlightenment philosophers: (for more information, http://sunsite.informatik.rwth-aachen.de/phil/filosofer/philosophers.html , http://faculty.stedwards.edu/kathyb/CULF3330_WH/Fall2010sec09/Enlightenment.htm , and http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/hum_303/enlightenment.html )

Thomas Hobbes– Hobbes believed that conflict was a part of human nature, and humans were not inherently good. “Life is solitary, poor, nasty, brutish, and short.” Hobbes wanted the people to make a contract with the government to keep the piece, and in this contract people give up some of their rights to achieve order. Hobbes also believed in a strong central government. Using fear and power, hat monarch, will be able to keep society civil. He advocated his beliefs in his infamously pessimistic book Leviation.

Rousseau- Rousseau advocated a society at the natural state, without class-distinction. It is the development of agriculture and the concept of private possessions that led to social inequality. Social institutions of inequality and constraint destroy the equality and freedom of the natural state.

“According to Jean Jacques Rousseau, the right of governance is not given to the monarch by the Divine Power advocated by Filmer, nor is established by the contract between the despot and the subject like that of Hobbes’ theory in Leviathan, but it is due to the social contract by which the people establish a nation. The selection of the monarch was done after the establishment of the nation by the social contract and it means that the subject entrust one person to rule for their sake. At the initial social contract, the people give up their original natural right of freedom for the spiritual unity as the civil state is born.
The ultimate source of the power of the civil state consists in the general will. However, this general will is to be distinguished from the will of all. The will of all is the aggregate totality of all the individuals’ wills each of which seeks each individual’s personal profit. The general will aims, as the will of all people, at the happiness of everybody in the society.
Each of the members of the society loses the freedom as the natural right, instead he or she gains the civil freedom determined by the general will. And under the civil laws, each individual is guaranteed its right for property and the right for equality. The genuine possessor of the right of governance is the subject, whereby the civil law is the expression of the general will, the sole object or purpose of which is the establishment and maintenance of freedom and equality.
In the genuine civil state, the people are to be forced to be free.” (“The Philosophies of Enlightenment”, http://www.csudh.edu/phenom_studies/western/lect_8.html)

In short, Rousseau believed that there should be an agreement between the governing and the governed to ensure social stability. The majority should rule, and individuals are subjected to the will of the community.

John Locke– John Locke is often considered the father of the enlightenment philosophy. He believed that all people had natural rights to life, liberty, and property. It is the purpose of government to protect these rights.

Baron de Montesquieu- Montesquieu believed in the separations of powers in the government if given three branches: legislative, executive, and judicial. He believed that the liberty of the people must be guarded from corrupt leaders. With this system of checks and balances, Montesquieu believes that the government can have power while also being constantly checked and balanced in authority.

Effects on modern-day United States government:

When the founding fathers wrote the constitution and the bill of rights, they based their ideas on the enlightenment philosophers. Paranoid, the fear of a tyrannical large central government also caused the formation of many political parties with different opinions on government. Therefore, while they were carefully forming the government policies of the nation, they also looked over the past beliefs of the enlightenment philosophers in search of the best system. Just from looking at Constitution and the Bill of Rights, you can see the influences that the philosophers had on American government.

First of all, in the first section of the first three articles, the Baron de Montesquieu’s Separation of Powers is shown. Article I, Section I states that “All legislative Powers herein granted shall be vested in a Congress of the United States, which shall consist of a Senate and House of Representatives.” That describes the divisions of the legislative branch. Article II, Section I states that “The executive Power shall be vested in a President of the United States of America.” This allows the existence of the executive branch under the President. Article III, Section I states that “The judicial Power of the United States shall be vested in one Supreme Court, and in such inferior Courts as the Congress may from time to time ordain and establish.” This confirms the establishment of the judicial branch. Each of the branches has their powers, further outlined in the Constitution and elaborated through time.

Second of all, the fifth amendment of the Bill of Rights states “No person shall be held to answer for a capital, or otherwise infamous crime, unless on a presentment or indictment of a grand jury, except in cases arising in the land or naval forces, or in the militia, when in actual service in time of war or public danger; nor shall any person be subject for the same offense to be twice put in jeopardy of life or limb; nor shall be compelled in any criminal case to be a witness against himself, nor be deprived of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law; nor shall private property be taken for public use, without just compensation.” This demonstrates Locke’s ideas on the natural rights that every human deserves: “life, liberty, and property.”

Though Hobbes’ strong central government was what the people of the United States feared, they did agree with Hobbes that there had to be a social contract between the ruler and the governed, just as Rousseau had desired. Furthermore, Rousseau’s ideal of a “majority-rule” based society that emphasizes the welfare of the community over the individual can be sensed through the elections. In modern day United States, everyone that fits the requirements to vote are allowed to vote, and the candidate the majority of the votes wins. The same system works in the legislative branch and the judicial branch. The House of the Representatives and the Senate both depend on majority vote or at least reaching a minimum number of votes (which ends up with majority anyways) in order to pass a bill. Of the judicial branch, if the defendant desires a jury, the verdict is usually by the majority of the jury’s votes.

WEEK TWO AND THREE:

Napoleon/European Geopolitics Post #1:

Napoleon Breaking News Reports:

Prezi Link: http://prezi.com/ma99g1l0qekk/breaking-news-report/

CONGRESS OF VIENNA edition

The following is an activity that I found over the Internet.

Student Handout 3.4.1 Modern World
Congress of Vienna Project
http://www.nisk.k12.ny.us/faculty/hirota/10r/congress_vienna.htm
The Conference:
The French Revolution and Napoleon’s desire to establish an empire created a sense of instability throughout much of Europe. After Napoleon’s defeat at Waterloo, diplomats and heads of state sat down at the Congress of Vienna. From September 1814 to June 1815, these leaders faced the  monumental task of restoring stability and order after 25 years of war and upheaval. The setting during the Congress was  characterized by the following: Chaos and fear of revolution had spread throughout Europe and much of the world. France had  conquered territory as far east as Moscow and the Holy Roman  Empire had been abolished. Great Britain, Austria, Prussia,  Russia and France had suffered economic and human loss as a  result of years of war. And feelings of nationalism had spread  across Europe. Partnerships and alliances have emerged  between different European countries and Prussia and Russia  have grown ambitious, wanting more territories. Your task: You and your group members will present a simulation of the  Congress of Vienna to the class. Each country will be comprised  of five people. Each group will represent a country at the  Congress in Vienna and negotiate with diplomats from other countries to bring a new stability to war torn Europe. Things to  consider and complete while at the Congress (during your presentation!)

  1. Create policies that will ensure stability
    1. What will provide stability to all of Europe? Reestablish a  “Balance of Power” between the five major powers: Russia,  Austria, Prussia, Britain and France. Your goal is to create and  promote peace and stability throughout Europe for decades!
    2. What types of government are most appropriate for each country?
    3. Should a multi-national governing body be formed to make  sure the likes of Napoleon never rampage across Europe again? Containment for France.
  2. Redraw the map of Europe to reflect a balanced Europe
    1. Does France still exist?
  3. Should certain countries get reparations? Who? What form?
  4. Diplomats in attendance at the Congress will show their agreement with the terms by signing the document.

Diplomats at the Congress of Vienna:
http://www.victorianweb.org/history/forpol/vienna.html

Links have been provided to start your search!
Russia Tsar Alexander I
http://www.mnsu.edu/emuseum/history/russia/romanov.html
Austria Prince Klemens von Metternich
http://www.age-of-the-sage.org/historical/biography/metternich.html
France Charles Talleyrand
http://www.age-of-the-sage.org/historical/biography/talleyrand.html
Britain Lord Castlereagh
http://www.nndb.com/people/357/000095072/
Prussia Prince von Hardenberg
http://www.nndb.com/people/046/000101740/
– After you have gathered information move onto discussing background
material with your country group to create a strategy for the Congress.
Project Schedule:

Day One: Pick groups and country/diplomat.
1) In your country group research your statesmen, country, and general information about the Congress of Vienna.
2) Discuss background material about your country with your  group…issues you will bring up with the other countries when you plan out the Congress

  • What was it like for our country during the Napoleonic Era of War?
  • What kind of losses did we face?
  • Who do we blame?
  • As victors, what will we demand in reparations?
  • How will we ensure that there is a balance of power throughout Europe to prevent future wars and the rise of another Napoleon?

3) Design a plan or strategy for negotiations at the Congress –  Questions to ask your group members,

  • How will we get what we want?
  • How will we protect ourselves? What are we willing to compromise?

Day Two: Working with your group you will want to go out and forge alliances and create strategies with other nations!    You and your country want to create a cohesive plan or    strategy when the Congress convenes. Meet and debate with    other countries, do you have similar or different interests? Or send out spies to other countries to see what they are planning.

  1. Design a plan for negotiation at the Congress –
    1. How is everyone going to get what they want?
    2. What kind of compromises are going to have to occur?
    3. Remember: The biggest issue is creating stability on the continent but while also advancing your country’s interest (nationalism is strong during this period).
  2. Each member should have a working outline as to what issues are going to be discussed…if you need some additional ideas in regards to what should be discussed, refer back to the task which lays out what should be completed by the end of this presentation. (Task & Things to Consider) The most  difficult part of this presentation is working well to create a  cohesive presentation. Therefore, it is imperative that you  work well with one another to completely answer the  questions and tasks posed to you. You should also have a list  of countries you want to work with during the Congress. Be prepared, everyone should have a speaking part and reading off a piece of paper only proves that you are not prepared! Your grade will reflect the level preparation.

Day Three: You will have a few minutes to review format and then groups will present. The room will be in a large oval and you will be sitting with your country members. Each group will have a minute to outline their interests and desires  at the end of the Napoleonic Age, each member should speak. Then, in an open forum, your country will convene at Congress and try and advance two goals…European stability   and your nation’s own interests.

Final Products:

1. Redrawn Map of Europe (signed by all countries)
2. Clear list of accomplished goals (signed by all countries)

I believe that we could have done that in class if we had enough people.

However, I did a little research on Prince Klemens von Metternich, which I posted at the top.

Napoloen Bonaparte/European Geopolitics Post#2:

The French Revolution Summary:

The French Revolution from 1789 to the early 1800s mostly centered on the people’s discontent with the French government. In order to compensate for the constant war losses, taxation was at the rise. However, since the French social hierarchy was separated to three estates, and the rich and noble belonged to the first two estates, the third estate of commoners always lost the vote and had to vote the most number of times. Then came the period of great fear, where the lower class started revolts, such as Bastille Day. The National Assembly also formed to discuss a new constitution. Eventually, they succeeded in doing so, but people argued over the monarch and the people’s rights, and people of different ideas formed. Then came the National Convention who executed Louis the XVI. Maximillien Robespierre was responsible for executing thousands of people with the guillotine until he himself was put to death by the guillotine as well. That was the reign of terror. After that, with the Constitution of 1795, the Directory was created. It was a system of a 5-member group of people leading the government’s executive branch. However, the Directory soon began to abuse its powers and become more engrossed with trying to maintain its influence that it eventually lost the people’s support. The fact that the wars to the East weren’t going so well certainly did not help the Directory. Eventually, Emmanuel Joseph Sieyes, author of “What is the Third Estate?” and himself a Directory member planned a coup with Napoleon Bonaparte, the well-known General. The coup took place in 1799, and put Napoleon as first consul of France. He dissolved the legislature and used military control to end the revolution and stabilize France for the rest of the years.

WEEK FOUR, FIVE, AND SIX:

Economics Post #1:

In-Class Assignment: Attempt to Explain how Wealth can be Unlimited:

The idea of “limited wealth” is attached to “reality”–the reality that we live in, but not a “must.”

People are rich because they have control over most of the things that the other people own. What makes them rich is because other people want what they have. Really, wealth depends on the common view of most people.

Let’s suppose that to a person, a car is worth around 500 thousand NT. However, if the public is conditioned to think that a pack of chocolate satisfies more than a car will, then the person selling the chocolate can sell it for 700 thousand NT. Living in the modern word, where a car is usually worth a lot more than a pack of chocolate, it seems rather absurd. But, if you think about it, raising the price of ever single thing in the world cancels things out. If you raise the price and value of a chocolate to  beyond that of a car, then a person who owns chocolate will be considered more wealthy than that of a person who owns the car. How is price set? It is determined by value: supply and demand. Scarcity and how much the public desire it determine the wealth. We grow up knowing that a car is more valuable than a pack of chocolates. But, if chocolates were totally new, then a “social rule” or “custom” may be set so that chocolates are worth 10 times more than a car. If people are taught so, and live so, then they will believe that. The “rich people” will no longer be the car-owners. Instead, it’ll be the chocolate owners. So, we can see that we “made” people wealthy. So, we control wealth. We can make a person a lot more wealthy by setting up a new rule: from the example above, it’s the rule that  a pack of chocolates is worth a lot more than a car.

Wealth is relative. It is a proportion, only a number. Let’s suppose the price of a candy is “x”. The public sets it so that a computer is 10x. A car is 100x. Now, if you set the price of candy to 10x, the person who owns the computer will be as rich as the person owning the candy. Then, suppose computers rise to 100x, and cars rise to 1000x.  Now, the person who owns the car is once again wealthier than computers. Suppose that the price of the average cup of coffee was 6x, the same before and after the change. At first, a computer may not have been much more expensive than a cup of coffee, but after that change, the car-owners become around 150 times richer than the average person, who can afford the cup of coffee.

Yes, we can understand how scarcity can occur when the resources run out, but how does demand increase if the product is a want and not a need? It occurs because of advertisement and because the constant competitive spirit among people. Because other people own something, you also want to own something. You want people who don’t have it to look up to you because you have it. Furthermore, you want to be able to get the product for less than other people. Let’s suppose that you knew that your friend bought a pack of chocolate for 10x dollars. That’s a very large cost, and the average computer costs 9x. You know that is a very expensive cost, but if you are the only person in the world to be able to get it for 9.5 dollars, then you would buy it, wouldn’t you?…even though it’s still very expensive? Advertisements show you the good side of things–what you will get out of having something. However, as long as we are able to change the morals and values of people, and show them that something is bad, then people won’t want that. That’s how boycotts work. If an organization does something, and someone makes a big fuss over it, even though it may be just a tiny incident, and then the whole public starts rebelling. Then, they start having this growing hate, a scapegoat to attack on. So, they start boycotting things. As you can see, as long as we change our mindset, we can change value and wealth. So, in the end, all the economic problems were designed by ourselves.

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A friend of mine, William Dooling, explained to me about how mercantilism isn’t the only option.

Win-win situations are possible:

For example, suppose that Country 1 has too many people in its country. It is a very “well-developed” country that emphasizes a lot on science and technology. However, it suffers from over-population.

Now, let’s get Country II, which in the modern world may say is “developing"even though it may be organized just as well as Country 1. However, Country II lacks good educational systems. Therefore, they can trade services: Country 1 just has to send teachers over to Country II. That takes care of the unemployment rates in one country. It also helps develop the educational system of Country 2. Both sides benefit from this mutualism, this symbiosis. Although this is probably an over-simplification, it is the explanation of a friend about how there are several alternatives to the zero-sum paradigm or the mercantilist mindset.

Economics Post #2:

My Personal Economy Diagrams:

As you can see, this diagram is a very simplified version. If I were to be more specific, there wouldn’t have been enough space 😉 In this diagram, I use a more roundabout and broad way of expressing certain terms or trends. I believe even though this diagram is of a “personal” economy, the same applies to other people.

Economics Post #3:

Economics Notes/Summary:

Economics is a social science; it is the study of people in society and how they interact with each other. The main idea behind economics is that the Earth, its resources, goods, and services are finite (scarce), but there are infinite needs and wants, collectively “people’s demands”. Goods are the physical objects that can be touched (tangible.) Services are the intangible things that can’t be touched. Needs are the things we have to have in order to survive, and wants tare the things that we would like to have that are not essential for immediate physical survival. All goods and services are relatively scarce compared to people’s demands, people have to make choices and decide how to choose between the alternatives given the limited resources. There are four major factors of production: land, labor, capital, and management (entrepreneurship). Land is territory and its natural resources. Labor is the human factor. Capital is what comes from investment in physical and human capital. Capital is the physical means of production, the human and non-human work force, the infrastructure. Entrepreneurship is the organizing of the production, land, labor, and capital.

Dan Pink’s TED talk on Incentives

Intrinsic motivation, autonomy, mastery, and purpose are key to the accomplishment of a task with quality and creativity. “There is a mismatch between what science knows and what business does. And here is what science knows: One, those 20th century rewards, those motivators we think are a natural part of business, do work, but only in a surprisingly narrow band of circumstances. Two: Those if-then rewards often destroy creativity. Three: The secret to high performance isn’t rewards and punishments, but that unseen intrinsic drive, the drive to do things for their own sake, the drive to do things because they matter. And here’s the best part. Here’s the best part. We already know this. The science confirms what know in our hearts. So, if we repair this mismatch between what science knows and what business does, if we bring our motivation, notions of motivation into the 21st century, if we get past this lazy, dangerous, ideology of carrots and sticks, we can strengthen our businesses, we can solve a lot of those candle problems, and maybe, maybe, maybe, we can change the world.” Dan Pink uses the candle problem as an example in making his point, where people are given a certain amount of materials to prevent the wax from a burning candle to drip onto the table. Experiments show that by putting a prize or incentive (extrinsic motivator) actually causes people to not perform as well. Therefore, Dan Pink believes that people will do things because they feel internal benefits.

Beyond The 19th Century in Economics

The article basically first explains capitalism and how it was needed in the early days of the industrial revolution, and how it was different from free enterprise and free market. Later on, he goes on to explain that times have changed, and that we should go beyond capitalism to Concordianism, where information and human creativity is the most important need. Ownership that depends on human participation is the liberal idea, and should be the “new way.”

WEEK SEVEN :

The Children’s Guide to 19th Century Economics Review Key Terms:

Six People. One Collaborative Project.

Economics Vocabulary Made Easy So That Your Ten Year-Old Gets It 😀

Authors: Jasmine Lu, Stephen Tjia, Daniel Liu,

Daniel Chen, Kaho Koseki, and Tracy Kao

(Stick-Man Pictures by Tracy :D)

Table of Contents:

1.          Market–                                                                          Jasmine Lu

2.          Middle man–                                                                  Jasmine Lu

3.          Self-reliance–                                                                 Stephen Tjia

4.          Sustainable–                                                                   Stephen Tjia

5.          Mercantilism–                                                                Daniel Liu

6.          Capitalism–                                                                    Daniel Chen

7.          Socialism–                                                                      Daniel Chen

8.          Laissez-faire Capitalism—                                              Kaho Koseki

9.          Zero-sum Paradigm–                                                     Tracy Kao

10.      Adam Smith–                                                                  Tracy Kao

11.      Karl Marx–                                                                  Kaho Koseki

12.      Insurance–                                                                      Daniel Liu

Market –

By JASMINE LU

A MARKET is a place where people buy and sell things.

It can be selling foods or furniture, goods or services.

E.g. I bought this chair from this market.

< People wander with bags in markets.

Middle man –

By JASMINE LU

MIDDLEMEN are the people who work between the producer and the marketer.

They usually buy things from the producer and sell it to the marketer.

E.g. My uncle travels a lot because he has to send the kiwis from Australia to Taiwan for the sellers in Taiwan to sell. My uncle is a middleman.

<The Three men: The left, the middle, and the right all enjoying kiwi cycling.

Self-reliance—

BY STEPHEN TJIA

SELF-RELIANCE means that “not depending on others’ help.”

Depend on one’s own ability, judgment, or resources.

Self-reliance in one’s living is means to make money by oneself.

^ Planting crops/agriculture for himself to eat—very self-reliable.

Sustainable—

BY STEPHEN TJIA

SUSTAINABLE means being able to be sustained.

It means able to keep in a certain degree.

Like, we can sustain a good stamina.

That is a kind of sustainable.

Socialism-

BY DANIEL CHEN

SOCIALISM is basically when the government regulates the economy. It’s generally opposite of Capitalism.

Mercantilism:

BY DANIEL LIU

This is the economic system that was before capitalism. MERCANTILISM was big in the 17th and 18th centuries. This system is very different from capitalism, but there are some similarities between these two economic ideas.

Mercantilism is the idea that economy is something physical. The wealth of a country depends on the amount of product and goods it has.

Trading makes a country stronger is their belief. So if a country export more than they import, then this country is strong.

Also in order for one country to grow, another country must fall. This is an example of the zero-sum idea.

Capitalism-

BY DANIEL CHEN

In a CAPITALIST SYSTEM, there are lots of middle class people, few rich and some poor people.

It’s generally opposite of Socialism.

^ The social hierarchy simplified and in a pyramid shape.

Karl Marx—

BY KAHO KOSEKI

KARL MARX was an important 19th century German thinker.

He focused on economics and its relationship to power.

He argued that history was really the story of class conflict between the haves and the have-nots.

Marx’s most famous work is The Communist Manifesto which he wrote with Friedrich Engels.

^Karl Marx…the Stick Man version

Adam Smith—

BY TRACY KAO

Many people call ADAM SMITH the “Father of Economics.” He is a man from Scotland who wrote a famous book called An Inquiry into the Nature and Causes of the Wealth of Nations 234 years ago. It was around the time of the American Revolutionary War.

Adam Smith believes in this system called “free market.” You can buy what you want. You can also make what you want to sell to others. If everyone did what they wanted to, with least amount of government control, then the public will be able to do what they want to do. This is the “laissez-faire approach,” which causes people to make their own decisions and result in gaining the maximum benefits.

The “invisible hand’ of competition, the push for lowest prices and best quality will move the system forward with new inventions and tides of advancement and change. But, Adam Smith did not want complete freedom for people though, and he also recognized problems with his ideas , such as big companies joining together to form one gigantic corporation , or companies partnering with other companies to limit the people’s choices of what they want to buy.

<The “invisible hand” of competition.

Zero-Sum Paradigm—

BY TRACY KAO

The idea of the ZERO-SUM PARADAIGM can be understood by taking apart the three words. Zero means none. Zero. Zero apples is no apples. Zero score means you didn’t write any of the answers correct. Sum is adding many numbers together, and that final total count is called the sum of the numbers. For example, the sum of 1 and 2 is 3. Paradigm is an idea that is very common, popular, and known that most people think about during a time.

So, put the three words together, and you get the definition: Zero-Sum Paradigm is a (in the past) popular idea that sides, gains and losses, add up to zero. If you win a point, someone else loses a point. Overall, there were no gains and losses.

^ 1 and -1 form a total of 0

Laissez-faire—

BY KAHO KOSEKI

LAISSEZ-FAIRE: this is an economic idea. It says that the government should not be involved in business and should leave companies alone. It is a French word that basically translates as “leave it alone.”

Insurance—

BY DANIEL LIU

Whenever your toy is broken or lost, what do you usually do? I usually go straight to my parents, and I ask for another one. That is INSURANCE. Your parents will usually go buy another one for you, or they will try their best to find the toy. If the toy is fixable, they will get it fix. Your toy is now insured by your parents. However in the real world, you usually don’t get free insurance. Usually, you have to pay insurance companies to get the insurance. In a real life, people would get insurance for themselves. That means that if anything bad happens to them, they will get money to help them. There is also medical insurance; this insurance will pay for your medical needs. Usually, you still have to pay a small amount each time you go to a doctor. There are much other insurance around the world such as cars, houses, natural disasters, and many more.

^ Highly satirical and opinionated view on insurance.

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So that was our economic review right there.

For week February 21, we were given the homework:

1. Make at least 1 insightful and creative post relating to you rnaion in our World Simulation.

2. Make at lest 1 insightful and creative post on your portfolio demonstrating your understanding and opinions on European Economics in the 19th Century.

3. Post your essay on the past, present, and future of Economics on your Portfolio by midnight, Wednesday, February 30th.

Since today is quite the perfect day for writing blogs entries like these, I am now going to testify, confess, or however you want to put it, the first of the three homework assignments. Now I’m going to warn you that every thing from now on is going to be truthful. I am basically going to spit out the thoughts previously hidden in the darkest parts of my conscious self…which is where most of my thoughts roam around anyway.

For the first assignment, I am going to tell you how I feel about creating our own nation in our World Simulation game and  also my inspirations for the policies, laws, choices, etc, that I have chosen for our nation. However, I am not going to give away nation secrets, of course. Most of our nation secrets are with the Foreign Aff. E, so don’t expect too much “behind the scenes” information from me. I am only going to tell you about the process of creating our Nation.

First of all, my classmates and even Mrs. Kinzer, may already have noticed the enthusiasm and zeal that I display from the first day the game was introduced up till now, and will persist into the future. Many people understand why people get interested in games like these, but they must feel surprised by how high my spirits get hyped up compared to theirs. The secret lies in my personality. I am a stubborn and greedy person. Since I was in kindergarten I have been doing business. I used to just draw seahorses on paper and then sell them. I still remember them: small one for 1 NT, 2 larger ones for 5, some for 10, and the super large and special one, was for 25. My friend bought it. I got scolded for doing that. Then, when we grew up, we would fake our stores. Every girl had their own school table decorated as stores. We would have cardboard cashiers and shelves with products from home made of thrown away tissue boxes. We’d use paper and draw out our own currency system, and we’d “sell” things to each other. Oh, god. We loved that game. And I remember, the last time I played that game was when Wii first came out. I called my store “Wii” with a ghost as the icon. Unfortunately, what I sold I can’t remember. It’s usually something weird 😛

I love business. I find it interesting. To create a self-sufficient, working, economic system is a great achievement. Even if the model is only a small one, unrealistic, and even too fictitious for reality to operate on, I just have this burning desire to create it. To put in other words, I have passion for creation and understanding. That’s why, being able to put my ideas into action, which this Simulation is able to do, really fascinates me.

First of all, our Nation name. It sounds wild, doesn’t it? Territory 21. It sounds like a underdeveloped country. It sounds like a warring nation. However, in my opinion, the weirder it sounds, the less other countries would want to be involved in. I wanted to isolate our country. Well…our position in the world actually caused the opposite effect. We became the center of focus around every dispute, especially with our borders.

We naturally created several enemies because of the resources we have. We want steel, iron, metals because that implies technology. We want food so that we won’t have to depend on others for the necessity of life like North Korea does. We want timber so that paper industry and furniture industry can be formed. Plant diversity comes with forest variety, so herbs and medicine (Chinese) will flourish, too. However, because it so happens that a lot of countries share the same resources, we are constantly competing with others.

I really wanted a governing system like Napoleon’s way and also Japan…how to say…a bit imperialistic yet quite democratic? I wanted a group of elders to rule, but a lot of citizen participation. I really had a problem with the US Judicial court. Even with the jury, I hate it to have unrelated people decide your fate. I feel it’s just like asking someone else who is clueless to decided your future for you. I really don’t like it. That’s why I set up the idea of having a ruler class of elders…presbyterian, kind of. That kind of explains for the “theoretically equality before court thing.

The limited freedom of speech is really just a satire of the modern countries that make themselves seem free while you can’t really say anything you want. Varied/free religion is because I think that religion should be allowed to grow under the guidance of the government. So, I guess that explains it.

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The Essay:

Power of All or Power of One

By Tracy Kao.

The nineteenth century saw several changes happen throughout the years; massive military campaigns that swept through Europe caused waves of nationalism to develop, and technological advances led to new inventions and industries. Another extremely significant change that faced the Western world of the 19th century was the growing distance from mercantilism and the zero-sum paradigm mindset. Out of these struggles came two major economic systems: capitalism and socialism. In this essay, we will look into the ideal world crafted by the great minds for both economic systems of the 19th century as well as evaluate the two economic systems.

The first thing to look at is capitalism. Capitalism is the idea that value is obtained by property ownership, mostly characterized by private rather than public or cooperative means of production and wealth distribution. It has also been said that, regarding capitalism, “ownership of property grants the owner of the property full rights to all of the value of that property. That is, at its core, what capitalism is about, the ownership of rights to value.” (Price, R. G. 2003) Capitalists manipulate capital to profit. All value is obtained or earned by private ownership of property in the capitalist system. Capitalism also builds itself upon the idea of Adam Smith’s laissez-faire, or “don’t interfere” approach. It claims that the least amount of government involvement in economic affairs is the most beneficial to the system.

In the 19th century, with the industrial revolution and the dissolution of previous feudal economic systems, the nobility and aristocracy lost power and credibility. Instead, the growing class of the merchants, bankers, businessmen, and factory owners—the capital-owning capitalists that controlled the means of production. The rise of the machine age showed people that there were easier ways to amount great wealth. The notion of economic liberty and independence also helped bring a lot of popularity to capitalist thought when they are given the freedom of competition. In fact, “competition is the engine of capitalism… The ultimate success in competition, indeed, is to absorb or destroy rivals and emerge at the top of the heap, able to dictate wages and prices.” (Brians, Paul 2005) There were many advantages of this growing capitalist economy.

First of all, less government involvement prevented issues like corruption. The invisible hand of competition naturally pushes for better products of higher quality, and effective production. Furthermore, by owning more, you can also earn more money. It encourages people to work harder to make more money. However, there are also bad consequences that come with capitalism. Adam Smith writes in his An Inquiry into the Nature and Causes of the Wealth of Nations, “ It is not form the benevolence of the butcher, the brewer, or the baker that we expect our dinner, but from their regard to their own interest.” Most often, greed is associated as an engine that drove capitalism to provide work and prosperity. Capitalist society looks down on dependency (Brians, Paul 2005), and notoriously exploits the lower population. The infamous Industrial Revolution led to extreme use of labor for mass production. Factory workers worked long hours in unsanitary conditions for low wages. Furthermore, with the old rules dropped, workers could be hired and fired at the will of the employer. Competition within the workers for employment resulted in the men having to work cheap in order to get a job. Factory owners often employed women and children because they received lower wages. Because of this, living standards and education declined. Another thing that was really harmful for the people were the sudden boom and bust cycles that happen when sudden the economy fluctuates between good and bad times. It seems that the competition and greed of the property owners were leading to the destruction and poverty of the impoverished common people. It was inevitable that radical reform was needed.

In an attempt to seek refuge in a system that served the lower class better than capitalism did, many supporters followed the ideals of socialism. 19th century socialists, though at first comprised of only “idealistic industrialists and middle-class intellectuals,” (Brians, Paul 2005) advocated a system that eventually led to a lot of reforms. The aim of socialism can be summarized by the following three principles: “1st. The equitable diffusion of wealth. 2nd. The abolition of all class privileges and man. 3rd. The universal diffusion of such an education to the individual, as shall fit and qualify him for taking his place and discharging his allotted task in the social machine.” (Gosman, A. 1891) With the first aim, they developed the ideas that property should be shared and made public. While capitalists believe that they deserve the wealth because they were the property owners of the capital that created the wealth, socialists believe that the wealth deserves to be distributed to the underpaid working class who produced the products. The problem, socialists believe, lies in the poverty that surrounds the lower class. Their ideal world was a stable one with equality where the economy was planned and run cooperatively for the benefit of the public. Everyone helps everyone else. Benefits should be extended to every individual in the community, so that not a single member of the community is left behind and excluded from those benefits.

Karl Marx, one of the most famous of the 19th century socialists, pushed for an even more ideal stage of socialism. He believes the class struggle will eventually lead to a society not based on wealth, where ownership is public, war abolished, and products are owned by producers. The larger lower class will cause an armed uprising against the smaller capitalist rulers of society, and they will be able to seize that power for the good of the public. Despite how great the ideal socialist community sounds like, it’s easier said than done.

In an effort to promote socialist ideals, circles and groups of socialists and intellectuals banded together to form groups hoping to institute the ideas to labor in the 19th century. When they were able to gain control politically, they nationalized railroads, mines, and other industries. Capitalists viewed unionization and labor movements as a threat to their wealth, and socialists were often beaten, imprisoned, shot, and always in danger of losing their jobs. However, campaigns were able to shorten the working day, increase wages, and improve working conditions. After socialism gained more public attention, it started to undergo change, eventually focused more on political aspects than economic ones, causing them to lose sight of their goals. Instead, under Joseph Stalin and Mao Zedong’s oppressive governments emerged from the socialist platform, instead putting more pressure and harsh conditions on the workers that they were supposed to represent.

Socialist influence is really temporary, if not actually achieved. While some countries claim to be communist or socialist, they are really just larger private owners, “the temptation of authorities from top to bottom of the system …lie about both supply and demand constantly…workers stealing from their factories, managers overestimating their output and bureaucrats reporting whatever the current leadership would be most pleased to hear which in the end brought the system to its knees.” (Brians, Paul 2005) For example, the Great Leap Forward and the agricultural advancements that China had attempted during Mao’s rule ultimately led to failure because in fear of punishment or losing their jobs, local governors often made up statistics and reports by exaggerating their production capabilities and actual supply. Therefore, under these situations where the system is not entirely socialist, the idea wouldn’t work. Labor unions’ power started to dwindle across the world as capitalists gained power. Once again, the problems with capitalism arose, but as socialist reform could no longer provide support and protection for the working class, they were forced to comply once again with the longer work ours, decreased income, and fear of unemployment. When the capitalist countries continue to develop and advance their technologies and wealth, they spread their influence throughout the world through violent or non-violent persuasion. Even so-called communist countries like China or actual more socialist countries like North Korea claim equality, it is obvious that the situation is not so. In China, the rich and the poor are largely polarized. Freedom is often put in stake. In North Korea, people are constantly living under enclosure, with no outside access. Food shortages and violent behavior lead to frightening lives for the people. Based on the way the modern world operates, it is tempting to think that capitalism is the only solution that can increase the wealth of nations, but does it have to be so?

Before the nineteenth century, capitalism was only an option. It was an alternative that developed as the machinery and technology advanced. Paul Brians makes a good point in his “Introduction to 19th Century Socialism” by pointing out that “Marxism never did fail; it was never tried.” While capitalism may be on the win for now as being the popular and working solution to the problems faced by the people, we are still suffering from the consequences, especially the boom and the bust cycles and the recent economic crisis. Although I wouldn’t believe that socialism is the best solution, the conditions weren’t right for Marx’s ideas to develop. As events progress, conditions may change. Mixed economies may choose to become more socialist as an alternative to the capitalist consequences. No one knows what will happen in the future, but one thing’s for certain. In the future, a possible solution to the economic problems will develop from our modern economic systems just as we have progressed since the 19th century.

Works Cited

Brians, Paul. (2005). Introduction to 19th-Century Socialism. (Rev. Ed.) Retrieved March 1, 2011 from http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/hum_303/socialism.html

Gosman, A. (1891). Socialism in the Light of Right Conduct and Religion. Stillwell and Co., Printers. Retrieved March 2, 2011 from http://www.reasoninrevolt.net.au/pdf/a000042a.pdf

Price, R. G. (2003). Understanding Capitalism Part I: Capital and Society. Retrieved March 1, 2011 from http://rationalrevolution.net/articles/capitalism_economy.htm

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Questions


  • What is the limit of human society’s “expansion”?
  • Does the ‘end’ justify the means?
  • Is it possible for “both sides” to win–to expand and grow their quality of life?
  • Can something really be bad for one group of people, and good for another? Should we continue to devastate others for our own gain?
  • Should we protect what we have, or change it to make it better?
  • Is it more important to plan for the future, appreciate the past, or enjoy the present?
  • What is worth sacrificing for convenience?
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CASE STUDY 2: CHASING THE AMERICAN DREAM


Let’s celebrate the completion of one case study, and welcome the arrival of another exciting start: the second case study of the year!

CASE STUDY 2: CHASING THE AMERICAN DREAM.

For the prezi, please click on this link: http://prezi.com/f8hjmj3kk2sw/the-american-dream/

Artifact 1: The American Dream Travel Co.

WELCOME ABOARD THE ROAD TO THE AMERICAN DREAM!

This is The American Dream Travel Company, offering the best national travel routes and destination packages! We give customers the smoothest and shortest rides to the places they wish to go to, as well as the lowest prices. That’s right! Come in a group, and you get a discount. In addition, the first 100 people to join will enjoy a 5% off special offer! What are you waiting for?!

Right now, we offer five destinations!

Destinations:

1. San Francisco via Clipper Ship-

This travel package is the ideal for those who crave for a view of the sea! Ever wanted to visit the gold coast? Just join our clipper ship tour to San Francisco, sunny California! San Francisco, originally named Yerba Buena and under Mexico rule, is now a flourishing city!

Enjoy the different perspectives from people from various culture and places. Meet the delicious Chinese cuisine from the immigrants at Chinatown! For a taste of national goods, check out Levi Strauss’ dry goods business and Domingo Ghirardelli’s chocolate stores. Get a feel for the special taste of San Francisco, California!

Interested in commerce and businesses? The Port of San Francisco and the Pacific Railroad connect many other entrepreneurs to this brilliant town. Banking businesses were on the rise. Famous banks like the Bank of California and Wells Fargo bring you the new San Francisco, the trading center where people invest in all kinds of industry.

This tour not only takes you to the roads and streets with the Victorian architecture, we also visit historical sites, such as Portsmouth Square, the first public square, the place where the first American flag was raised after the Mexican-American War, and the place of gold discovery. We will also take you across the coast for you to get a sight of the military forts of Golden Gate and Alcatraz Island while you enjoy the ocean breeze.

The origin of the rumors concerning gold and silver discovery, San Francisco is  an area rich in its minerals. Floods of treasure hunters make their way here with their wagons in one hand and their sourdough breads in another. Let us trace their paths to San Francisco!

The cost is cheap, too! Transportation will be via clipper ships! We will board the Humanities, the splendid A1 First Class ship of the Merchants’ Express Line of Clipper Ships for San Francisco!  Under the command for Captain Kinzer, we will start at Boston Massachusetts, and head for San Francisco, California!

COST

Adult -$1.50

Children -$1.20

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Flyer sample:

(<Our Company’s Pamphlet for the Trip…)

2. Promontory Summit, Utah Territory via Transcontinental Railroad. NEW!!!-

It’s been a few years since the Pacific Transcontinental Railroad was finally made public. On May 10, 1869, the railroad was completed, when the Central Railway and the Union Railway met at Promontory Summit, Utah Territory after 6 years of independent construction of the Pacific Railroad. This provided with a new way to travel back and forth from the West and the East. Now, with this new form of transportation, it only takes you days to travel from one side of the continent to the other!

So, join us on our journey to retrace the paths of the railroad. With two points to start at: Sacramento, California of the Central Railroad and Omaha, Nebraska of the Union Pacific. From these two places, two groups of people will journey to Promontory Point as a rendezvous point, 4902 ft above sea level. We will relive the historical day where all the hard work of the 6 years escalated to the Golden Spike, that single day of pure joy and success.

Interested in a ride?

Costs are:

Adult: $1.00 per train ride

Children:$0.95 per train ride

For more information, please contact any of our branch-offices

Join us! Just sign up at one of our offices. We will provide you with the necessary tickets!

Enjoy your ride!

3.The Alamo-

Do you remember the Alamo?

The Alamo, a famous battle during the Texas Revolution and took place February and March of 1836. The heroic fight between the generals Davy Crockett and James Bowie and the rebels against the Mexican army General Santa Anna; the fight where around 500 people died.

Will you join us, in the memoir of those 500 who died, as well as those who fought so strongly for their beliefs? In this travel pack, we head for the Alamo, also known as the Mission San Antonio de Valero, the Roman Catholic mission and fortress compound at which the battle was held at. Even though it was a failure, which ended up in defeat, it was a turning point in the Texas Revolution as many of our nation’s army generals and supporters joined the side for the Independence and release of Texas from Mexican control.

So, join us!!!We will be taking the transcontinental railroad, then switching to carriages.

Cost:

Adult: $2.00 (railroad x 2) + $1.20 (carriage x 2)= $3.20(total, to and back)

Children: $1.90 (railroad x 2) + $1.10(carriage x 2)= $3.00 (total, to and back)

Other destinations available at Tina/Jasmine’s Prezi Page:

  1. Statue of  Liberty, New York-
  2. Silver Springs, Florida-

CONTACT US! The Name Cards of Three Agents:


Reflections:

1. Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is related to Communication and Transportation Revolution. It is, because of new technology like the clipper ships and the transcontinental railroad, people were able to travel easier to other places and rebuild their lives.

Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other main topics that this artifact is also related to include Human Movement and Migration, Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City, Building the Modern Economy, and The Notion of the Frontier.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Of the destinations that were suggested on the Moodle page, I decided to choose the above five destinations mostly because they stood out to me. I have heard of them before, and thus have greater interest in them. I spent quite a lot of time doing research, the whole thing involved two days.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: Besides having more understanding over the economics of business and advertisement, I also gained new insight into what was valuable for people of the 19th century.

Also, I gained factual knowledge over the significance of the various destinations and how they tied into the overall branching topic of “Westward Expansion.”

For example, the Californian Gold Rush brought a lot of people over from the East to the West coast, causing a shift of the businesses. Promontory Summit was the place the final spike of the Pacific Transcontinental Railroad was put into place. The Transcontinental Railroad of 19th century United States was the first, and led to many technological advancements. The completion of the railroad also allowed the businesses to import resources and materials from other parts of the United States.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: I believe that this artifact does reflect my best work, mostly just because of my interest in these affairs. First, I am genuinely attracted to social science, study of how people react to the action of others. Therefore, advertisement becomes a lot of fun when I try to think about what exactly will attract the people to these destinations. Also, I really like creating art. Therefore, making these brochures becomes very fun for me. 🙂

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: A 5 for sure 🙂 Because of this colorful and more interesting artifact to begin with, many people will feel encouraged to continue down the page.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: This artifact, although it took away a lot of my time, certainly was worth the trouble. Therefore, I give it a 4 for happiness and enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

A: 5! This artifact is very good for my learning, not just because that I can both learn and also apply my knowledge into creative original works within one artifact only, but also because United States history is one large missing part in my knowledge of the social studies. I intend to use this chance to fill up this hole.

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: This artifact certainly tests one’s level of creativity and originality, not only at making these advertisements for the traveling company attractive, but also visually appealing. In addition, the assignment itself is creative. Therefore, for the level of creativity and originality, I will give it a 5.

6. Any Additional comments

For more information related to this, feel free to browse the following websites:\

San Francisco:

Promontory Summit:

The Alamo:

Artifact 2: A Map of the Railroads

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 3: Google Earth Tour

Mapping Lewis and Clark’s Expedition

Mapping Lewis and Clark’s Expedition.

To download the Google Earth Tour, please visit this site:

http://www.mediafire.com/?9b9p82m24laeo57

Thank you.

The Google Earth Tour encompasses the trip to the Continental Divide

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A:This artifact is related to the Notion of the Frontier. It is so because Lewis are Clark were trying to find out about the unknown, to be able to discover a world beside theirs.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other main topics that this artifact is also related to include Human Movement and Migration, Communication and Transportation Revolution.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Although the artifact was chosen by the teacher, I decided to choose the first of the whole expedition to focus on because it was the most exciting part, and I guess that’s all I can get through as close as possible to the time limit (I talk slow whenever I am recording :P) …This took actually a whole day. I was surprised at low long this actually took.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: I guess I didn’t really have any new insight or understanding. The thing I learned from this artifact were facts about the expedition of Lewis and Clark.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Hm…I wouldn’t say so. This artifact doesn’t reflect my best work and/or ideas because I am not used to Google Earth as well as recording myself talking.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio. A: It adds a new flavor to it. It is interesting for sure. 4!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: Eh, to tell the truth, I didn’t enjoy it too much, mostly because of the long time it took. So, I guess a 1.

c) Impact on your learning. A: Hm. I did learn a lot of new facts, but I don’t think I was able to get many of the deeper concepts. 2!

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: Is it possible to make something creative and original with this one? I think that the requirements of this artifact itself is creative, but as for the rest, not really. 3.

6. Any Additional comments

I hope that you guys will feel alright with me putting emphasis on only half of the trip, but I’m sure that you guys will rather have a shorter one than a longer one 😛

Artifact 4: Gapminder Analysis

In this time’s Gapminder Analysis, we examine three graphs:

1. Child Fertility Rate:

At first there seems to be a steady decline, but soon, it seems like income started to increase by a lot near the mid-to late-1800s. This was probably due to the rise of power of the United States. After the Civil War and the completion of the railroad, there was a great need for the reconstruction. Therefore, many people moved near the cities, and when population rose, and the need for jobs also rose, it seem like the income also rose, even if the fertility rate was lower. However, if you see, most countries have lower fertility rates as their economy gets better and better, so it was a “good” sign for American citizens.

2. CO2 Emissions since 1820:

It is very interesting to note that the population, income, as well as the CO2 (carbon dioxide) amount seem to increase quite exponentially. At first a mere dot, it slowly grows to become a whole blob. Following the 1830s, income started to increase with the carbon dioxide level. Indeed, the rate of change has also hastened its pace. As you can see, the first circles were very close together, but it started to spread out. Of course, there were times when there were exceptions, probably due to events like the Civil War and others, which cause a lot of CO2 emissions (gunfire +burning of the villages). Particularly interesting and worth noting is the change after the 1880s. It seems like carbon dioxide was suddenly on the rise. I guess it was because of a period of great competition between the various world powers, right before WWI. The late 1800s marked the height of the American Industrial Revolution, so as far as the CO2 emissions go, it made sense.


3. The Wealth and Health of Nations:

While pretty constant at first, once it reached the mid to late 1800s, life expectancy started to suddenly rise. I suppose this is due to the medical advances that were really well done during that time. Vaccination as well as more research in science and technology contributed to this. The progress was certainly steady but also fast at first until the middle, where the life expectancy suddenly rocketed. It was surprising to me, and income was increasing as well. The population grew a lot bigger near and after the turning point as well, so it made sense.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is related to the topic: “Human Health.” That is because all three of these graphs concern the influences the body has with the environment. For example, the first is the child fertility rate, which deals with whether the conditions were favorable having more children or not. The second regarded the CO2 emissions. Although economy rose, the conditions did not exactly become healthier. CO2 emissions suddenly increased greatly, probably due to all the factories and steam ships that traveled throughout the United States. The third graph regarded the wealth and health of nations. Although CO2 emissions were shown in the second graph to increase, it seems like life expectancy increased in length as well by the late 1800s. My hypothesis is based on the medical procedures that were redeveloped or researched during that time. These results were able to be used onto the general public, allowing a safer overall health of the people.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This artifact is also related to Building the Modern Economy, Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City, and The Universe Through a Telescope. All of these graphs deal with potential problems or advancements that followed the development of the United States socially as well as technologically during the 1800s.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Quite unexpectedly, I only spent 1 hour on this artifact. I really expected something like 3 hours 😛 I chose to do these because I wanted to see how the wars might have influenced the overall health of the people. I must say that I was prepared to see the worst. Perhaps my expectations were too pessimistic, since I was very surprised by the data, especially the sudden great growth of the life expectancy. Of course, I knew that it would grow by a great amount, but I really didn’t expect it to rise up so quickly in such a short matter of time.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: I guess the insights and understanding that I have gained from the creation of this artifact is mostly about the influences of the various events that happened in the United States during the 19th century, such as the American Civil War and also the other inventions later on.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: I guess it does. I actually don’t really know, since I haven’t tried many other types of artifacts yet, but I think so.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio. A: I think that analysis of statistics are important. 5!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: Actually, gapminder analysis are fun 🙂 Quite unexpectedly, of course. a 5!

c) Impact on your learning. A: I think that doing this activity has great impact on my learning. 5!

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: Hm, this artifact doesn’t really requires me to make anything of my own besides think of ideas related to the statistics given, so I guess a 2?

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 5: Primary Source Evaluation-OPVL

Crossing the Plains, 1865

Based on the primary source from http://www.eyewitnesstohistory.com/plains.htm , we learn more about Westward Expansion of Nineteenth Century United States.

Not only does the website show one actual ‘witness’s’ point of view, it also provides an explanation at the beginning to introduce background information for the primary source. Therefore, from that, we know the following information:

  • Europeans expanded towards the East Coast of the Mississippi through the  300 years between 1500 to 1800.
  • While most people of the early 19th century thought that it would take 300 more years to completely fill the whole eastern part of the United State, many factors accelerated the process:
    • Louisiana Purchase
    • Californian Gold Rush
    • Promise of fertile land (attracted around 300,000 over)
    • Homestead Act during the Civil War
  • People followed westward trails “with wagon trains loaded with all their worldly possessions.” The trek West was a rough one for most people.
  • Sarah Raymond (the narrator of this primary source( journeyed with her father, father, mother, and brothers. This is from her diary, and most people assume that she is at a teenager’s age.
  • Their journey was between May 1,1865 (Missouri) till September 6, (Virginia City, Montana Territory)
  • The journey includes details about the adventures and difficulties.
  • After they arrived at their destination, Sarah got married and stayed there for the rest of her life. She published her journal in the local newspapers in the late nineteenth century, and published it as a book in the early 1900s.
  • These particular journal entries took place 6 weeks after Sarah and her family left Missouri. They arrive at Fort Kearney, Nebraska Territory in wagons, one of the major stations on the road to the west. There, they are confronted with difficulties…

Eleven Graves

Monday, June 12

We stood by the graves of eleven men that were killed last August by the Indians. There was a sort of bulletin-board about midway and at the foot of the graves stating the circumstances of the frightful tragedy. They were a party of fourteen, twelve men and two women, wives of two of the men. They were camped on Plum Creek, a short distance from where the graves are. They were all at breakfast except one man who had gone to the creek for water, he hid in the brush, or there would have been none to tell the tale of the massacre.

There had been no depredations committed on this road all Summer, and emigrants had become careless and traveled in small parties. They did not suspect that an Indian was near until they were surrounded, and the slaughter had commenced. All the men were killed and scalped, and the women taken prisoners. They took what they wanted of the provisions burned the wagons and ran off with the horses.

The one man that escaped went with all haste to the nearest station for help. The soldiers pursued the Indians, had a fight with them and rescued the women. One of them had seen her husband killed and scalped and was insane when rescued and died at the station. The other woman was the wife of the man that escaped. They were from St. Joe, Missouri.”

Killed on the Road

“Sunday, July 16

Just after we crossed the bridge, and where there is a sudden turn in the road, as it winds around the mountain, we saw where two men had been killed and two wagons burned last week. The tire became loose on a wheel of the next to the last wagon in a freight train, the men stopped to tighten it, while the rest of the train moved on, not thinking of danger, and was out of sight in a few minutes. An hour later some of the men came back to see what kept them. There they were – dead and scalped – horses gone, and wagons on fire. The Indians had taken all the freight they could use, piled wood under the wagons, and set it on fire. We saw quantities of white beans scattered over the ground, also the irons from the wagons.”

The Dust

“Wednesday, July 26

…I did not awake this morning until everything was ready for a very early start. Mother had kept my breakfast warm by keeping the stove until the last minute. I sat in the wagon and ate my breakfast after the train had started. When through, I climbed out and went to see how Neelie [Sarah’s friend] was. I found her feverish and restless; her symptoms unfavorable.

Oh, the dust, the dust; it is terrible. I have never seen it half as bad; it seems to be almost knee-deep in places. We came twenty miles without stopping, and then camped for the night. We are near a fine spring of most excellent water – Barrel Spring it is called. I do not know why; there are no barrels there. When we stopped, the boys’ faces were a sight; they were covered with all the dust that could stick on. One could just see the apertures where eyes, nose and mouth were through the dust; their appearance was frightful. How glad we all are to have plenty of clear cold water to wash away the dust.”

Murder in Camp

(As Sarah rides along with the wagon train she is approached by a friend – Frank – from a portion of the train that had split off to travel on its own. Her friend has news:)

“Saturday, August 5

‘Frasier was shot and killed day before yesterday evening.’

‘Oh Frank; how did it happen?’

‘Hosstetter did it, but I think he was not much to blame’

Frasier is the man who spoke to Cash, Neelie and I, as we were watching the wagons ferried across the Missouri River, whose son ran away from his mother, and home, to come to his father, and go with him to Montana. Frasier had teams and wagons for freighting and Hosstetter some capital to invest in freight, to take to Montana. Frasier advised the purchase of flour, and he would freight it to Virginia City for fifteen dollars per cwt. He said flour was worth fifty and sixty dollars per hundred in Virginia City. (So it was in the Spring of 1864, and as high as seventy-five and one hundred dollars per one hundred, which was the cause of a bread riot in Virginia City.)

No doubt Frasier was honest in his advice, and would have invested in flour for himself. He charged more freight than was right, for ten and twelve cents is the prevailing price; but then Hosstetter should have found that out himself.

When he found he had been imposed upon and learned that flour is retailing at Virginia City for $15 per hundred, he was angry, dissatisfied, and perhaps quarrelsome. Frasier was no doubt very aggravating. They had quarreled several times, and the evening of the 3d, Frasier was heard to say to Hosstetter in a threatening tone:

‘You may consider yourself lucky if you ever see Montana. You need not expect to get any of this flour. It will take it all to pay the freight.’

It was getting dark, and Fraser stood with one hand on a wheel as he talked. He then got into the wagon and out again, with something in his hand, which Hosstetter thought was a revolver in the gathering darkness. He came back to the wheel where he had been standing when he made the threat, and Hosstetter thought he had come to shoot him, and fired twice, as he thought, to save his own life, Frasier fell, shot through the brain, and died instantly.

Then it was found he had a hatchet in his hand and had come to tighten a tire on the wheel, which he had found loose when he laid his hand on it. Frasier’s eldest son of fourteen years is here. There are five children and their mother at home. Hossteter has three children and a wife. Eleven innocent persons to suffer, no one knows how intensely, for that rash act.

Frasier’s son knelt beside his father’s dead body and placing his hand on his breast, he swore a fearful oath that he would have but one purpose in life until his father’s death is avenged. Oh, what a shocking ambition for so young a boy.”

Later in her diary, Sarah describes the trial of Hosstetter:

“…The men from these four trains elected judge, jury, prosecuting attorney and lawyer for the defense, and have tried Hosstetter for murder. The jury brought in a verdict of ‘Not guilty.’ He shot in self-defense, as Frasier had threatened to kill him.”

Sarah’s diary entry a day later notes that a squad of soldiers came and took Hosstetter to a fort near Green River (Wyoming) for an official trial. However, she does not reveal the outcome of that trial.

River Crossing

“Thursday, August 24

We came to a toll bridge over the Blackfoot this morning, where the toll was one dollar per team and fifty cents for horseback riders. There had been an excellent ford just below the bridge. The men collecting the toll had spoiled it by digging ditches on both sides near the bank. The water was clear, and they were plainly visible. Hillhouse [Sarah’s brother] mounted Dick [Sarah’s horse] to see if we could ford it. One of the men screamed out at him: ‘You will mire your horse if you try that.’

‘I’ll risk it.’ And he rode in below where the ditches were dug. The pony’s feet were not muddy. Hillhouse found we could easily ford he creek below the ditches, which we did without accident.

It does seem a shame that we should have to pay toll for crossing a stream like that, after fording South Platte, North Platte and Green River.

The Missourians refused to pay the exorbitant price, and offered them fifty cents per wagon. They swore they would not take a cent less than one dollar. But the travelers were too many for them, and they drove over and did not pay a cent. The toll men were fearfully angry, and made great threats, but the men dared them to do their worst and laughed at them.

I do hope we will get ahead of these people to-morrow. They are not the kind of people I like to travel with.”

Origin:

This primary source document was published as part of a journal from Sarah Raymond who made the trek west with her family as well as other Missourians. She published the collection of the journals in 1902 as a book, and it was put onto the website in 1999. It was published onto the web by the “Eye Witness to History” organization.

Purpose:

This document exist because the author wanted to keep track of what happened during her trip to the west. She later published it in the newspapers because her friends insisted it, and after that, into book form. The author chose this particular format probably because it was the best way to keep track of the information during that time, having the series of events happen in chronological order with each entry like a ‘progress report’ along the way. The intended audience is probably for people interested in the difficulties that the travelers were entangled in. This document mostly shows us about the fear people go through in these travels. The fear against the Indians is transformed into a paranoia against even people who are “on your side.” Safety becomes an issue, and violence breaks out.

Value:

The value in this document is in the detailed explanation of what kind of events took place during a journey like what Sarah Raymond went through. From these pieces of information, we can tell that the author dislikes the way that corruption and deception was breaking out within their group, but does have friends and ties made during the time, mostly formed because of having something in common: the journey west and a hatred and sense of security against whatever danger may appear. We can tell, from the documents, that it was a period where money was very important. It was also a time during or after the transcontinental railroad’s construction. “Controversies” that were present during this time was probably whether the Indians were peaceful or not. It seemed like the author feared the natives because they seemed to be attacking the people from neighboring regions for no particular reason, the men killed and scalped, the women taken prisoners, all the possessions raided, their wagons burnt.

Limitations:

The side of which is not visible in this story is about how the Indians feel about strangers going through their territory. We can verify the content of the piece by comparing it with other diaries or letters. However, it makes a lot of sense. The limitations of this story is mostly because of its perspective. It’s coming from a teenage girl who was probably mostly kept inside the wagon and safe from exterior troubles, but if it was from the point of view from a boy, or a man, it might have been very different. While the girl may have just heard about the news from another person, guys or men would probably have witnessed or even took part in the events. This selection mostly focuses on illness, disease, traveling difficulties, and murder. However, there must be more aspects of travel that are more enjoyable, such as the scenery or the spirit of adventure. That seemed to be left out.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is related to the main topic: Human Movement and Migration. This is because the main focus and purpose of the document was to document the path of travel, especially the dangers revolving author Sarah Raymond and family on their trek to the west.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This topic is related to Human Health, The Notion of the Frontier, and Communication and Transportation Revolution. Someone gets sick on the route, there are many unknown dangers that surround the people, and while some of them travel by wagon, there were also train travelers.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

I chose this artifact because I believe that it fits into the topic very well. People would want to know what went on during the travels to the west that were so often mentioned throughout 19th United States.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: Most of the understanding that I have gained from the creation of this artifact is understanding actually how severe the “Indian problem” was. I thought that the Natives were more loose on the settlers, and ignored them most of the time.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

This artifact is mostly examining the work of others and explaining them, so I guess it can’t reflect my best ideas and best work.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: Finally, I have the perspective from someone else 🙂 So, 5!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: I guess a 3? The melancholy in the tone of the documents affected me.

c) Impact on your learning. A: 3. I certainly knew about what went on during the travels, but the severity of the difficulties certainly was new.

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: 2? Aside from the ideas that I had when examining the document, the content of the actual primary source was from someone else.

6. Any Additional comments

For more primary sources regarding history, please go to the “Eyewitness to History” site. It is a great place to learn about the various perspectives of the people.

Artifact 6: Idea Page

The American Civil War: From an Economics Perspective

For this time’s Idea Page on Civil War Perspectives, I decided to take on a different perspective. This time, it was on the economics of the Civil War. The pages are scanned below (click for larger picture).

Idea Page 1Idea Page 1

Idea Page 2Idea Page 2

Idea Page 3 Idea Page 3

Idea Page 4Idea Page 4

Idea Page 5Idea Page 5

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

The main topic that this artifact is related to is “Building the Modern Economy.” Like the last note on the fifth page says, the economic part to the Civil War was very important, and has affected how the United States economy is, all the way till today’s world.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

Other topics that this artifact is related to include Human Movement and Migration, Nationalism and Liberalism: Creation of the Nation-State, Class Consciousness and The Balance of Power: Empires Rise and Fall.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: While learning about the Civil War, I felt like the economic part of this was very important, but it wasn’t explained well enough, so I did some own research on my part. Actually, it turned out to be very interesting. It didn’t take too long, perhaps an hour and a half. I am pleased with the result.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: Insight is mostly on how the economics and political issues before, during, and after the American Civil War were connected to each other. I also gained a stronger understanding of the causes of the American Civil War, about how each side were fighting for their ideals–the North for their form of government and the South with their form of lifestyle.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Hm…I don’t think that I can truthfully say that it reflects my best work and ideas, but I must say that I put effort into it that I didn’t think I could do before, so I think it does reflect a good part of my best work in research.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio. A: Although scanning text can always cause dizzy eyes, I think it’s an important element. 4!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: This is actually fun! 5!

c) Impact on your learning. A: I love economics. That’s why I think that this did accumulate a bit into my previous knowledge. 3!

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: Hm… Since  this is note-taking and explaining, I won’t say that this is creative or original. 1!

6. Any Additional comments

This is a WONDERFUL website that, for those who are deeply interested in this area of study like I am, should go and visit. It is very detailed, and provides a lot of statistics relevant to this topic:

http://eh.net/encyclopedia/article/ransom.civil.war.us

Artifact 7: Google Sketch-Up

The Recreation of a Civil War Background

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 8: Student Free Choice

Perspectives: Differing Emotions, Differing values.

The following are two poems about the Trail of Tears from two different perspectives: An Indian and A Settler.

Try to guess which is which! (Answers at the bottom)

A.

Like the great twirling winds of the plains, they come unexpected.

Aliens, they are. They come, and gift worthless things.

And now, they ask for more from us.

Cowards accept their wishes.

But, we, warriors of the forests.

We wont make them take away our place. We must stand our ground,

for the sake of those before us who managed to find a place to sit.

We have our roots, so even if they pluck our leaves

Our stems will remain straight and tall.

No matter how many men scalped.

No matter how many brilliant fires explode into the quiet nights.

We will fight for the sake of Mother Nature and the other gods and goddesses.

We must show them that

our gods speak to us

Every tree and every wind

under to moon, we will regain our land.

No matter how many babies cry.

No matter how many wolves howl

We will show that we are every grass and every flower.

This land

is ours.

B.

Those impudent heathens

Do they not get it?

Heart and minds nebulous like their skin

Ignorant they have become

Of what they deserve of what have been given to them

taken granted of our help.

And then, neglecting the shame and disgrace

they attempt to find glory and heroism

in something that’s not even worthy

A tragedy, yes

A true tragedy

but an inevitable one

They can have what they want in the East

we will have what we want in the West

We live in peace

what’s wrong with that?

Yet, these rebels behave like heretics

unorthodox in their logic,

insane

barbaric

a danger to our society

To ensure the safety

and well-being of our future…

let’s silence those disobedient fools

This land

is ours.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

And, now, for the answers!

A. Native American 😛

B.

White American Settler

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This main topic is related to Race Relations: Abolition, Segregation, and Anti-Semitism. That is because, although it isn’t officially called so, I think that the way that the Native Americans were treated wasn’t too much different from the way the white looked at the slaves. Of course, how they were “used” was different, but the similar part is that both were treated unequally. They were “segregated” by being forced to move to another part, someplace that wasn’t home.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other topics that the artifact is related to include Human Expression through the Arts, Human Movement and Migration and Class Consciousness.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose this artifact because it was very interesting. First of all, to be able to complete this artifact to the fullest, not only did you have to understand American conquest over Indian land very well, you also had to understand how these people felt. This artifact really tests one’s ability at that. Therefore, writing things from first person is always fun to do.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

From the creation of this artifact, I have learned a lot of things, such as the attitude that Indians have towards the settlers as well as the vice versa. Most of the new understanding are related to the mistreatment that many of the natives have received, as well as how much I didn’t know about terrible events concerning the discrimination against the natives, such as the Trail of Tears. In the past, I thought that there was more  peace and less violence concerning Westward Expansion. But now, it gave me a deeper understanding and actually a deeper respect as well for human rights.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Since I am not particularly a person talented nor skilled at writing, especially poetry, I probably wouldn’t call this my best work. 😛

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: 2. Although it is text, it is short and kind of empty, and I think that poetry is not my forte.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: Although I did enjoy reading about it, I guess the seriousness affected me. A 1?

c) Impact on your learning.

A: It has certainly positive effects on my learning, so I’ll give it a 4.

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: It certainly tests a person’s level of creativity and originality. A 5.

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 9: Student Free Choice

The Monroe Doctrine: A Student Original Artwork

“The Monroe Doctrine” by Tracy Kao. December 11, 2010. Pencil and color pencil on Paper. Outlining and Labeling done by pen.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is primarily related to The Balance of Power: Empires Rise and Fall. This is because the Monroe Doctrine emphasized the power of the United States over its own territory and demanded that the old world countries in Europe “mind their own business.” Therefore, the United States was developing and becoming bigger while European countries were fighting amongst each other.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: The main topics that this artifact is related to include Human Expression Through the Arts, The Notion of the Frontier, Globalization through Imperialism, and Nationalism and Liberalism: Creation of the Nation-State.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Although drawing took around 2 hours, the research was about 1 hour 😛

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: I gained more insight into what the Monroe Doctrine was about. Also, I didn’t realize before as to why they wanted to do such a thing as well as the importance, but now, after having more information to connect to present-day United States, it’s starting to make sense to me.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: It does show my love fore doodling 🙂 It really tests artistic skill as well as creativity. I think it does reflect my best work. I’m happiest when doing things like this.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: MORE PICTURES! 5!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: DRAWING AND COLORING! 5!

c) Impact on your learning.

A: More information, and also applying it into showing others about that. 4!

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: Definitely original! 5!

6. Any Additional comments

For more information regarding the Monroe Doctrine, feel free to browse through these links:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monroe_doctrine

http://www.u-s-history.com/pages/h255.html

Artifact 10: Student Free Choice

Andrew Jackson and the Indian Removal Act: Another Student Original Artwork 🙂

“Removal Act” by Tracy Kao. December 12, 2010. Pencil and color pencil on paper. Outlining and labeling done by pen.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is related to the main topic Class Consciousness. Although it isn’t exactly correct in saying that the Indians were of a class of American citizens, since they were considered as strangers and foreigners despite being native to their land, it is certain that they are being treated differently from the other people. The infamous Trial of Tears, for example, brought thousands and thousands of  Indians from their homeland to another place, under force of the US troops. It seems obvious that the Indians themselves are aware of their mistreatment.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other main topics that this artifact is also related to include Human Expression through the Arts, Race Relations: Abolition, Segregation, and Anti-Semitism. It is also related to Human Movement and Migration.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Again, I chose to draw something because I feel happier doing that. It also allows me to become more creative. It appears to me that more people learn through visual help than through text. I spent around 2 hours on this one as well.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: From this artifact, I started to understand what led to the ideas of modern day United States’ government when I was researching about Jacksonian democracy as well as the Manifest Destiny. Indeed, I can make connections to today’s world.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Again, drawing usually reflects my best work, so for this one, YES!

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio. A: Something visual, 5!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: DRAWING AND COLORING=5!

c) Impact on your learning. A: Again, it tests understanding and creativity when you learn something new. Therefore, you have to be very good at your subject. I say a 4!

d) Level of creativity and originality A: This work is my own, original. 5!

6. Any Additional comments

A: For more information regarding Andrew Jackson, his form of democracy, and the Indian Removal Act, feel free to look through these websites:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jacksonian_democracy

http://www.cliffsnotes.com/study_guide/Assessing-Jacksonian-Democracy.topicArticleId-25073,articleId-25043.html

http://www.digitalhistory.uh.edu/database/subtitles.cfm?titleID=92

Artifact 11: Student Free Choice

Industrial Revolution in the United States: Yet Another Original Student Artwork ;P

“The Cotton Gin” by Tracy Kao. December 12, 2010. Pencil and color pencil on paper. Outlining and Labeling by pen.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: The main topic that this artifact is related to is Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs. Throughout the 19th century United States, we see a lot of new inventions that helped bring the united states to its power and economic status of the modern day. Examples include and are not limited to: James Watt’s steam engine, Samuel Morse’s telegraph, Cyrus Field’s Transatlantic Cable, Alexander Graham Bell’s telephone, and last but not least, the topic of this art: Eli Whitney’s Cotton Gin.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Because inventions like the cotton gin allowed the United States to mass produce quickly a lot of their own products, leading to great economic growth, it certainly is related to “Building the Modern Economy.” Aside from that, Communication and Transportation Revolution, Human Movement and Migration, and Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City are all related.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Yet again, I chose to draw because I have passion for it! It was roughly around two hours as well.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: I didn’t actually get much insight and understanding out of the creation of this artifact. What I learned was mostly just facts and cause and effect…inventions led to faster production. Efficiency was increased, allowing higher quality and cheaper products. With this, the United States was able to mass produce cotton, and instead of having it be exported to other countries to be manufacture, they could just making the clothing themselves, so that prices will be cheaper within the country.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: YES! If it’s related to art, then it probably reflects my best work or ideas 🙂

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: 5! PICTURES!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: 5! Hooray Drawing and Coloring!

c) Impact on your learning.

A: Um…3. I knew a lot of the stuff already, so I guess most of this was just applying what I knew.

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: 5! This is a student’s original artwork.

6. Any Additional comments

A: For more information regarding technological developments during the 19th century United States, you can always try these few links:
http://americanhistory.about.com/od/industrialrev/Industrial_Revolution.htm

http://americanhistory.about.com/od/industrialrev/tp/inventors.htm

http://americanhistory.about.com/od/industrialrev/a/indrevoverview.htm

Artifact 12: Idea Page

Big Businesses

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 13: Original Prezi

On the Captains of Industry or Robber Barons

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 14: Constitutional Cartoons

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 15: Constitutional Timeline

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

Artifact 16: Checks and Balances

Checks and Balances is the systems devised by the United States federalist government to ensure that the government does not become corrupted given its large power. Based on the systems of ideas of enlightenment philosophers, checks and balances is the separation of power between three branches: the legislature, the executive, and the judicial branch. THe power is distributed quite evenly throughout the branches. During certain times in US history, certain branches had more power than the others, but they all have basic rights over the others, to check on the other branches, with the other branches checking on them as well.

“Legislative Branch

  • Checks on the Executive
    • Impeachment power (House)
    • Trial of impeachments (Senate)
    • Selection of the President (House) and Vice President (Senate) in the case of no majority of electoral votes
    • May override Presidential vetoes
    • Senate approves departmental appointments
    • Senate approves treaties and ambassadors
    • Approval of replacement Vice President
    • Power to declare war
    • Power to enact taxes and allocate funds
    • President must, from time-to-time, deliver a State of the Union address
  • Checks on the Judiciary
    • Senate approves federal judges
    • Impeachment power (House)
    • Trial of impeachments (Senate)
    • Power to initiate constitutional amendments
    • Power to set courts inferior to the Supreme Court
    • Power to set jurisdiction of courts
    • Power to alter the size of the Supreme Court
  • Checks on the Legislature – because it is bicameral, the Legislative branch has a degree of self-checking.
    • Bills must be passed by both houses of Congress
    • House must originate revenue bills
    • Neither house may adjourn for more than three days without the consent of the other house
    • All journals are to be published

Executive Branch

  • Checks on the Legislature
    • Veto power
    • Vice President is President of the Senate
    • Commander in chief of the military
    • Recess appointments
    • Emergency calling into session of one or both houses of Congress
    • May force adjournment when both houses cannot agree on adjournment
    • Compensation cannot be diminished
  • Checks on the Judiciary
    • Power to appoint judges
    • Pardon power
  • Checks on the Executive
    • Vice President and Cabinet can vote that the President is unable to discharge his duties

Judicial Branch

  • Checks on the Legislature
    • Judicial review
    • Seats are held on good behavior
    • Compensation cannot be diminished
  • Checks on the Executive
    • Judicial review
    • Chief Justice sits as President of the Senate during presidential impeachment”

(from http://www.usconstitution.net/consttop_cnb.html, listing out the powers of each branch. )

For a larger version, click on the image below. It shows a more comical version of the three branches’ power over each other, and the buildings that the members work in representing each branch.

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: The main topic that this is related to is

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I decided to do it this way because I felt that a diagram is best to express these concepts, but text is needed, and it would have had to be of a very small font in order to be fit into the diagram, so I decided to put the text aside for this artifact. This artifact took some time, actually. I think it took at least 4 hours to complete.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: Insights and understanding that I have gained from the creation of this artifact are actually mostly the opinions I developed regarding the effectiveness of this system. It works pretty well, although there are certain flaws and “what-if”‘s, but otherwise it’s pretty good regarding checking on the power of the other branches. It helps explain a lot about the politics of US history from the nineteenth century up till the modern era.

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: I think that this artifact does pretty well reflecting my best work/ideas. I think I do a good job explaining the branches. I have a diagram, I have a table, and I have information.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

A: I guess that this has a positive impact on my portfolio since it not only includes something visual, but also text information. A 4!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

A: Yes. Since I had previous knowledge about the system of the checks and balances, making the picture of the three (the triangle image) was really fun. I think I’ll give it a 4!

c) Impact on your learning. A: Um, I’ve learned most of the information before, so I don’t think that this had much of an impact on my learning, although I was able to use what I’ve already learned and implement it into the site. I give it a 1.

d) Level of creativity and originality

A: I don’t think that the information is creative or original, but I think that the picture is pretty creative 🙂 I give it a 3.

6. Any Additional comments

A: I don’t think I have any extra comments…

Artifact 17: Game 😀

The American Dream Game

Reflections Questions:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

4.Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact  on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment.

c) Impact on your learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any Additional comments

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CASE STUDY 1: BRITAIN AND THE BUILDING OF A GLOBAL EMPIRE


Artifact 1:

Primary Source and Evaluation: Teacher’s Choice

Child Labor in Cotton Factories, 1807

Although this extract was written in 1807 it illustrates that there had been concern among some elements of society about the employment of children in factories and the long hours to which they were subjected.

A conversation between Southey and a Manchester gentleman who is showing him over the cotton factories.

Mr. ——– remarked that nothing could be so beneficial to a country as manufacture. ‘You see these children, sir,’ said he. ‘In most parts of England poor children are a burthen to their parents and to the parish; here the parish, which would else have to support them, is rid of all expense; they get their bread almost as soon as they can run about, and by the time they are seven or eight years old bring in money. There is no idleness among us: they come at five in the morning; we allow them half an hour for breakfast, and an hour for dinner; they leave work at six, and another set relieves them for the night; the wheels never stand still.’

I was looking, while he spoke, at the unnatural dexterity with which the fingers of these little creatures were playing in the machinery, half giddy myself with the noise and the endless motion; and when he told me there was no rest in these walls, day or night, I thought that if Dante had peopled one of his hells with children, here was a scene worthy to have supplied him with new images of torment.

‘These children then,’ said I, ‘have no time to receive instruction.’ ‘That, sir,’ he replied ‘is the evil which we have found. Girls are employed here from the age you see them till they marry, and then they know nothing about domestic work, not even how to mend a stocking or boil a potato. But we are remedying this now, and send the children to school for an hour after they have done work.’ I asked if so much confinement did not injure their health. ‘No’ he replied, ‘they are as healthy as any children in the world could be. To be sure, many of them as they grew up went off in consumptions, but consumption was the disease of the English. …’

‘We are well off for hands in Manchester,’ said Mr. ——; ‘manufacturers are favourable to population, the poor are not afraid of having a family here, the parishes therefore have always plenty to apprentice, and we take them as fast as they can supply us. In new manufacturing towns they find it difficult to get a supply. Their only method is to send people round the country to get children from their parents. Women usually undertake this business; they promise the parents to provide for the children; one party is glad to be eased of a burden; and it answers well to the other to find the young ones in food, lodging and clothes, and receive their wages.’ ‘But if these children should be ill-used’, said I. ‘Sir,’ he replied, ‘it never can be the interest of the women to use them ill, nor of the manufacturers to permit it.’

It would have been in vain to argue had I been disposed to it. Mr. ——- was a man of humane and kindly nature, who would not himself use any thing cruelly, and judged of others by his own feelings. I thought of the cities in Arabian romance, where all the inhabitants were enchanted: here Commerce is the Queen witch, and I had no talisman strong enough to disenchant those who were daily drinking of the golden cup of her charms

Robert Southey, Letters from England (1807).

Last modified April 13, 2010.

Retrieved from http://www.historyhome.co.uk/peel/factmine/southey.htm

Published by Dr. Marjorie Bloy on The Peel Web, A Web of English History.

It seems like this was just the kind of life that the children had to live. “I thought that if Dante had peopled one of his hells with children, here was a scene worthy to have supplied him with new images of torment.” The children live very difficult lives. They had to work for long hours, under low pay, and without too much care. Although this definitely benefited the workshop owners by offering employees that didn’t require high wages, many children suffered from this. Toxic gases and the dirty working conditions hurt the health of the children. However, a dramatic exponential growth of the population happened, creating even more pressure and worry for people to find a living. Yet, it allowed the employees better ways for picking out the best workers: “survival of the fittest” to its most literal meaning.

Here a few questions relating to this primary source document regarding various aspects:

On the Origins

-Who created it?

A: The letter is the conversation between a Southey and Manchester gentleman.

-Who is the author?

A: The author of this letter is Robert Southey when he published this letter in Letters from England.

– When was it created?

A: Letters from England was published.

-When was it published?

A: The book Letters from England was published in 1807. However, the online version was last modified April 13, 2010.

-Where was it published?

A: The letter was published over the internet.

-Who is publishing it?

A:Dr. Marjorie Bloy posted it onto the Website.

-Is there anything we know about the author that is pertinent to our evaluation?

A: The person who published this onto the website specializes in English History.

On the Purpose:

– Why does this document exist?

A:This document exists because the person writing this letter probably wants to tell his friends about what he learned during his visit to the cotton factory.

-Why did the author create this piece of work? What is the intent?

A: The intent of the author was to relay information to the person he was writing to. The intent of the person who published this letter in Letters from England, probably wanted to give this information to the public. The person who put this onto the Internet probably wanted to provide all Internet users across the glob to have access to this information.

– Why did the author choose this particular format?

A: The author chose this particular format because he wanted to tell a friend about his experiences.

-Who is the intended audience? Who was the author thinking would receive this?

A: The intended audience was the person the author was writing the letter to.

– What does the document “say”?

A: The document talks about a factory owner’s replies to the author’s concerns over the health of the child laborers that work in cotton factories.

-Can it tell you more than is on the surface?

A: One of the things that are implied in this letter is that the person writing this letter actually stands on the side of the children, meaning that he is probably not a workshop owner, and probably have children of his own. Also, based on the type of questions he asks, he is concerned with the well-being of the children. However, he must still have an important place in society, for the factory owner to care so much about the children. Another thing that is implied is that the owners of the factories think more about their profits and the positive effects of their actions that that of their employers. Therefore, we can see a bias on the factory owner’s side. Another thing that is implied is that the person receiving this letter is probably on the same side and owns similar beliefs to the person writing the letter.

On the Value:

-What can we tell about the author from the piece?

A: The author clearly doubts about whether this great amount of labor is actually beneficial for the children. However, he still has a tremendous amount of respect for the factory owner.

-What can we tell about the time period from the piece?

A:  We can tell that this time period is the dawning of the Industrial Revolution. Machines are driving mass production, and that factory owners are starting to realize that they can profit more by hiring children, versus adults. Cotton production is becoming more and more prevalence, and that the social status and wealth of the already very rich factory owners is increasing as well.

-Under what circumstances was the piece created and how does the piece reflect those circumstances?

A: The letter was created as a letter from the author to his friend. This primary source suggested this because it is in a first person narrative, and the publisher tells us so.

– What can we tell about any controversies from the piece?

A:  There seems to be a slight controversy over the welfare of the children–whether they actually live healthy lives or not.

-Does the author represent a particular ‘side’ of a controversy or event?

A: The author seems fairly concerned, and does have opinions that slightly lean towards the side supporting a better lifestyle for the children. However, the author is no extremist, and seems to respect, admire, and even fear the factory owner a bit.

-What can we tell about the author’s perspectives from the piece?

A: The author’s perspective from this piece shows that he is of a higher class. He is not concerned with finding a job himself, yet understands that he must not quarrel with the “elite”: the factory owners that have sided with the government.

-What was going on in history at the time the piece was created and how does this piece accurately reflect it?

A: The Industrial Revolution was taking place during this period. This primary source does demonstrate the child labor issues and the power of factory owners–supposedly “a man of humane and kindly nature, who would not himself use any thing cruelly.” Therefore, the piece is accurate in this way. The bias of the factory workers is also evident, however, the primary source does not show the author as being part of the minority.


On the Limitations:

-What part of the story can we NOT tell from this document?

A: Although we can tell the brief story about the lives of children in that setting, however, the part of the story that we can’t tell from this document are the adult laborers, the life of the factory owners, as well as the kind of social class that the author belongs to.

-How could we verify the content of the piece?

A: We could verify the content of the piece by looking at other primary sources of this time period, and they do suggest that other factory owners also exhibit such attitudes. Therefore, we can assume that this primary source is fairly accurate.

-Does this piece inaccurately reflect anything about the time period?

A: If the piece inaccurately reflects anything about the time period, it’s probably the feeling that children are actually gaining something even if they are putting an effort into this. This is due to the bias of both gentlemen.

-What does the author leave out and why does he/she leave it out (if you know)?

A: The author leaves out the information, such as the background, name, and other helpful data about both the author and the person that the author had conversed with. Nor did the author explain his purpose of visiting the cotton factory. He probably leaves it out because he did not consider its importance when he wrote his letter to another friend.

-What is purposely not addressed?

A: It seems that the author of the letter and the person the author is writing to are purposely not addressed, or perhaps unknown.

ON THE REFLECTIONS:

1. a.) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact relates to human health, as the children have to work for more than 13 hours, with only a brief break during mid-day. This causes serious fatigue to the children, and such an overwork of their bodies can cause modification of the physical structure of their skeleton or muscles, causing mutations and injuries. Also, the dirty conditions as well as the toxic fumes from the factory caused chronic diseases and harm to the children. The fact that there was no good air circulation within the overcrowded factories made the situation worse. We know that the factory owners would rather focus on maximizing profit than the conditions, so many people died even as the population increased.

b.) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A:  I guess it also relates to “Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs;” “Building the Modern Economy;” and “Urbanization:  Construction of the Modern City.” Because of the invention of machines, many factory workers started hiring children. The economic system of more efficient mass production based on Adam Smith’s ideas of assembly lines started to develop.  In addition to the fact that many adults and workshop “experts” are losing their jobs, the number of jobs available does not increase with the population. Therefore, as the population rocketed drastically, many people started moving toward cities and industrial centers in search of any job available to them.

2. Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: This artifact was chosen because of the teacher’s choice. I spent, surprisingly, a whole lot of time on this one. This took around 3 to 4 days, although I was expecting to be done with it in 1. This was probably because of me being unfamiliar with the way around these blogs.  However, now that I am more used to it, I expect the other artifacts to require a shorter time.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: I guess I gained a lot of insight on the social hierarchy. Even though we know that a lot of people revolted against the factory workers later on, these men of great wealth and power were certainly very intimidating. Plus, they owned control, so the child laborers didn’t really have too much of a choice around trying to get a job with higher wages, less labor, and a good environment. I realize that children today are REALLY lucky, compared to what was considered the norms of the past.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: I suppose that this artifact reflects pretty much most of what I am capable of. Certainly, I would have loved it if I could write a short analysis of this primary source expressing my ideas. However, because of having certain requirements that have to be met, I decided to take on the question format, thus limiting the things that I can put on here. Plus, I’m more of the writing kind of person than the typing, so I would be more easy around working with pencil and paper than with a keyboard.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: Perhaps a 4?

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: A 5 for sure. I love analyzing primary sources, it’s just the format and typing it that gets a bit frustrating.

c)Impact on our learning. A: Definitely a 5.

d) Level of creativity and originality. A:  Maybe a 1? My ideas are certainly original, but the format is not too creative.

6. Any additional comments:

For those interested in child labor during the 1800s in England, feel free to visit these two websites, which are very informative:

http://www2.needham.k12.ma.us/nhs/cur/Baker_00/2002_p7/ak_p7/childlabor.html

http://eh.net/encyclopedia/article/tuttle.labor.child.britain

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Artifact 2:

Idea Page

The pictures below are scanned images of my notebook, notes from the Luddite Simulation on this website. As you can see, I have adjusted the light, contrast, and sharpness levels of the image to help you better see my already nearly-illegible handwriting. (For all of the pictures below, click to view a larger image of it.)

 

The First Page of the First Idea Pages
The First Page: This introduce people to the lives of the factory owners. It contains notes from the game “Who wants to be a Cotton Millionaire?”
The Second Page of the First Idea Pages
The Second Page: The page contains the first part of an introduction to the simulation, some of the focus questions, and life in the very early 1800s.
The Third Page of the First Idea Pages
The Third Page: This page includes the rest of the suggested questions and mostly describes the time transition from the early 1800s to around a decade later.
The Fourth Page of the First Idea Pages
The Fourth Page: Describes Child Labor of the early Industrial Revolution period. Includes a summary.
The Fifth Page of the First Idea Page
The Fifth Page: Includes introduction to the croppers and Combination laws. It also includes a “Worker Profile” that has a brief description for each Luddite participant in the simulation.
The Sixth Page of the Idea Pages
The Sixth Page: Includes more on the concerns of the croppers and introduction to the simulation’s conclusion.
The Seventh Page of the First Idea Page
The Seventh Page: This page includes a description for each of four important dates for Luddites. It also includes a short summary.
The Eighth Page of the First Idea Page
The Eighth Page: This page includes the introductions to the Luddites’ “counter-attack” on the owners. It includes a brief summary.
The Ninth Page of the First Idea Pages
The Ninth Page: This page focuses on the attack on Rawfold Mill on April 11, 1812 and the trials in January 1812.
The Tenth Page of the First Idea Page
The Tenth Page: This page includes the owners’ post-April 11, 1812 responses to the attack on Rawfold Mill.
The Eleventh Page of the First Idea Pages
The Eleventh Page: This page shows the outcomes of imagined attempts of the croppers who wrote letters pleading for help towards William Horsfall, to no avail.
The Twelfth Page of the First Idea Page
The Twelfth Page: This page is mostly about Horsfall’s death 17 days after the attack on Rawfold Mill.
The Thirteenth Page of the First Idea Pages
The Thirteenth Page: This includes the laments of Mrs. Bamforth, a typical wife of a cropper.
The Fourteenth Page of the First Idea PAGE
The Fourteenth Page: This page includes information on how people are getting by the poverty and about government spies and rewards offered for info on the Luddites.
The Fifteenth Page of the First Idea Page
The Fifteenth Page: This page deals with the punishment of the arrested and caught Luddites, as well as various tries held.

ON THE REFLECTIONS:

1. a.) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact relates to “Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs.” Luddism formed from the invention of more efficient machinery, contributing to the rage of the workers. Luddism is also a byproduct of the growing entrepreneurs, such as the factory workers.

b.) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other main topics that this also relate to include “Class Consciousness;” “Human Health;” “Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City;” “Building the Modern Economy.” During this time, the social hierarchy is very polarized. The rich minority was very wealthy and powerful, which the vast majority of the people, the commoners, were poor and do not have much of a living. Also, the industrialization of towns contribute to the building of great port cities and manufacturing centers. The rising economy based on modern technology, machinery, and equipment is overpowering the traditional one with the workshops. These themes are shown in the Luddites.

2. Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose this artifact because I thought it was the most suitable for doing an idea page on. Not only can I note down the actions of the Luddites, I can also think about the psychology behind their actions. The research took one day, and putting it up took one and a half day (all-nighter). It was really tiring, but worth it.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: From creating this artifact, I have learned about the motives and plans of the Luddites and the results of them. This reminds me of the political unrest that still exists today in the modern world. Are terrorist attacks not very similar to that of the Luddites? But the Luddites seem more justified now, correct? Based on this, can we assume that in the future, terrorist attacks will become more justified as well?

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: I don’t suppose that it fully does. There are still a lot of other notes that I have taken and are yet to be taken in my notebook. Because the Luddites simulation was the most relevant, I put this one up there. However, there are still a lot of interesting facts that have not been put up here.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: Perhaps a 4?

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: A 5 for writing out the idea pages, but a 3 getting the images online. I made tons of mistakes again and again. Plus, this artifact was an all-nighter for me. Therefore, I did not have as much fun putting this online than actually researching.

c)Impact on our learning. A: Definitely a 5.

d) Level of creativity and originality. A:  Maybe a 2? My notes were based on that of the website. Idea pages had the same format. However, the questions and ideas posted on the left remained original and reflected my curiosity towards these subject matters.

6. Any additional comments:

For those interested in knowing more about the Luddites, here is a short list of websites that I found very interesting and provide a lot of information:

http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/PRluddites.htm

http://freepages.genealogy.rootsweb.ancestry.com/~maureenmitchell/luddites/luddites.htm

http://www.usu.edu/sanderso/multinet/lud1.html

http://www.themodernword.com/pynchon/pynchon_essays_luddite.html

http://www.learnhistory.org.uk/cpp/luddites.htm

Feel free to explore them and learn about new things! 🙂

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Artifact 3:

Headline News Report:

Yet Another “General Ludd” Attack

Published April 13, 1812

Once again, an army of more than 150 men claimed to be led by such a “General Ludd” approached Rawfolds Mill on April 11, 1812 during the middle of the night. The forced entry was unsuccessful, and the incident resulted in only two reported fatalities.

Mr. William Cartwright, owner of the Rawfolds Mill situated near the village of Liversedge, north of Huddersfield in Span Valley, anticipated such an attack and hired guards for his factory. When the army of assailants crept into the yard of the mill under the cover of the darkness, the guards heard signals and started to shoot musket balls back and forth for 20 minutes, accumulating to as much as 140. The assailants were unsuccessful in gaining entrance to the mill. For 90 minutes, the men struggled and shouted out exclamations of encouragement.

Recently, there have been many reports on similar incidents regarding organizations led by a “General Ludd.” They attack the machinery and frames that factories are using for clothing production. During the attack on Rawfolds Mill, two unfortunate men were mortally injured  on the cessation of the firing. Both were brought to the Star Inn at Robert-Town where medical aid was given as soon as was possible. The guards discovered the two when they heard their wailing. One man cried out, “For God’s sake, shoot mee–put me out of my misery!” while the other pleaded, “Help! Help! I know all, and I will tell all!” The two men were later discovered to be of the names Samuel Hartley and John Booth. Samuel Hartley was a bachelor 24 years of age, former copper that was employed under Mr.Cartwright; the latter was John Booth, a young apprentice of Mr. Wright’s merely 19 years of age.. Both never survived past a few days, Hartley from an injury at his breast and Booth from overly amount blood loss from leg fractures. Although these two were the only two that were reported to require medical assistance,   but investigators have examined the large pools of blood at the scene, suspected that a lot more harm was done.

The Luddite Questions:

1. How was Yorkshire textile industry organized in 1801?

A: Yorkshire textile industry was organized in 1801 by home industries. Women and children involved with the wool and spinning the wheel. Men were involved in weaving the thread in clothes. Croppers work in workshops. When they are done, the factory manufacturers collect the cloth and pays a good price. There’s a lot of activity everywhere.

2. How was the textile industry changing  by 1812?

A: The textile industry had started to rely more on machinery than the workmen. By 1812, factory owners were hiring children and women for lower pay to work on hard labor for long periods. The workers that once could make a living now hardly can keep their stomachs full.

3. Who were the Luddites? What were their methods of protest?

A: The Luddites were the people that were against the Industrialization. They were often former employees of the factory owners whose jobs have been taken over by machines. Their methods of protest mostly center around the vandalizing of factory machines.

4. What did it mean to be “twisted in”? Why was it so dangerous?

A: To be “twisted in” meant that you have joined the Luddites. It was so dangerous because any associations or formation of work unions were banned by the Combination Laws, and could end up tried with death.

5.Who was General/Ned Ludd?

A: General Ludd was a guy rumored to have led the Luddites, although it might have been just the common signature of the Luddites. There were letters signed by such a General Ludd that were left  for the owners, often expressing the concerns of the Luddites.

6. Why were the Luddites prepared to risk their lives protesting?

A: The time was just ripe for rebellion and riot. Luddites prepared to risk their lives protesting because their lives are on risk, too! They are losing jobs, losing respect, losing their pride…what could be worse than that? They had no other path to go, and so they HAD to protest. Machines were dominating their lives. It was time that somebody made things clear to the manufacturers.

7. Why were mill owners and the government so worried? How did they respond to the Luddites?

A: The Luddites were smart in knowing that it was best to attack something that was precious to the owners. That would be their machinery. Therefore, the government and the mill owners were upset and worried about the Luddites vandalizing their precious machines. They responded by trying to spread fear in the village. They sent red-coated troops to guard their factories and had investigations of villagers. The government also setup the Combination Laws.

On the Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: The  artifact is related to “Human Movement and Migration,” since the act of rebellion is a “movement” in itself, since people are starting to migrate away from the machines, moving to thinking in a different way–Luddism. What is demonstrated here is a change in the opinions of the laboring class against the factory owners.

b.) What other topics does this artifact relate to?

A: This also relates to the Building of the Modern Economy, Human Health, Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs, and Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City. It deals with the Luddites, who despised the machines that were invented as well as the manufacturers that rely on the machines. The inventions and the new technology affects the economy and also attracted people to large cities.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: The research was done along with Artifact 2, so that took a fairly long time. However, writing the newspaper article took around half and hour.

3. What insights or understanding  have you gained from the creation of this artifact?

A: I better understand the style of writing and the “propaganda” of the nineteenth century.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: I suppose so…it’s gives the necessary information…

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 4.5…There’s finally more writing!

b.) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: I have written newspaper articles for school assignments before and I discovered a lot of enjoyment in doing so. A 5!

c.)Impact on your learning. A: I learned a lot more during the research part. A 5!

d.) Level of Creativity and Originality. A: A 5! The article was fun to write!

6. Any additional comments.

A: Same as usual~ Comment and Subscribe!

Artifact 4:

Biographical Spotlight:

Hi. My name is Emmeline Pankhurst, born in Manchester in 1858. You may have heard of me from my participation and achievements during the 19th century in the Independent Labor Party, the Women’s Franchise League, or the public meetings I held at the local park. I particularly pride myself in my participation in the Matchgirls Strike, which got me really excited. I got to work with girls and women of such great abilities, during a time ripe for riot. My husband Richard Pankhurst and I are both supporters and advocates for the suffrage of women.

My passion for political involvement may have germinated from the conditions that I had grown up with. My father, Robert Goulden, was at the Peterloo Massacre early in the 1800s. He was a friend of John Stuart Mill, who also advocated for women’s suffrage. He also took part in actions against the Corn Laws and slavery. My mother, Sophia Crane, was a feminist that encouraged our participation in suffrage meetings of the 1870s. Both of them had significant influence on us. During the General Election of 1868, they also brought my sister Mary and I to a feminist demonstration. In fact, my first suffrage meeting was in 1872 when I asked to attend the event and hear the arguments.

Another person that I should attribute to is Marchef Girard, a woman that supported the idea of equal education for both genders. I had attended Ecole Normale Superieure, the school she directed  in Paris. I was taught many subjects, such as science, but also the necessary ones for females, such as embroidery and housekeeping. I finished school when I was nineteen.

It was after then that I met Richard, the man of my dreams.  He truly was a remarkable man. He worked as a lawyer, but also participated in political events. He was responsible for drafting an amendment that regarded the right for unmarried women who own a stable place of settlement to vote in local elections to the Municipal Franchise Act in the late 1860s. He was also responsible for drafting the Women’s Property Bill in 1870, and was also a member of the Married Women’s Property Committee during the late 1860s. It made sense that we couldn’t resist each other–after all, we shared common goals and common beliefs, despite him being almost twice my age when we married.

After we were married, we started planning out events together. In 1889, I remember us forming the Women’s Franchise League that attempted to secure women’s votes for local elections. We also formed the Independent Labor Party in 1893. Richard even ran as candidate for the industrial suburb of the city of Gorton, but he did not make it. That did not stop us, not at all.

I started to become more and more certain about the importance of women’s suffrage after my visit to the Chorlton Workhouse in 1894. I was working as a Poor Law Guardian, and I can tell you that it was one of the cruelest things I have ever seen. Passed by the Parliament, the Poor Law Commission examined the working of the poor Law system by setting up certain limitations, including discouraging people from wanting to receive help, deliberately making workhouse conditions harsh, and deny money to the workers in the workhouses. When I went there, I was terrified the torture and mistreatment that was forced upon those people. This experience allowed me to strengthen my belief that the society really needed women’s suffrage.

Towards the end of the 19th century, I began organizing open-air meetings on Sundays at the local park. It was a scary experience because the authorities claimed these meetings illegal, and on July 12, 1896, when at least 50, 000 people showed up to hear Keir Hardie speak, he was arrested. This caused a lot of fear and concern for our supporters.

The last thing that was of the greatest importance in my life at the end of the 19th century was my husband’s death. Although we were both active members of our party, he was never successful in being elected into the House of Commons, and thus ended his political career. I remember choosing Walt Whitman’s quote: “Faithful and True My Loving Comrade.” for his gravestone. He, truly, was a great comrade. I had to live a harsher life once he died, and these conditions made me even more eager to bring about refuge for the women in our society.

–Emmeline Pankhurst

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact relates to Gender Roles and the Liberation of Woman. Emmeline Pankhurst had dedicated her whole life to women’s suffrage.

b) Which other topics does it also relate to?

A: This also relates to Class Consciousness, Human Health, and Human Expression through the Arts.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I spent relatively 2 to 3 hours on this one. I decided to do a more creative style, writing it in first person.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: I gained insight on how the women and men of their time developed their promotions and actions advocating the suffrage and rights of women.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: I really doubt this, although it does express my love for writing in first person 😀

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact in quality of your portfolio.A: 5! Finally, something more “story-like”! 😀

b) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A:4? Again, I dislike typing.

c) Impact on your learning. A: It was nice, 5.

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: 4? I mean, I got all this information from another website…but writing it in first person was fun!

6.) Any additional comments.

A:

For more information regarding Emmeline Pankhurst, please visit these sites–highly recommended!

http://womenshistory.about.com/od/suffrageengland/p/pankhurst.htm

http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/historic_figures/pankhurst_emmeline.shtml

http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/WpankhurstE.htm

Same as usual–comment and subscribe!

Artifact 5:

Google Earth Tour:

Download it at this site:

http://www.mediafire.com/?qguylv49y4sx75q

On the Reflections:

1. a) What topic does this topic relate to? Why?

A: This relates to The Balance of Power: Empire Rise and Fall. My Google Earth Tour centers around the idea of how the British managed to start influencing the Far East, and how those countries started to rebel.

b)What other topic does this artifact relate to?

A:  This artifact also relates to Human Movement and Migration, and The Notion of the Frontier.

2. Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating/processing it?

A: Because I have learned about all this information before, regathering it took around half an hour. Making the tour itself took around 2 hours.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation/processing of this artifact?

A: I have gained understanding of how the British gained control over their vast empire, as well as how they eventually lost it.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: No, it does not reflect my best work. It was due to a time limit, causing not enough practice on the speech…

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 is neutral) for the following :

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 5. Adding the video creates some more color to my portfolio.

b) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: 3. I enjoyed the part of researching, but again, dealing with Google Earth was a hassle.

c)Impact on your learning.A: 5. It was nice 🙂

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: 5!!

6. Any other comments: As usual, comment and subscribe~

Artifact 6:

Original Student Artwork, Poem, Music Piece, or Short Story

Today, I am going to display my beautiful (not) artwork! I title it:

“CHANGE” (click to enlarge)

Change
This is a black and white pencil sketch marking the main transitions that took place in Britain around the 19th century.

One can say that this painting encompasses three main parts that represent the three important parts to changes that Britain went through around the 19th century. Can you guess it? Post what you think that this work is about.

Now, let’s give you some hints.

There are two fields to the back where there is only one cottage.

The wheel closest to the left is a water wheel.

The wheel  to the right bottom side is a steam engine.

There is a ship on the river between the rows of factories and the steam engine.

That help?

Obviously, different people will have different perspectives and therefore different opinions on the “purpose” or “intent” of this work. What was the symbolism behind everything? What was said in the previous paragraph is really just what I was thinking about when drawing this picture. However, people are free to interpret the picture any way they want to. Feel free to comment on this, explaining what you think is going on in the picture. List down things that you spot! Give me some feedback on my art skills 😛

On the Reflections:

1. )a. Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what way?

A: It relates to Urbanization: Construction of the Modern City. This picture is mostly about the ways in which small English towns eventually ended up as the bustling industrial and trade centers.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This also relates to Building of the Modern Economy, Human Movement and Migration, Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs, Communication and Transportation Revolution, and Human Expression through the Arts.

2.) Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: Since I myself am the type of person that learns graphically more than verbally, I feel like it would be a very good way to organize what you know using a diagram–in this case, a picture. I spent around one and a half hour on the piece. I wanted it to be very simple, black and white. However, more time was spent thinking about this and also what to include.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: I guess the most important things I’ve learned is that the Industrial Revolution was really inevitable. If you look at the steps it took one by one, you will realize that it will have to reach that situation.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Well, this artifact definitely reflects my love for art :].

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a.) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 4?

b.) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: 5!!!

c.) Impact on your learning. A:4. Although I don’t learn new things, I apply old ones in creative ways.

d.) Level of Creativity and Originality. A: 5!!! :]

6. Any Additional Comments:

Same as before, so just scroll up to the first artifact bah!~

Artifact 7:

Influential Work, Artwork, Poem, Music Piece, or Short Story

*SPOILER ALERT*

A:  There are many famous works that deal with Britain during the 1800s.  The era gave rise to many prominent authors whose fame continue even till this day. including Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, Lord Tennyson, Charles Dickens, and many others.

However, today, the work that I would like to examine is Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. First of all, why would I choose Pride and Prejudice? The first reason is that ever since I first saw the movie, I have fallen in love with this book. Once I got to read it, I enjoyed it even more. Now, the second reason is that the book really demonstrates the style of writing during those times as well as life for the elite. From other works during this time,  most of them deal with sad stories about men who actually have their works they have to do, with only a few exceptions. However, in Pride and Prejudice, we get to take a look at the kind of people who get to drink tea for all three meals per day. Instead of me having to mourn over the terrible labor, I feel refreshed by an introduction to the luxury of the elite and upper class ladies and gentlemen.

The main topic behind Pride and Prejudice is about a family of five girls where they try to get married. The real main character is Elizabeth Bennet, who is special in that she is sensible, sharp, and realistic. This symbolizes the realism that was kind of popular during the period. There’s a lot of romance that goes on in between as well. As popular during that time period, authors often included letters and lengthy dialogue. Other things that she included in her novels include the frequent formal and social gatherings, awareness of city life and modernization( as well as the change it brings to the characters), sketchy characters, and scandals involved with those characters, as popular among Victorian literature. Despite being realist in that way, her novels are definitely romantic in that they display emotions as well, also showing the importance of intelligence and natural beauty, as common with other Romantic novels.

The whole story can be described in a few sentences. There are five Bennet girls. When a wealthy young man named Mr. Bingley went to live in their neighborhood, he fell in love with Jane Bennet. However, he left when persuaded by his friend Mr. Darcy and his sister. Elizabeth Bennet despised Mr. Darcy because of his smug and arrogant behavior, but eventually, they started to have growing interest towards each other. Eventually, Mr. Bingley goes back and marries Jane, and Mr. Darcy maries Mrs. Bennet. And that’s the whole plot. However, the story is really not that simple. By using a lot of twists, witty remarks, and a huge amount of dialogue and descriptive writing, she makes the characters and their setting three dimensional–each has its own flaws, each has its own beauty. The story really reflects the life of the wealthy people in Britain during the 1800s, who had a lot of leisure time to be able to do all the things in the novel, such as hold balls at their mansions, but saying everything would only be a spoiler for the people, and it would be WAY TOO MUCH to include her. I think that you’ll get what I mean when you read it, so READ IT! GO GET’ EM!

These characters all belong to rich families, rich enough to own land, power, status, and even their own chef! This was the life that the higher-class people of Britain. Jane Austen’s novels all center around love stories that involve love and happy endings. One thing that other authors of this era also share is the witty remarks and the philosophy behind the dialogue of the characters. For example, in Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy often quibble over their opinions on human nature and the psychology of life. Jane Austen is famed for emphasizing social hierarchies in her novels–although she certainly knew about the poor, she mostly wrote about the attempts of the women during the 1800s that attempted to gain wealth through marriage.

Now, I’d like to talk about Jane Austen. Born in 1775, in Steventon, England, she was the daughter of the rector at the local parish, and received education since she was a very young girl. She started writing when she was just a teenager, and wrote the original manuscript of Pride and Prejudice between the ages of 21 and 22, originally titled First Impressions. However, it will have to be until 1809 that she started to revise the work, ending up to the famous romantic novel we know of today. Pride and Prejudice was published in the year of 1813. Since then, she has published several works: Sense and Sensibility, Emma, Persuasion, Northanger Abbey, Mansfield Park, and many more. She continues to touch the hearts of many readers today.

On the Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: The topic that this artifact relates to is Class Consciousness. It deals with how Mrs. Bennet, a woman that is not very wealthy compared to Mr. Darcy, struggles for a relationship.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: It also relates to Gender Roles and the Liberation of Women and Human Expression through the Arts.

2. Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A:Most of it was described above, but I chose this artifact because I love Pride and Prejudice. I spent around 1 hour typing this up.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: I gained understanding and insight on the lives of the wealthier Victorian people. I also learned more on the different roles that gender play in society back in the 1800s.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: No, this artifact definitely does not reflect my best work and ideas. Although I do love the book, reading the book again would take a very long time, causing me to have to write the description from memory. The accounts for the briefness of my description.

5. Rate for the following:

a) Impact on quality of portfolio. A: 5.

b) Impact on happiness. A: 5

c) Impact on learning. A: 4

d)Level of creativity and originality. A: 5

6. Any other comments: I know that certain people dislike Jane Austen’s story. I’d like these people to try to support their opinions in the comments section 🙂 Other than that, the usual stuff…

Also, make sure to check out these websites:

The IMDB (Internet Movie Database) page for the 2005 film “Pride and Prejudice”: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0414387/

The Sparknotes page for the book: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/pride/

 

Artifact 8:

Student’s Free Choice:

For this one, I’d like to present another of my drawings! WOOHOO!

So, this time, it’s a similar subject, but a closer look. I title this work “Envy.”

Envy
This piece of artwork is mostly about the main cause of Luddism: manufacturers seeking a higher profit in hiring children versus workmen. This is sketched using a pencil, followed by coloring with crayons.

On the left is a cropper. He mumble, “Tch. They let a foolish kid take my job. >:(“

The kid on the right thinks, “I wanna go home!><“

I hope that I have managed to make out the difficult and dirty conditions that these people have to work in. Plus, I hope to have emphasized well enough the gigantic size of the machine compared to the kid on the right.

On the Reflections:

1. )a. Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what way?

A: It relates to the Building of the Modern Economy. It relates to that because the newly developed economy was based on the idea that if you put many machines and assemble them together, things can become more efficient and profitable than workmen working together.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This also relates to Human Movement and Migration, Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs, and Human Expression through the Arts.

2.) Why did you choose this artifact and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose to do art because it seems like I get the most out of doing such work. Not only do I enjoy it the most, it helps me apply my knowledge as well. I spent a lot more time on this one versus the artwork from Artifact 6. For this one, it took at least two hours, because not only are the machines hard to draw, coloring took a lot of time as well.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: I gained understanding of the whole Luddite theology and the actions they took to try to make the factory owners sympathize them and try to give them a better living. I start to see the cause and effects of these actions.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why or why not?

A: Well, this artifact definitely reflects my love for art :].

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a.) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 4?

b.) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: 4.5. It was very tiring and very difficult.

c.) Impact on your learning. A:4. Again, although I don’t learn new things, I apply old ones in creative ways.

d.) Level of Creativity and Originality. A: 5!!! :]

6. Any Additional Comments:

Same as before, so just scroll up to the first artifact bah!~

Artifact 9:

Student Choice: The Great Mutiny

(click for larger picture)

The picture above was a small more comical view of one of the causes of the First War of Independence of 1867, or also known as the Great Mutiny, where the Indian troops rebelled against the British. One of the reasons was because these enfield rifles that were distributed to the Indians contained cow and pig oil on the lubricated coating of the cartridges to make it waterproof. However, to access the gunpowder inside the cartridges, they have to be bitten. It is against Muslim and Hindu beliefs to eat cow and pig parts, so this was one of things that caused conflict to flare up.

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact has to do with Nationalism: Creation of the Nation-State. The Great Mutiny was the attempt of the Indians to fight for their beliefs and their rights to control their own beliefs, and not be forced to live the British way of life. Therefore, they rebelled. Eventually, they broke apart with the British Empire, therefore forming their own nation-state.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This artifact is also related to Human Expression through the Arts.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose to do this artifact because I love expression through graphics, but I also needed to fill an artifact for the topic of Nationalism: Creation of the Nation-State, so I chose to do it this way. I spent one hour creating the art and also the research.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: From doing this artifact, I gained understanding of what really pissed the Indians off. It was as if the British were on purposely mocking their religion, beliefs, and faith.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: This artifact reflects my best work, I believe. I deem it as rather creative, and is good at showing my style.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for hte following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: More graphics helps make my portfolio more interesting, so a 5!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. A: I love to do art, and the Great Mutiny fascinates me. 5!

c) Impact on your learning A: I already had some knowledge about the Great Mutiny, but this artifact required more research. Therefore, I guess a 4?

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: This is definitely creative and original! 5!

6. Any additional comments

Check out more about the Great Mutiny or the First War of Independence here:

WIKIPEDIA! <3: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indian_Rebellion_of_1857

Otherwise…

NOPEEEEE!!!!

Artifact 10:

Cause and Effect Analytical Writing (Rough and Final Draft)

Here is my essay on the causes and effects of Urbanization (and it IS exactly two pages on an Open Office Word Document):

RISE OF THE MODERN METROPOLIS… By Tracy Kao

Look all around you. You are probably reading this essay on a computer. You are probably sitting on a chair, and your computer is probably on the desk before you. You are probably wearing clothes, hopefully. Where do all these products come from? You would answer, “Factories!” But, where did factories come from in the first place? What caused the factories to exist, and therefore, your clothes, computer, desk, chair, etc., to exist as well? Well, the answer isn’t too hard—it’s “The Factory Age!” One of the biggest jumps in human development over the millennium took place between the 19 and19th century. It was the Industrial Revolution, also known as the “Factory Age,” where society started to put more emphasis on industry than the agriculture or service parts of labor, causing the growth of famous trade ports, the rise of the modern metropolis, and a better economy. Although certainly important, it is not easy to trace the importance, since it can go back all the way to the Exploration Era. From that branched several important events: collapse of the rural industries, new technological innovations, the Combination Laws, reliance on new power sources, and growth of larger cities. However, let’s start with enclosure.

Let’s move the setting to the rural area of Southern Britain, in the late 18th century, where enclosure was beginning to bring trouble to the people. It was described by JL and Hammond in The Village Labourer as:

Before enclosure the cottager was a labourer with land, after enclosure he was a labourer without land…families that had lived for centuries in their dales or on their small farms and commons were driven before the torrent.

The society of the past worked a bit different. Those that farmed worked as poor exploited tenants. They worked on the land of other landowners, often planting a variety of crops in order to be self-sufficient. It was also a time where people lived by their trades. People’s jobs belonged to their guilds or workshops. For example, a person may start out as an apprentice at a clothing guild. There, under the guidance of a master, he learns the way of the trade. Then, he makes his way up the social ladder within the trade, with every step gaining some experience, to a journeyman, and finally to a professional, ready to take on the work with his or her fellow guilders. He or she then can accept more apprentices. Therefore, they spent their whole lives working on their jobs. These guilds, because of their specialization in those particular industries, are wanted for their skill. Therefore, they often make the products, and then sell it for a reasonable price to the factory owners, who refine it and then sell them off to the larger and more general market. This system of home-industries worked well for a while. The world was a peaceful place. People were able to maintain their livings. However, as time slowly progressed, the situation didn’t turn out as well. The economy wasn’t too well, either. Trade unions failed, landless workers were getting exploited, paid with low wages. Yet, because of a lack of wealth and status, these people had no real means of rebellion.

However, this all changed with the technological innovations of the the nineteenth century. Britain’s most prominent industry, the textile industry, started to change with the arrival of the spinning advancements, such as the spinning mules. These newly developed machines caused cheaper clothing, since these machines were designed so that they were more efficient, thus allowing the companies to profit. However, the factory owners also started to lower the price of the cotton, encouraging the people in Britain to purchase products made from their own country. Demand increased as the price lowered, and so the supply would have to increase as well to keep the flow of customers coming, especially when competition between many industries started to blossom. Therefore, factory owners started the need to hire handloom weavers, and thus began the expedition of the rural workers and their trip to what they felt as a more promising city-life. In the early 1800s, the demand for the landloom weavers grew dramatically, encouraging people to migrate to cities to find employment. In hopes of a better life, the workers that suffered in the local handicrafts moved to urban centers , where the factories were located. People started to take on the market system, where companies specialize in the production of only a specific type of product. This has its pros and cons– although such mass production did help people gain profit when business was well, if the products were not in popular demand, these salespeople often were doomed—after all, the products that they made were the only ones they could sell. Yet, factories started to grow. New machinery was bought to simplify and speed up the process. New ideas about the proper way of production also started to take place. Adam Smith and his idea of assembly lines started to gain prominence, and factory owners increasingly relied on the use of machinery and cheap labor. It helped maximize the profit, so why not? However, this did end up in a lot of problems. Even though there was a time where the handloom weavers gained a lot of importance, the need started to subside, taken over by the cheaper and less fastidious factory workers. These workers were often women and children instead of the men, which caused a lot of health issues, since they were often over-worked.

Obviously, the workshop/home-workers, such as the handloom workers, were very disappointed with the situation. Due to their lack of employment(stolen by the factory workers) , they started to revolt against the factory owners The dependence of the less skilled workers that did not dedicate their whole lives to the industry infuriated the people. Under the Combination Laws, unions, associations, and organizations of the labor class were prohibited; however, such a forbiddance actually prompted more organization among the people that were against the factory owners. This is how the Luddites formed, a group of former textile workers such as croppers that were led under the legendary “General Ludd,” the purpose of the group was to try to coerce the factory owners in giving the local industries opportunities to maintain their livings and compete with the large industries. Their way of showing their opinions was riot and rebellion, through violence and the vandalizing of the precious machinery, for example, the clothing frames of the textile industries. Eventually, they were relatively suppressed, but definitely showed the negative consequences of the industrial revolution.

This push for cheaper and more profitable means of production also pushed for better energy source of production and transportation through technological advancement. While at first the industries relied on hydro-power, taking advantage of the force of rushing water turning a water wheel, people started to find out new ways, such as James Watt’s steam engine and also the new idea of using burning coal; thus changed the concentration and density of the industries’ locations at various times, mostly to move to the places with the most inland resources. Eventually, this change to more efficient power sources also changed the way of transportation. Canals were built for easy transportation of raw materials such as cotton from town to town, connecting the various river systems in Britain. Coal was also transported via the canals on the newly invented steam ships, but another way that eventually developed in 1848 was the railroad. The railway started to develop, mostly powered by coal and steam power, often used in factories as well. Through these means of transportation, the supplies needed are able to be brought to the designated destination at fast rates. Such transportation also signified a growing market for the international. Companies now did not only sell the cotton and textiles to the people living in Britain. As various industries began clustering near the coastal cities, major ports started to form, enhancing the trade, booming the economy. New roads and passageways connected the various port-cities and metropolises. Now, Britain could profit from the sales for the colonies that it own all over the empire fast and more conveniently.

So, what were the more negative consequences of urbanization? Certainly, due to the fact that the rural industry collapsed and that a huge amount of the population was moving into cities in search of jobs, one could expect the population to grow at exponential rates. Indeed, the population more than doubled over the years, especially in the major and more important trading cities, where factories of various products were situated near each other so that these materials could be transported from one factory to another. Cities like Huddersfield, Yorkshire, and Lancashire, bustled with activity. With the growing population came problems like waste removal and disposal through the sewers, the sanitation and hygiene of working/living conditions, and contagious diseases(cholera). It is described by T.S. Elliot in his poem The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock as being:

Let us go then, you and I,/ When the evening is spread out against the sky/Like a patient etherised upon a table;/ Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets,/The muttering retreats Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels/And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells:/Streets that follow like a tedious argument/Of insidious intent/To lead you to an overwhelming question …/Oh, do not ask, “What is it?”/Let us go and make our visit./In the room the women come and go/Talking of Michelangelo./The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes,/The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes/Licked its tongue into the corners of the evening,/Lingered upon the pools that stand in drains,/Let fall upon its back the soot that falls from chimneys,/Slipped by the terrace, made a sudden leap,/And seeing that it was a soft/October night,/Curled once about the house,/and fell asleep.

As the population increased in number, people were also dying out. Big cities like London were infamous for being such. There came a need to put up new policies and modifications in technology, such as the new terracotta pipes, to meet the changing conditions to ensure that people can still survive to maintain the work force.

Really, there is no clear origin of urbanization or the industrial revolution. Because the history is so interconnected, what was a cause was equal likely to be the result of another cause, but if one was to try to name the start of whole mania, it would probably be the rise of technology and the growing attractions of urban centers. From there, changes started to happen, based on what different people believed was a ‘better life,’ and due to a different in the opinions of people from different classes of the social hierarchy, conflict was inevitable, leading to more changes, leading to more changes, and so on. The circular system of boom and bust continues to cycle even till today, finally resulting in the world that we live today, what we consider as ‘modern.’ So, if you really wanted to find someone to thank for the computer, the desk, the chair, the clothes, and the light around you, then you know the immense amount of people that you can acknowledge!

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This essay is related to Communication and Transportation Revolution. My essay regards how technology has developed to help urbanize the rising cities. It also examines the changes that took place around the time to better fit the conditions and solve the problems.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: It also relates to Human Movement and Migration, Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurs, Building of the Modern Economy, and the Notion of the Frontier. The nineteenth century was a period of experimentation and discovery.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose to write the essay in a more chronological order because I thought that it would be easier for people to understand this way. I spent around 6 or 7 hours on this, so having finished it, I feel relieved.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

From writing this essay, I feel like I have a stronger grasp of the events, such as the order and also the connection between the occurrences. Thanks to writing this essay, it seems like I was better evaluate how much I learned. At the same time, it seems like every problem has the solution, but at the same time, every solution has a problem. The world is a continuous cycle of causes and effects, which cause another effect.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: This artifact may not reflect my best work, since I felt restricted by the page limit, so I wasn’t able to put on a lot of the statistical facts that would have required a lot more space to analyze and discuss. However, I think I did a pretty good job at organizing the way I display the causes and effects during that time.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for hte following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. It’s most likely just a 2, since there is no graphics to it.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. Probably a 3, since I felt restricted by what we could do. I would have liked doodling things out, but since this was in essay format, it seems like I shouldn’t do that.

c) Impact on your learning. A: 5, Certainly, this essay has a large impact on my learning as far as I know new knowledge and have a deeper understanding of the network of how things came to be in the history of Britain during this time.

d) Level of creativity and originality A: 4. Although I did write this essay, I included quotes from others, so I guess, it isn’t 100 % original.

6. Any additional comments

Nope.

Artifact 11:

Primary Source Evaluation (Student Choice)

For this primary source evaluation, I would like to show you two of my favorite paintings by Joseph Mallord William Turner, who lived April 23, 1775 till December 19, 1851.

The two paintings are:

Both of them really reflect the Romantic type of painting that was popular back then.

Both of these photographs of his paintings were taken from http://www.william-turner.org/

The first painting, “Rain, Steam and Speed The Great Western Railway” can be found today exhibited at the National Gallery, London, England.

The second painting, “The Slave Ship,” can be found at the Museum Of Fine Arts, Boston, USA

OPVL:

Origin:

These two artifacts were both painted by the same person– Joseph Mallord William Turner, known by most as William Turner. These were published onto the website: www.william-turner.org by the organization in charge of that. We know that William Turner was an English artist during the 19th century Britain. He is often called “painter of light.”He is interested in humanity and nature, between the ancient and the modern. He is also interested in new technology, transportation, and communication.  This can be confirmed by the first painting.

Purpose:

This document exists because it was a picture that was drawn by William Turner to sell to raise money and keep his living. From The Slave Ship, we can tell that he is trying to tell us that the struggle of the slaves is glorified. You can see the slaves closer, and therefore they seem more human; whereas the slavers are in the distance on the ship–a manmade power, a machine of war. They seem inhuman and unnatural. They are about to be swallowed by the same waves that forced the slavers to throw the slaves overboard.

The first picture is of a steam train. By seeing how dark the colors are for the train, we can tell that to Turner, technology has kind of a dark side. It brings a lot of trouble, and the people feel distant from it.It makes sense, seeing how machinery and technology was hated by people during the Industrial Revolution.

Value:

From the title and the subjects of the painting, we can know that the controversy of the painting “The Slave Ship” is about the mistreatment of slaves. This shows Turner’s side on the Zong Massacre, the famous incident in 1781 where Captain Luke Callingwood, while sailing through the Middle Passage, started throwing live slaves overboard. Within four days, 122 people were drowned. Their motive was to collect the insurance from these people. However, the ship’s first mate testified against his captain, and so the case lost. Although the case was nothing more than insurance fraud, it attracted the attention of abolitionists. Turner must have been attracted to it as well. Even though Great Britain abolished slave trade with the Slave Trade Act in 1807, the practice of slavery itself wasn’t abolished until the Slavery Abolition Act of 1833. From this, we can tell that Turner was most likely on the side of the abolitionists.

Limitations:

It appears that, for “The Slave Ship,” limitations are mostly on the side of the slavers. We don’t get their story, their reasons for doing. All we get is the glorification of the slaves’ deaths. Therefore, we may be under the false image that the slavers are devil-like, malicious, and evil by nature. However, that might not actually be the case, since they wre human, like us. Therefore, the primary source is slightly biased in that sense, and this bias sets as a limitation.

Also, Turner is a man that was fascinated with impressionistic art and the romantic reform. He is an artist that used bright colors bravely and emphasized emotion. Therefore, as you can see from the paintings above, we are not able to tell exactly the scenes of the events. Therefore, the setting is probably not accurate. This is particularly evident in the first painting, where the only visible things include the railway to the far distance and the steam train. Impressionistic art emphasizes one’s opinions and perspectives on things. Therefore, we can expect bias on the artist’s side.

On the Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact relates to “Race Relations: Abolition, Segregation, Anti-Semitism.” The main emphasis on my primary source evaluation is on how people’s will to abolish slavery went beyond the circle of politics, and actually extended to artists like Turner (“The Slave Ship”) and also even after slavery was abolished.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This artifact also relates to “Human Expression Through the Arts” and “Human Movement and Migration.”

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: This artifact was created over a few days, but for only a few hours each day. Around two hours were spent browsing through artworks of this time until I found a satisfactory one. Then, I conducted a little research on the slave act, and came up with a lot of information.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or creation of this artifact?

A: Because Turner was once a “man of lines” before a “man of color,” understanding that was gained mostly involve how political events can change a person’s personality. I find a bit surprising that Turner would support the abolitionists to such an extent, but still, it shouldn’t be surprising considering the height of the abolitionist-era, which WAS at that time. People DO want their rights, and that is something that we don’t see often.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: This artifact does reflect my best work in that I have a lot of interest in art history. Events that have changed the way art is displayed intrigues me, especially since I have done a master project on the Trans-Atlantic Slave Trade before. Therefore, connecting that knowledge with this newly gained knowledge creates a lot of fun!

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. 3. More photographs and pictures definitely livens things up! 😀

b) Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment. As I’ve said before, I am really interested in this aspect of history, and so it’s probably a 4! 😀

c) Impact on your learning: 3. It helped me learn a lot more about the era, and that does have an impact on my learning.

d) Level of creativity and originality: The level of creativity wouldn’t be high–after all, these paintings were done by others. Therefore…probably a 1? I like my analysis, though 😀

6. Any additional comments.

Not really.

Artifact 12: Idea Page

Doodling about

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for hte following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment

c) Impact on your learning

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any additional comments

Artifact 13: Gapminder Analysis

1. Is child mortality falling?

A: This graph is between the total fertility, number of children per woman given birth to and the income per person (GDP/capita, inflation adjsuted).  It compares the “number of children that would be born to each woman with prevailing age-specific fertility rates” with the “gross domestic product per person adjusted for the differences in purchasing power ( international dollars, fixed 2005 prices).” When one first opens up the graph, they will notice that there were very little countries to begin with, but by the end, the whole x-axis is covered with the bubbles of countries. The countries that began were the stronger first world countries. As you can see, the United Kingdom is the leading country. Towards the beginning of the nineteenth century, it is apparent that there were no major changes. However, once it got to the 1820s and 1830s, thing started to speed up. Although the fertility rate is still very gradual and the downward going slope can only be visible until a long way afterward, the income indicator causes the bubble to move right and left erratically, and very swiftly. Even though it does return to the left, the next time it goes to the right, there is an increase, causing a even faster rate of change. This time must have been the most prosperous age, around the mid-1800s and the late 1800s. However, by the late 1800s, the other countries, such as the US and even the British colony of Australia went ahead of them as far as income went. Therefore, we can assume that the beginning of the industrial evolution caused a lot of low-pay jobs, but towards the end, when more social classes and fields of study started to appear, some jobs started to become more valuable and of higher pay.

2. CO2 emissions since 1820.

A: This graph is between CO2 emissions (tonnes per person) and the income per person (GDP per capita, inflation adjusted). It compares the “carbon dioxide emissions from the burning of fossil fuels” with the “gross domestic product per person adjusted for differences in purchasing power (in international dollars, fixed 2005 prices).” From the beginning of the graph, you can see that the United Kingdom is ahead of everyone else, not only in the income but also in the CO2 emissions. That makes sense that it started out that way, because that was around the time of the Napoleonic Wars, and that was the time in which the English were very powerful compared to the other warring nations. It was also the start of the Industrial Revolution, where technological advances and other cheaper industry will help improve the economy. Around the mid-nineteenth century, there was a very steep increase and also very fast increase in the CO2 emission. This is where we infer that the problems started coming, especially the pollution problems. However, towards the end of the nineteenth century, the process slows down, and we can infer that that was the result of the new air-pollution reforms, since the British eventually noticed that the bad air was actually causing a lot of the diseases and illnesses that were common during that time. By the late 1800s, many countries have already caught up with Britain. They will be the “modernized superpower” countries that would dominate in the World Wars. , which is when the CO2 emissions will increase once more.

3. Smaller families longer lives until 1830s.

This graph is between life expectancy at birth in years and children per woman (total fertility). It compares “the average number of years a newborn child will live if current mortality patterns were to stay the same” with “the number of children that would be born to each woman with prevailing age-specific fertility rates.” In this graph, we can tell that throughout the 1800s, there were a lot of improvements, with the circle symbolizing Britain moving from the right side all the way to the middle. There’s always a jiggly feeling to the circle, since the two indicators seem to be inversely related. When life expectancy increases, there are less children given birth to, and vice versa. Therefore, it moves up, but after a few years, it goes down. Similarly, it moves right, but then after a while,it quickly moves left. There are several times this happens. Therefore, I infer that it was because of the cholera outbreaks or the epidemics that started to blossom during the late nineteenth century. The time was perfect for disease, since population expanded very quickly, and also, the sanitary conditions during those times was very unhygienic. However, during the late 1800s and early 1900s, there  must have been economic prosper, since there seems like a faster development. However, all this crashed with the end of World War I, 1918. It recovers, but also drops down in life expectancy at WWII.

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact relates to the Universe through a Telescope and the Universe through a Microscope. Although there is no direct relationship in the literal meaning, but rather that we are looking at Britain from a distant way, looking at it as an overall, throughout many years and only at certain aspects. This is just like looking through a telescope or a microscope.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: This artifact also relates to Human Health, and Building of the Modern Economy. All three of the graphs dealt with either life expectancy or fertility rate, which are both very much related to human health. The money involved in the “income” indicator has to do with the economy that was building and changing during the nineteenth century Britain.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose these three artifacts because I believed that they were very inter-related, and can easily be used to look at the harsh conditions of the nineteenth century Britain, as well as mark the progress throughout the century that transformed from the country-side towns to the modern big cities. This took around 3 hours of doing, a bit less than others because I had already acquired information on the Industrial Britain from other artifacts or other readings.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: It seems like the first part of the century, the middle of the century, and the end of the century were very different. The first part was the innovative part, where they were starting to rely on machinery. The middle part was the part where they started to realize the problems that they were having and starting to do research and development on solving the problems. The end was the result of these changes. All these will eventually accumulate into the modernized cities that took part in WWI.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: Certainly, this artifact does reflect my best work and ideas. For some reason, I really liked interpreting the graphs, finding out what was underneath the underneath, below the below. Therefore, I think that I did pretty well in recognizing patterns and relating these patterns to historical happenings or theoretical events, forming connections.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for hte following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 4! Finally, a more creative form of analysis!

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment A: 4! This was DEFINITELY fun!

c) Impact on your learning A: 2.5. Even though I may not have known the exact statistics, I could at least figure out and predict the likely paths of the bubbles based on what I had already researched on and learned about. Therefore, I guess there weren’t too many new things.

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: 3. The statistics and the gap minder project was created by someone else, and I suppose that they created them the way there were as to help show the audience what is implied, therefore, maybe I’m only seeing what they want us to see.

6. Any additional comments.

Nope.

Artifact 14: Research Collaboration and Video Presentation

On Eugenics

The first part of the video presentation: http://www.mediafire.com/?l224q3x71m6ka5p

The second part will be up soon!

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

A: This artifact is related to “Evolution: Science and Religion.” Our main focus was to find out what the pros and cons of eugenics were.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

A: Other topics that this artifact relates to include looking at the universe through a telescope and looking at the universe through a microscope.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: It was the group project. We chose the topic “Darwin and his theory of evolution through natural selection” because we were all interested in it, and could find out a way to incorporate it into all of our portfolios. We spent quite a lot of time, and still hasn’t finished it yet!

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

A: Insights and understanding that I have gained from the creation and/or processing of this artifact mostly revolves around how evolution developed, and why it caused so much trouble and controversies. Most importantly, is how so many debatable topics and crises branched out from one topic alone. That is very interesting.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

A: Due to technological limits and also limits in money allowed to spend on, we weren’t able to present our information in the way we wanted to. However, I think that we did have pretty good ideas.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment

c) Impact on your learning

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any additional comments

Artifact 15: Student-Created Timeline

The Ultimate Timeline of British History

20 Events that were very important to the history of Britain during the Nineteenth Century

January 1, 1801: United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland Created.

The Union with Ireland Act, and the Act of Union (Ireland) 1800 were passed on July 2, 1800 and August 1, 1800. They united the Kingdom of Great Britain and the Kingdom of Ireland, thus creating the United Kingdom of Great Britain on January 1, 1801. Before this, Ireland was in personal union with England. In 1707, England and Scotland had already united into the single Kingdom of Great Britain, singling the Kingdom of Ireland out. It was in the same year that the Parliament of Ireland started requesting an union. It was until the late 1700s that the British government started to get in action to merge.

1807: Britain Declares Slave Trade Illegal

On March 25, 1807, the “An Act for the Abolition of the Slave Trade,” also known as “The Slave Trade Act,” was put into action. It abolished slave trade in the whole British Empire, but not the act of slavery itself.  The British law came into force on May 1, 1807. Soon after, other countries started to ban slave trade as well.
1812-1815: War of 1812

The War of 1812 was a war between the United States and Britain. The reasons for war mostly centered around the kidnapping of American merchants by the British sailors, thus affecting the trade. Also, the British supported the Indians against American expansion. Thus, American honor and pride was humiliated. This war is well known because it was during this war the America’s current national anthem, “The Star Spangled Banner,” was written by Francis Scott Key. British casualties in the war ended up with 1,600 killed in action and 3,679 wounded; 3,321 British died from disease. Casualties on America’s side were 2,260 killed in action and 4,505 wounded. Moreover, man more slaves escaped to Britain when they offered freedom. The end of the War of 1812 marked the Era of Good Feelings in America. This war led to the new era of peaceful trading conditions.


April 11, 1812-Attack on Rawfolds Mill

On April 11, 1812, Rawfolds Mill was attacked by a group of men. Although they were not successful and two men died, it caused a lot of commotion. This was mostly due to the Luddite movement during that time. William Cartwright, the owner of his mill, seemed to know that something was going to happen, and dispatched red army troops to guard his place. Therefore, the Luddites weren’t able to get through much of the land beyond the yard. For 90 minutes, 140 musket balls were shot. The most important part was when an alarm started to ring, and large stones stated falling off the roof, as well as oil. Two men were captured and died eventually. They were Samuel Hartley and John Booth, who seemed to have worked for the mill in the past. Even though the attack on Rawfolds Mill wasn’t successful in destroying the machinery, it did get the large factory owners to start worrying, and began ordering more armed troops down to guard their factories.

1815: Napoleon War Ends

The British were considered the only nation to not have suffered heavy casualties from the Napoleon Wars. The Napoleon Wars were merely an extension of the French Revolution and also France’s conflict with Britain. June 18 was one of the most important defeats of the French by Britain. It was the Battle of Waterloo. Because of Britain’s strength and position in and after the Napoleon War, Britain was able to become very powerful. Not only did technological development advance within the country, so did the industries.


1819: Six Acts

The Six Acts describe six acts that were passed during Britain in 1819 that aimed at reducing the radical newspapers, large organized meetings, and possible armed rebellions. The six acts are: Training Prevention Act (or Unlawful Drilling Act), Seizure of Arms Act, Misdemeanors Act, Seditious Meetings Prevention Act, Blasphemous and Seditious Libel Acts, and the Newspaper and Stamp Duties Act. The Training Prevention Act or the Unlawful Drilling Act outlaws any type of private military training.  The Seizure of Arms Act gives local authorities to seize and arrest the local private weaponry owners or manufacturers. The Misdemeanors Act strove to speed up the process of the court and justice. The Seditious Meetings Prevention Act required meetings of over 50 people concerning church and state matters to consult with local authorities and receive permission. The Blasphemous and Seditious Libel Acts reinforced the law and court sentence against people that commit libel. The Newspaper and Stamp Duties Act attempted to make the system of publication a lot longer, harder, and also more expensive with added tax and more processes to go through.
1824: Combination Laws Revoked.

The Combination Laws, also known as “An Act to prevent Unlawful Combinations of Workmen” and first introduced in 1799 , outlawed any kind of association or union of workers and laborers, the government in fear of rebellion. That was around the time where the Luddites started to pump up, as well as Britain recovering and repairing itself from war casualties. When the Combination Laws were repealed, large unions started to form, and it seems like the working class was starting to gain more power and rights back.
1829: Catholic Relief Act

The Roman Catholic Relief Act was one of several acts that aimed at the catholic emancipation during that time in Britain. It was one of several combined efforts to reduce or remove the limitations and restrictions set on the Catholics in Britain. More specifically, this act permitted members of the Catholic Church to take office within the parliament of the Westminster. It was primarily started by Daniel O’Connell, who had won a seat through an election. The bill was drafted by Sir Robert Peel, and further reinforced by the Duke of Ellington, who managed to make the King sign it.

1832: Reform Act

More officially called the “An Act to amend the representation of the people in England and Wales,” the Reform Act of 1832 was proposed by the Whig Party of Britain, led by the Prime Minister Lord Grey. The act allowed the large cities that sprung up during the Industrial Revolution the right to hold seats in the House of Commons, and took away those of the less popular or populated areas. It also caused the number of individuals allowed to vote from a 50% to a 80%, meaning around one of every six adult males in that population of around 14 million.
1833-1901: Victorian Era

The Victorian Era refers to the time in which Queen Victoria was in reign, a period of prosperity for the people of Britain. Most notably, trade and industry improved greatly. The era also saw to the growth of a scholarly and educated middle class. From the Victorian Era came a plethora of famous authors of the Gothic and Classical literature, such as Charles Dickens, Jane Austen, Lord Tennyson, and Sir Aurthur Conan Doyle.  This period is often referred to as the Pax Britannica, due to the long period of peace. The conditions were so well that the population doubled in size. The two main political parties during this time were the Whigs and the Tories. However, there were problems as well, such as the infamous extreme use of child labor and also prostitution.
1838: People’s Charter

The People’s Charter was the main document or system of guidelines that was developed by the popular-growing chartism during the nineteenth century Britain. It included 6 aims: first, right of voting for all adult men 21 years of age, with a sound or sane mind; second, the idea that ballots were secret and that the voter’s decision should be kept private and protected; third, the proper payment of workers; fourth, equal constituencies; and fifth, that the parliament be annual in order to prevent bribery and intimidation.
August 29, 1842: Treaty of Nanking

This is the first of several unequal treaties that were put on China by the superpowers during that time. The Treaty of Nanking was what officially ended the First Opium War(1839 to 1842). The West was starting to dig into the Far East, and Britain particularly demanded a balance of trade with China, and so it ended up with opium for tea or spices. When the government started to realize the harm of opium on its population, it rebelled. Twice, in the two opium wars, conflict escalated into violence. The first opium war ended with the Treaty of Nanking. All of the following were included in the Treaty of Nanking: establishment of the port cities of Canton, Amoy, Foochowfoo, Ningpo, and Shanghai; possession in perpetuity of Hong Kong; sum of 6,000,000 dollars that substituted for the value of the opium that was dumped into the ocean; and a total of 21,000,000 dollars paid over the next three years with an interest rate of 5 % per year.
1840: Vaccination For the Poor

There were several Vaccination Acts that took place in Britain during this time. They included the acts of 1840, 1853, 1867, 1871, and 1873, as well as several other similar acts that followed the Vaccination Acts. The Vaccination Act of 1840 made variolation illegal, but at the same time provided optional free vaccination. It wasn’t until the Vaccination Act of 1853 that vaccination is made mandatory to all citizens. Science regarding the safety of vaccination started to arise and cause controversies during that time. Most of the concerns that actually started the whole health/medical crisis was the spread of small pox. Starting from the mid-1800s, the governments began to make vaccination a more public operation.

1845-1852: Irish Potato Famine

The Irish Potato Famine, also known as the Great Famine, was a time where the potato blight disease wiped out most of the potato crops, leading to wide-spread famine and emigration. The Irish population dropped by around 20 to 25%. It was especially important because the Irish, along with many other European countries, relied on the potato greatly as a main food source. Therefore, when the famine occurred, approximately 1 million people died. It makes sense that this was probably considered the biggest catastrophe in Irish history. It is incorporated into heroic stories and folktales of Irish tradition.
1848: Public Health Act

The Public Health Act was an act passed by the British government to help improve the sanitary environment of the heavily polluted areas during that time. The plan included the repairing of the water supply, sewage systems, drainage, and cleansing systems. These changes generally took place in cities all over Britain with a few exceptions, such as London and also the larger cities that have already underwent sewage repair. The Public Health Act also helped with forming the General Board of Health, or the central authority in this area regarding public health, as well as local committees dedicated to improving the conditions.
1851: Great Exhibition in London

The Great Exhibition, also commonly known as the Great Exhibition of the Works of Industry of all Nations or Crystal Palace Exhibition, was the first of several international World’s Fair exhibitions on the culture and industrial development of large and powerful countries of that time, as well as to celebrate the great advances that Britain had in the technology of industry. The Great Exhibition at London was held at Hyde Park from May 1st to October 15th,1851. It eventually led to many other similar exhibitions.

November 24, 1859: The Origin of the Species Published.

The Origin of the Species was written by Charles Darwin. This book described his theory of evolution through natural selection, as well as his observations on his trip via the HMS Beagle at the Galapagos Islands. Darwin observed that the finches on various islands looked a bit different, such as in size and form of their beaks, adapted to eat different kind of prey on the different islands. Therefore, he developed his idea of evolution: First, species change over time. Second, all species share common ancestors. Third, this process is slow, gradual, and takes a long time. According to Darwin, the main driver of these three things in natural selection. Natural selection depended no four points: inheritance, variation, high rate of population growth, and differential survival and reproduction. He included his ideas in his book. On November 25, 1859, The Origin of Speices was published.
1862: Victor Hugo’s Les Miserables Published.

Victor Hugo’s Les Miserables described the ideal of a benevolent, socially minded industrial system. Victor Hugo talked about the unfortunates, rejected by society. He also talked about how the world would have been if those in charge had paid more attention to the interests of the workers hired. The book is about an ex-convict, Jean Valjean, who tries to carve out some good in the world that he lived in. Again, Victor Hugo’s world was merely an ideal.
August 15, 1867: Second Reform Act

Also known as the Reform Act of 1867 and officially titled Representation of the People Act, the Second Reform Act aimed at allowing votes to the laboring or working class. The bill increased the amount of votes from one million to two million out of 5 million. The act also abolished the previous need of adding tax when workers pay their rent to their landlords.
1874: The British East India Company Dissolves.

The East India Stock Dividend Redemption Act on January 1st, 1874, caused the dissolution of the British East India Company, ending a long period of a lot of power. The start of its power loss can be traced back to the Great Mutiny, also known as the First War of Independence, where Indians started rebelling against the British rule in India. It continued to deal with tea and other products until its dissolution in 1874. However, the title remained after that. Eventually, the company was reestablished.

(click for a larger picture of the timeline)

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

This  artifact is related to the Human Mind. It is related because my objective in creating this timeline was not only to learn more about the history, but also about the mindset of the social classes during that time, and how that related to their actions. The timeline was able to help me in finding that out.

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

This artifact also deals with the Notion of the Frontier, Human Movement and Migration, and Nationalism: Creation of the Nation-state. The nineteenth century was one of the greatest leaps in development, and brought about one of the biggest changes since the start of civilization.

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

A: I chose the different events in the artifact because I believed that they are best at showing the process of thought change. The people in Britain changed their focus throughout the century. It took around 2 days to create this artifact and process it, including the research.

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

It seems like the beginning of the 19th century was an era of turmoil and a reach for stability, people fighting for their values and what they want. However, towards the middle and the end, it seemed that the wars settle out, and that people are rebuilding their countries, leading into an era of enlightenment-like thinking. People start developing new ideas on art, industry, and the proper government system.

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

This artifact does reflect my best work because I really like learning about past events in history. That’s why I really liked this activity.

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for the following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio. A: 4. It certainly gave more structure to it.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment A: 4. Timelines are fun, well-organized, and easy to refer to in the future, so I had fun doing something like this.

c) Impact on your learning A: 5. Researching for the timeline certainly took a lot of time, but at the same time, I learned about a lot of new things.

d) Level of creativity and originality. A: 2. I guess a timeline can’t be too creative since it is formatted, and the top 20 events are pretty limited.

6. Any additional comments

Nope!

Artifact 16: An Original Prezi

My Photo Gallery

My prezi is at the following link: http://prezi.com/cc1m9th6q1ct/artifact-16-an-original-prezi-my-photo-gallery-d/

Please comment and subscribe! Feel free to comment here or on the prezi website!

By the way, the reflections are also on the prezi 😉

If you want better photographs (and also worse ones) that were taken alongside the ones displayed on the prezi, please visit my Facebook site! The link is at the right-side column.

Enjoy!

NOTE: FROM NOVEMBER 4TH, 2010 ON, ALL PHOTOGRAPHS WILL BE MOVED TO THE PICASA LINK WHICH I WILL POST HERE:

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Artifact 17: Compare and Contrast Two Historical Figures

Disraeli and Gladstone: Complaint Speech to the Parliament

Reflections:

1. a) Which main topic does the artifact relate to? In what ways?

b) Which other main topics does it also relate to?

2. Why did you choose this artifact, and how much time did you spend creating and/or processing it?

3. What insights and understanding have you gained form the creation and/or processing of this artifact?

4. Does this artifact reflect your best work and/or ideas? Why, or why not?

5. Rate this artifact on a scale of -5 to 5 (0 being neutral) for hte following:

a) Impact on quality of your portfolio.

b)Impact on your level of happiness/enjoyment

c) Impact on your learning

d) Level of creativity and originality

6. Any additional comments

Rubrics:

My Personal Rubric–

There are 4 criteria that are listed below, organized by the alphabet. Each criteria has sub-levels, the number showing the score that corresponds with the description:

A. Reflections– Shows thoughts, ideas, and has learned something.

  1. Nothing
  2. Reflection is incomplete.
  3. AVERAGE: Student has completed reflection.
  4. Reflections show that student has learned something.
  5. Shows that the student has thought things over carefully.

B. Organization– Easy to read and comprehend.

  1. Nothing.
  2. Not very organized.
  3. AVERAGE: Organized. Text is visible.
  4. Well-organized. Variation in text shows classification.
  5. Very well-organized. Easy for reader to follow and navigate. Text is easy to comprehend.

C. Creativity–Uses more than one kind of media.

  1. Nothing
  2. Only one kind of media
  3. AVERAGE: Follows requirements on media type.
  4. More creative, but still follows requirements.
  5. Very creative, a break-through. Uses more than the required media. It demonstrates new perspectives to an issue.

D. Completion–Thoroughly done and completed artifacts.

  1. Nothing.
  2. Incomplete artifacts.
  3. AVERAGE: Follows requirements.
  4. Completed with quality.
  5. Beyond expectations, with extras and tidbits.
help! Help” – I know all, and I will tell all!
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Story of Taiping Rebellion


I have walked the face of earth for centuries.

My light footsteps followed that of history and its famous men, and I am wise and knowledgeable.

As the deity of the wind with erratic behavior, I have befriended the living world for a long time. Thus, I know of a world very unlike the one that exists today. Although it may be hard to believe, I did once trudge upon meadows and fields of oil-green grass; a time where the food production was enough for the people of the Motherland to maintain their survival. I carried the seeds and planted them into the rich soil. Out of the rich soil would grow magnificent flowers and charming blossoms, their beauty beyond the extent of language.

But now? Replacing the fertile land are barren fields that lay lazily beside dry riverbeds. No longer seen are happy faces of the people. Slowly, death starts to take over. First one life is lost here, then there. Next, more and more people start to face their end, one after another; and soon enough, there will be whole populations dying off. Those that survived were preyed on by the bandits. Yet, there was monstrous population increase, and this leads to more mouths needed to feed. Now, famine plagues the whole terrain from the unpredictable droughts and floods. Despite how much the people try to bring food and other sacrifices to please my old friends the agriculture deities, there seems to be no obvious difference. Perhaps the deities aren’t too impressed with the conditions. Anyways, China is a living terror, a living nightmare.

I have visited the households of many of the people. Life seems to be really difficult. The people looks slim and ill. Many people are starved. Of course, these people are the majority—the peasant and the farmer communities. However, the middle class is still able to survive fairly well. Not to say, the highest class, the Qing officials and courtiers, have the best quality of living. In fact, they seem to be having a life too well off. Based on what I hear from old women talking with their husbands about politics, corruption of officials were as abundant as bamboo after spring rain. As you have probably noticed, I choose mostly to stay around the peasant communities in the rural countrysides, as they seem to have very interesting stories and backgrounds worth eavesdropping on.

I remember that there were many times in which I encountered the girl who knelt before her ancestors’ shrine. I would stand idly off to the side and listen to the skinny girl talk to her ancestors about her experiences. Of course, I’m not sure if her ancestors heard her talks, since it’d be scary if they did answer back, but I paid attention to this peculiar girl. One time, for example, she complained about all her relatives and friends moving away, only to never be seen again. “I asked them where they were going,” she said, “and then they just kept talking about hope of land beyond the waters and exploring the surroundings.” I guess the reason that I was attracted to her was because she owned a trait that other people did not necessarily embody: hope.

The girl often talked about a mysterious man. Several times, she mentioned the name “Hong Xiuquan.” Based on what she says, Hong Xiuquan was a man that had failed repeatedly to pass civil service examinations. Because of that, Hong fell into serious illness once. During that time, he had a vision of God, and he finally realized that he was the brother of Jesus Christ. He starts advocating “holy war,” claiming that God had given him the job to exterminate the demons of the foreign government and to establish a kingdom of peace for his people. He brought together his fellow Hakka people, as well as several other tribespeople to form a rebel army against the Manchus government, who, according to them, were responsible for all these disasters. His loyal brothers cut off their queues, and allow their hair to grow long. to resemble the style of the previous Ming traditions. He sets up new beliefs, which are, in my opinion, very similar to Western religions like Christianity.

When Hong talked about his mission to exterminate demon worship, I think that he was referring to me—the idea that the deities were demons. Based on what I hear from others that think and talk about him, Hong believed in the “single God” idea, which is very westernized and similar to Abrahamic religious views. Perhaps I should hate him. But I don’t. I have just seen too many people in history with peculiar views. Villagers refer to him as some kind of charismatic and great “Heavenly King.” He certainly has great confidence in himself, since he once wrote in a poem called The Poem on Executing the Vicious and Preserving the Righteous that: “Holding the Universe in the hand, I slay the evil, spare the righteous, and relieve the suffering of the people. My eyes see through beyond the west, the north, the rivers, and the mountains; my sounds shake the east, the south, the Sun, and the Moon. The glorious sword of authority was given by Lord; poems and books are evidences that praise Yahweh in front of Him. Taiping unifies the World of Light; the domineering air will be joyous for myriads of thousand years.” In addition, he is leading these rebel armies against a government that does not seem to be good at ruling at all, considering how the foreign Manchus dealt with the opium problem and the encroaching of China’s sovereignty by foreign nations. I do feel a bit tired of all these foreigners “invading” into the territory of our ancestors, so I guess I do support these rebels a bit.

Indeed, I remember having seen these rebels in the past myself a certain number of times. Apparently, the people call them “long hairs.” I watched them march from city to city, first near the south, and the next few times closer and closer to the central and northern part of the Motherland. They took control of cities after cities. Yet, it appears that they are able to maintain good relations with the locals, even acquiring more and more people to help in their cause. But of course, the Qing government finally does something about these rebels, much to the despair of the people. Gory and with high casualties rates, shrieks of despair and horror often filled the bloodstained streets from the Qing government’s actions. No wonder the rebels receive that much support. Of course, these are followed by more acts of sin, events that I have personally witnessed and have left a large impression in my memory.

That is, the executions.

Executions is not the right term, because many people label these “brave” and “courageous” men to have committed crime for criminal reasons. Put in the correct wording, the executions are more like sacrifices—the deaths of great men for a great cause; and the great cause is the greater good. Many of these great men, we knew. In fact, many people were victims of these “sacrifices.”
The tension in the air makes you aware of the inhuman actions around you. What people were most afraid of was probably not starvation—rather, a dread for the roll of the gong
…the symbol of death, the execution successions.
Around forty to fifty people in line per event, victims were brought in bamboo cases. Inhuman treatment all the way to their decapitation, with the crowd withdrawing silently just as they had arrived, the whole procedure was done with great dishonor for the victims. Even the mandarins wearing red, white, blue, or yellow with various ranks came, followed by musicians, armed servants, and the executioners and their assistants as though it was a ceremony of some sort. Disgusting. Oh, how the commoners hated them, those proud monsters who stood on death’s side, carrying their big razors. Arrogant they were, changing their weapons of sin and violation per three of four deaths.
The women often do not dare arrive at the public execution ground until the job is done, in fear of involvement. By the time the women got there, all that is left are the headless and mutilated corpses of the men, bathed in their own pools of blood. The barren ground was stained dark red. As was tradition, the executioners had picked up and took away the severed heads. Therefore, many of the arriving family members of the deceased were unable to recognize their family. The women mourned and sobbed along with the other unfortunate families who suffered a similar catastrophe.

These events, do no stop or discourage Hong and his group from accomplishing their goal a few years ago by capturing their capital, Nanjing, and imposing rigid discipline rules compared to those of the past onto their own system of rule. According to one of the regulations, “Those who smoke opium or tobacco, drink wine, loot, or rape will be executed.”Gambling and concubinage are also forbidden. Another change is land reform under areas of Hong’s control. The land was divided depending on household size to allow fairer land distribution, no wonder they looked slightly different. Also, women are treated more equally, allowed to keep property like land, and foot-binding was abolished. Like one of the most important documents, The Land System and the Heavenly Dynasty, stated: “All lands in the empire must be cultivated by all the people in the empire as a common concern…The purpose is to enable all the people in the empire to enjoy together the abundant happiness provided by the Heavenly Father, Lord on High, and Sovereign God. If there is land, it is to be shared by all to till; if there is any food, clothing, or money, these shall be shared by all. In this way all places will share the abundance equally and all will be equally well fed and clothed.”

Surely, Hong’s established Celestial Empire of Great Peace is very organized and does bring a lot of benefits, “saving mankind” according to some of the people’s opinions. However, such a loss of Confucianism…is it acceptable?

But does it end there? I, of all spirits, should best know about the repetitiveness of human’s mistakes and the cycles of success, having existed among humans for so long. What goes up must come down. Perhaps there may be an end to Hong’s ideal as well. I walk over to the shrine, and look over at one corner to find a startling discovery. There is a spot on the ground with a crack amid the dust and dirt. And then, from that crack, a green seedling emerges.

I have walked the face of earth for centuries.

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Humanity


What exactly is humanity?
Even more puzzling, what does it mean to be human?

This is my view: What does it mean to be “human”?

Really, there is no definition. “Human” is a very vague term for relative classification.

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INTRODUCTIONS


Often, when you meet new people, you don’t know what to say. You think back to how you met your first friends, but you can’t remember what you said. You think back to first day of school, but hardly recall anything.

I hope that this will not fit the norms. This will be a historic introduction  🙂 This shall exist even after I forget what I wrote in here, as I can always refer back here. Oh, there are so many things I can’t wait to tell you 😛

I guess the most important information that people want to know is: Who, What, When, Where, Why, and How.

Well, here it is:

WHO: My official/legal name is Tracy Jany Kao. But, of course, I have a plethora of really awesome nicknames 🙂

They include: Moo, Cow, Tray tray, Moomoo, Traymoomoo, Piecewise, Hypotenuse, Sine, Pahoehoe, Genius, Sponge Bob, Nerd, Outer-space Alien, the Lord, and many many others! They all have very interesting histories, but I guess that will come later.

WHAT: What am I? Weird question…with even weirder answers!

I am everything. I am who I am.

MUAHAHAHAHA.

I am an outerspace alien, I am a dog grandma, and I am not human. It’s just that simple.

WHEN and WHERE:  I was born near Seattle, WA, USA on November 21, 1996. However, after one year, I came back to Taiwan. I spent a little bit of time with the rest of the family in Taipei, and soon came to Kaohsiung. This is where I have been living for the past 14 years.

WHY: Why? It is my favorite question to ask. I love to learn about the secrets to things that seem like common sense, learn about the “behind the scenes” to everyday stuff. If you want to know why I am making this website, feel free to go to the page titled, “About: WHY.” 😛

HOW: How? Guess what. That is my second favorite question to ask.

Just kidding.

No, I lied. I’m serious.

Many people think that I’m crazy because I love learning, going to school, and do homework. They can’t think of any reason why I would actually spend large amounts of my precious (not really…but limited, for sure) time on these seemingly useless matters. The reason is very simple. Besides my desire for knowledge, I also love challenges. Plus, I would go insane if I have nothing to do, nothing to work on. I’m a natural participant, and making me have nothing to do is the one thing that can really drive me crazy within a few hours. (This is for those who accept the dare to try to make me psycho :P) Also, I love talking and educational discussion. Chatting is a natural part of my life, and so I LOVE THIS PART OF MY LIFE.

I SOCIALIZE. >:P MUAHAHAHA.

Enough for now, I guess.

I hope that you have fun exploring around here. If you have any more questions regarding me, I hope that you will learn more when you start following my posts and pages. Of course, always feel free to comment on anything as well :). Happy following!

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